Answer Writing in IAS Mains - How to Write "Critically Analyse" and "Evaluate" Answers - Video 2/4

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29 Aug 201911:12

Summary

TLDRThis educational video focuses on mastering answer writing for mains examinations, particularly for the UPSC. It discusses two crucial directives: 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate.' 'Critically analyze' involves a subjective, balanced approach to dissect a topic into components, providing for and against arguments, and concluding with a mild stance. 'Evaluate,' in contrast, demands an objective, evidence-based assessment, requiring academic sources to support one's verdict on arguments or research findings. The video aims to equip students with strategies for effective answer writing.

Takeaways

  • 📝 The video discusses two important directives for answer writing in exams: 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate'.
  • 🔍 'Critically analyze' does not mean to criticize but to provide a deeper insight into a topic.
  • đŸ€” Critical analysis is subjective and requires justifying one's perspective with balanced arguments for and against each component of the topic.
  • 📚 To critically analyze, break down the topic into components, discuss interconnections, and provide a balanced conclusion.
  • đŸš« Avoid taking a purely negative or positive stance; maintain a mild approach in criticism or appraisal.
  • 📊 'Evaluate' involves a quantitative, objective evaluation based on evidence, unlike subjective opinion.
  • 🔑 For 'evaluate' directives, provide evidence from academic sources to support your agreement or disagreement with the arguments or research findings.
  • đŸ—Łïž The video emphasizes the importance of academic integrity in answer writing, especially when evaluating arguments or research.
  • 📈 The example of evaluating government efforts to curb economic slowdown illustrates the need for evidence-based arguments.
  • 📚 The video series aims to help students master answer writing, with the next installment covering additional important directives.

Q & A

  • What are the two main directives discussed in the video for answer writing in mains examination?

    -The two main directives discussed in the video are 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate'.

  • What is the primary misconception about the directive 'critically analyze'?

    -The primary misconception is that 'critically analyze' means criticizing something, whereas it actually means providing a deeper insight into the subject matter without necessarily criticizing it.

  • How should one approach a question with the directive 'critically analyze'?

    -One should approach a 'critically analyze' question by breaking the topic into components, providing for and against arguments for each component, and concluding with a balanced approach that may lean towards either supporting or opposing the topic, but always in a mild manner.

  • What does the directive 'evaluate' entail in the context of answer writing?

    -The directive 'evaluate' requires a quantitative and objective evaluation based on evidence. It involves providing an opinion or verdict on the extent to which one agrees or disagrees with the arguments or research findings, supported by academic evidence.

  • Why is it important to provide evidence when answering a question with the directive 'evaluate'?

    -Providing evidence is important because it makes the evaluation objective and academic, which is essential for UPSC mains examination answers. It also adds credibility to the arguments and ensures that the evaluation is not based on subjective opinions.

  • How does one conclude an answer when the directive is 'critically analyze'?

    -When concluding an answer with the directive 'critically analyze', one should take a balanced approach, acknowledging both the pros and cons, and explicitly state whether the overall analysis supports or opposes the topic, while maintaining a mild tone of criticism or appraisal.

  • What is an example of how to apply the directive 'critically analyze' to a specific topic?

    -An example of applying 'critically analyze' could be to analyze the proposed surrogacy regulation bill by breaking it into definitions, conditions, and restrictions, providing for and against arguments for each, and concluding with a balanced view that may support or oppose the bill while highlighting areas that need improvement.

  • What are the key differences between the directives 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate'?

    -The key differences are that 'critically analyze' is subjective and requires a deeper insight with a balanced conclusion, while 'evaluate' is objective, evidence-based, and requires providing a quantitative evaluation with academic sources to support the verdict.

  • Why are the directives 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate' considered important for mains examination?

    -These directives are important because they are frequently used by UPSC in their question papers, and mastering them is crucial for scoring well in the mains examination. They test the candidate's ability to analyze and evaluate complex issues, which is a key skill for a civil servant.

  • How can one ensure their answer to an 'evaluate' directive is not subjective?

    -To ensure an answer to an 'evaluate' directive is not subjective, one must base their evaluation on evidence from academic sources, reports, or research findings, and clearly cite these sources to support their arguments and conclusions.

Outlines

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📚 Mastering Critical Analysis in Answer Writing

This paragraph introduces the concept of 'critically analyze' as an important directive in UPSC mains examination answer writing. It clarifies that 'critically analyze' does not equate to criticism but rather a deeper insight into the subject matter. The paragraph emphasizes the need for a subjective approach, where each student's analysis may differ due to inherent subjectivity. The process involves breaking down the topic into components, providing for and against arguments for each part, and concluding with a balanced approach that justifies the analysis. An example is given regarding the analysis of a surrogacy regulation bill, highlighting the need for a mild criticism or appraisal based on the arguments presented.

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🔍 Understanding the Directive 'Evaluate' in Answer Writing

The second paragraph delves into the directive 'evaluate', contrasting it with 'critically analyze' by emphasizing its objective and evidence-based nature. It explains that 'evaluate' requires a quantitative assessment supported by evidence, often from academic sources. The paragraph outlines the process of evaluating an argument or research finding, which involves agreeing or disagreeing with it to some extent and providing evidence for the stance taken. An example is provided with the question of evaluating the Government of India's efforts to curb economic slowdown, stressing the importance of academic sources and evidence in forming an argument.

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📈 The Importance of Evidence in UPSC Answer Writing

The final paragraph summarizes the importance of the directives 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate' in UPSC mains examination. It stresses the necessity of providing evidence from academic sources to support arguments, which is crucial for scoring well in the examination. The paragraph also hints at upcoming videos that will cover more directives, encouraging students to stay tuned for further guidance on mastering answer writing.

Mindmap

Keywords

💡Critically Analyze

Critically analyze refers to the process of providing a deeper insight into a topic by breaking it down into components and examining each part's pros and cons. In the video, this term is used to explain how students should approach questions that require critical analysis, emphasizing that it is not about criticizing but about providing a balanced view with a subjective touch. For instance, when discussing the surrogacy regulation bill, the video instructs to analyze its definitions, conditions, and restrictions, and then form a balanced conclusion based on the arguments for and against each component.

💡Directives

Directives in the context of the video are the specific instructions given in examination questions that guide students on how to approach their answers. The video focuses on two key directives: 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate'. These directives are crucial for students to understand as they dictate the nature and depth of the analysis required in their answers.

💡Subjectivity

Subjectivity in the video is mentioned in relation to the critical analysis directive, indicating that each student's analysis may differ based on their perspective. It is a key aspect of the 'critically analyze' directive, where students are encouraged to provide their own insights and interpretations, as long as they justify their analysis. The video clarifies that subjectivity does not mean arbitrary opinions but rather a personal yet justified perspective on the topic.

💡Components

Components, as discussed in the video, refer to the individual parts of a topic that need to be analyzed when critically analyzing. The video suggests breaking down complex topics into smaller components to provide a comprehensive analysis. For example, when analyzing a bill, one might consider its definitions, conditions, and restrictions as separate components to be individually evaluated.

💡For and Against Arguments

For and against arguments are a part of the critical analysis process where students are expected to present both the positive aspects (for arguments) and the negative aspects (against arguments) of each component of the topic. The video emphasizes the importance of providing a balanced view by considering both sides of the argument, which is essential for a thorough critical analysis.

💡Evaluate

Evaluate, as a directive, is used in the video to describe a type of question that requires a quantitative and evidence-based assessment. Unlike 'critically analyze', which is subjective, 'evaluate' demands an objective analysis supported by evidence. The video provides an example of evaluating the government's efforts to curb an economic slowdown, where the student must provide evidence from academic sources to support their evaluation.

💡Quantitative Evaluation

Quantitative evaluation is mentioned in the context of the 'evaluate' directive, indicating that the assessment should be based on measurable evidence rather than personal opinions. The video stresses that students should provide numerical data or evidence from research findings to support their evaluations, making the analysis more academic and credible.

💡Evidence-based

Evidence-based is a term used to describe the type of support required for an 'evaluate' directive. The video explains that students must back their evaluations with concrete evidence, such as reports or academic research, rather than relying on personal beliefs or assumptions. This approach lends credibility and objectivity to the analysis.

💡Academic Sources

Academic sources are emphasized in the video as the preferred type of evidence for supporting evaluations in answers. The video advises students to cite reports, research findings, or scholarly articles when providing evidence for their evaluations. This practice enhances the academic rigor of the answer and demonstrates a comprehensive understanding of the topic.

💡Balanced Approach

A balanced approach is recommended in the video for concluding answers to 'critically analyze' directives. It involves considering both the positive and negative aspects of the topic and forming a conclusion that acknowledges both sides. The video illustrates how to take a mild stance, either in support or against, while highlighting the need for improvements or acknowledging the strengths of the topic under analysis.

Highlights

Introduction to the second video in a series on mastering answer writing for mains examination.

Discussion on the first directive 'critically analyze' and its importance in UPSC exams.

Clarification that 'critically analyze' does not mean to criticize but to provide deeper insight.

Explanation of the subjectivity involved in critical analysis and the need to justify one's analysis.

Procedure for answering 'critically analyze' questions by breaking down the topic into components.

Importance of providing for and against arguments for each component in critical analysis.

The necessity of taking a balanced approach and concluding with a mild stance in critical analysis.

Example of critically analyzing the proposed surrogacy regulation bill.

Introduction to the second directive 'evaluate' and its difference from 'critically analyze'.

Emphasis on the objective and evidence-based nature of 'evaluate' directives.

Guidance on providing a quantitative evaluation with evidence from academic sources.

Explanation of how to handle questions that require agreement or disagreement with arguments or research findings.

Example of evaluating the Government of India's efforts to curb the economic slowdown.

The requirement to mention sources and reports to support arguments in 'evaluate' directives.

Summary of the importance of 'critically analyze' and 'evaluate' directives in UPSC exams.

Anticipation of the next video covering more important directives for answer writing.

Transcripts

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hello students welcome to this video

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this is the second video in a series of

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whole video in which we are helping you

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to master the art of answer writing in

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the previous video you learned about the

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three directives that help you in answer

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writing in mains examination in this

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video we are going to discuss two other

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very important directives the first

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directive that we are going to discuss

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is critically analyze and the second

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active we are going to analyze is what

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we are going to see is evaluate these

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two are one of the most favorite

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directives that UPC asked almost in

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every question or almost in every paper

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all right you can see many passed your

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question paper where they have seen

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evaluate this more critically analyze

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this he don't know directives someone a

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boss the others already had to get good

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marks in your mains answer writing chili

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let us first begin the first directive

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that is critically analyze so as you can

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see the word critically analyze it's

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make word critically many times Joe's

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student pencil writing practice nahi kar

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Joe students plainly directives Deborah

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hypotonic are they they are not able to

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understand what the word critically

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actually means and they take it

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synonymous for what criticism so the

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first and the foremost thing that you

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should remember about critically analyze

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is that critically analyze does not mean

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that you have to criticize something

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critically means that you have to give a

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deeper insight and how you are going to

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give the deeper insight what are you two

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doing critical analysis not to criticize

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but first you have to provide the answer

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or form of subjectivity this critically

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analyze is a subjective question alright

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you are the one who is critically

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analyzing aspect we are subjective

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easily here every s parent has a

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different way of critically evaluating

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or critically analyzing something and

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because it is different from each and

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every student there is an inherent

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subjectivity your critical analysis may

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be different from your friends critical

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analysis and therefore no critical

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analysis is good or bad only thing is

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that you have to justify how you are

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critically analyzing it so it is a

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subjective answer writing

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then as part of the procedure to answer

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the question related to critically

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analyze what you have to do is you have

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to break the topic in hand into

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components there's a question of the

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pooch alga which cook parts with todya

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whose question get kidnapped parts name

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was Moscow break Kuro and then what you

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have to do is you have to show an

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interconnection between the parts with

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showing the interconnection between the

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parts next thing that you have to doing

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critical analysis is that you have to

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provide for and against arguments for

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each of the component Jo component of

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exam encouraged Jo component of analysis

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Karnataka whose component kept foreign

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against arguments provide Callaghan

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along with stablishing the connection

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between each component all right

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after you establish foreign against

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argument for each part you have to

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conclude the answer to the question

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starting with critical analysis while

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you are concluding you should not just

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focus on either the pro arguments or the

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against arguments all right you don't

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have to either focus entirely on four

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arguments or entirely on against

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argument what you have to do is you have

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to take a balanced approach lick in you

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are always advise to take a position if

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you think that of a particular question

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the four arguments are more heavier than

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the against arguments then explicitly

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say that key since the pros overpower

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the cons therefore the argument stands

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or you can take the four case and if you

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think that it has more loopholes and

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negative consequences then you criticize

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it but in a very mild manner the

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criticism has to be mild or the

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appraisal has to be my yogi is question

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McDonough faces dakaru Haftarah Jukka

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don't know when ludecke REO that there

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is a good there is a bad it may be

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possible that good may be slightly

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better than bad

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bad maybe slightly more than good in

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both the cases take a mild manner say

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that yes

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since the positives are more than the

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negatives the case stands however

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however there are also negative

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consequences which need to be corrected

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all right so you are taking a balanced

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approach even taking a position all

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right

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take for example for example there is a

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question critically analyze the proposed

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sorrow giessen surrogacy regulation bill

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the question is critically analysed the

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proposed surrogacy regulation bill these

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questions of critical analysis hurt

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student alloc Booga so what you have to

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do as part of the procedure first you

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have to see what is the topic that you

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have to analyze the topic is proposal BC

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regulation bill second thing that you

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have to do is break this particular

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topic into different components there

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will be definitions there will be

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conditions of surrogacy and there will

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be restrictions on surrogacy now what

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you do is you have to provide for and

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against arguments on each part whether

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you support the definition or you don't

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support the definition whether you

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whether the conditions are good for

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surrogacy the prescribed conditions for

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surrogacy are good justified or they are

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not justified and whether the

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restrictions that are imposed on

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surrogacy whether you support them if

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you support them by whether you do not

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support them then tell why not

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so what you are doing is it body's a

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topic co-op components may break

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whatever component car a critical

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analysis term your for and against

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argument in the conclusion either you

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will support the surrogacy regulation

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bill or you will oppose it but at the

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same time in a very mild manner case a I

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cannot suppose bilko support Carrillo

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topology it is a good piece of

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legislation however there are many

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negative or negative consequences that

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may come up which need to be cured there

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which need to be prevented so this is

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what is basically known by the term that

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you have to take a conclusion or you

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have to take a position while concluding

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but in a very mild man

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so this is the critical analysis now we

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are going to discuss the second

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directive that is evaluate evaluate is

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basically a quantitative evaluation that

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is what is quantitative you are not

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giving it an subjective evaluation it is

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a objective evaluation and anything that

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is objective is always evidence-based

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you are evaluating something and

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commenting about the evaluation that you

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have done that evolution should not be

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subjective in your opinion or in

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something no you have to provide the

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evidence so any directive that is

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associated with evaluated you have to

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provide a quantitative evaluation and

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being quantitative it should be evidence

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driven you have to provide evidence for

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whatever evaluation you are doing all

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right so he will do it basically we want

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you to provide opinion or verdict with

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respect to the extent to which you agree

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or disagree with the arguments of the

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research finding of the question all

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right what it is it is actually

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provisioning of your opinion or verdict

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with respect to the extent to which

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arguments or research findings you agree

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or you disagree with so you will always

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see that this question will contain an

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argument that needs to be evaluated it

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will contain a research finding that

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needs to be evaluated now there are two

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circumstances that may happen either you

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will agree either you will agree with

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the research finding or you will agree

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with the argument or you will disagree

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with the argument in both the cases your

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evidences should not be driven

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subjectively your evidences should rest

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in some academic source all right that

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makes this question highly academic any

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question that starts with the directive

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evaluate it need to be provided

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evidences and evidences should come from

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academic sources and that

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pleases the academic question of your

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answer he will help to mention the

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reports you will have to mention the

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sources of your arguments and your

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evidences to which to some extent you

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agree or to some extent you don't agree

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now how to better understand this

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directive let us see a question which is

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a quite contemporary question and the

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question reads evaluate government of

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India's effort to curb the recent

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slowdown in Indian economy the question

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is evaluate government of India's effort

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to curb the recent slowdown in Indian

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economy this is a argument based

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question it is same as argument whether

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these particular reforms will bring a

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change in the economic slowdown scenario

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or not either you will take a position

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yes they will or they will not or you

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will take a position to some extent they

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may and to some extent they will not in

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both the cases provide the argument and

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when you are providing the argument you

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will have to provide the source of your

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argument it cannot be subjectively

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coming from your own intelligence it is

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perfectly fine but the source has to be

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mentioned if this report of the

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government has mentioned that if we go

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for relaxation of the FDI norms it can

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curb the economic slowdown to this

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extent all right so that shows that yes

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you have studied the topic in totality

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if you will not mention the sources and

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you just give non evidence based

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evaluation that is qualitative

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assessment and that will be the answer

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to the directive assessment and not

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evaluate and you will not be given the

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adequate marks that you deserve so

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summing up evaluation is simply academic

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question in which you have to either

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agree to some excellent or disagree to

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some extent and go and in both the cases

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provide the evidences for making this

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particular stand if you agree to some

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extent why provide the evidences if you

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don't take it to some extent why provide

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the evidences so without mentioning the

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reports without mentioning the sources

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without giving the credibility to your

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arguments he will not be compensated

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adequately so these are the two very

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very important directives from ups point

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of view you write paper 1 paper - paper

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3 and also paper 4 critically analyze

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and evaluate directives will be found in

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plenty of questions I hope these board

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directives are quite clear to you in the

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next video we are going to take up

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another very important directives so

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keep tuned to this platform that's all

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from my side have a great day take care

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bye

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