HOW TO GET A GRADE 9 IN GCSE ENGLISH LANGUAGE & LITERATURE (Top Tricks They Don't Tell You)

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6 Apr 202214:27

Summary

TLDRThis video offers comprehensive tips for achieving high grades in English Language and Literature. It's divided into four segments: improving analysis and mastering paragraphs for English language, and memorizing content and acing structure for English literature. The presenter emphasizes the importance of revising English language, understanding question requirements, and not relying on fixed methods like PEE. For literature, the focus is on memorizing quotes and content effectively, using blurting and summarizing on flashcards. The video also recommends watching specific YouTubers for in-depth analysis and advises on how to use exemplar essays and examiner reports to enhance writing skills.

Takeaways

  • 📝 Writing sophisticatedly is key to achieving high grades in English.
  • 🎓 To excel in English Language, focus on improving analysis and mastering paragraph structure.
  • 🕒 Time management is crucial; allocate time wisely for each question to ensure completion.
  • 🔍 Understand the requirements of each question type to prepare effectively.
  • 🚫 Avoid relying on fixed methods like PE as they may not secure high marks.
  • 🌟 Highlight language devices in your analysis to ensure you gain marks.
  • 👀 Watch recommended YouTubers like Stacy Ray, Mr. Bruff, and Mr. Sally for in-depth analysis tips.
  • 📖 Read the question paper first to know what to look for in the exam text.
  • 🖊️ Use highlighting and annotation to save time when revisiting the text for answers.
  • 📈 Track your progress by compiling your essays and seeking critical feedback from teachers.
  • 📚 For English Literature, memorize quotes that can be applied to multiple themes and characters.
  • 📑 Use blurting and summarizing on flashcards to aid in memorization and essay writing.

Q & A

  • What is the most important thing for getting a high grade in English language?

    -The transcript emphasizes that the most important thing is mastering the skill of sophisticated writing, which includes understanding lexical fields, symbolic meaning, literal meaning, and highlighting language devices in each paragraph.

  • How does the speaker recommend improving analysis in English language?

    -The speaker suggests improving analysis by focusing on deeper meanings beyond what is obvious, looking at words and their connotations, and always highlighting language devices in the text analysis.

  • What is the speaker's stance on the use of fixed methods like PE in English language exams?

    -The speaker advises against using fixed methods like PE because they are not effective for achieving high grades. Examiners can recognize these structures and they do not demonstrate creative thinking.

  • What YouTubers does the speaker recommend for improving English language skills?

    -The speaker recommends watching Stacy Ray, Mr. Bruff, and Mr. Sally for English language and literature.

  • How should one approach reading the exam insert and question paper according to the transcript?

    -The speaker advises to first look at the question paper to understand what is being asked, then read the insert with those questions in mind, highlighting language devices and making annotations to save time.

  • What is the significance of mastering paragraphs in English language exams?

    -Mastering paragraphs is crucial as it helps in writing coherent and structured essays. It involves drawing from exemplar essays, comparing one's writing to them, and implementing improvements.

  • How does the speaker suggest memorizing content for English literature exams?

    -The speaker suggests memorizing content by creating quotes that can be used for multiple characters and themes, using blurting techniques, and summarizing each poem on flashcards.

  • What is 'blurting' as mentioned in the transcript?

    -'Blurting' is a revision technique where you write down everything you know about a topic, compare it with a textbook or mind map, and add what you missed to reinforce learning.

  • How can one prepare for the unpredictability of English literature exams as described in the script?

    -One can prepare by ensuring they have quotes that are versatile for different characters and themes, doing blurting sessions, and summarizing poems on flashcards to cover a wide range of potential exam questions.

  • What is the advice given for writing a structured essay in English literature?

    -The advice is to write a point, explanation, and refer to a language device in every paragraph. It's also important to maintain a consistent quality throughout the essay and to plan or jot down points to remember during the exam.

  • How should quotes be incorporated into essay writing according to the transcript?

    -Quotes should be embedded within sentences to make the writing flow smoothly, rather than being presented as separate blocks of text. This sophisticated approach can help achieve higher grades.

Outlines

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📝 Mastering English Language and Literature

The speaker emphasizes the importance of sophisticated writing for achieving high grades in English Language and Literature. They share personal experience and strategies for improving essay quality and exam performance. The video is divided into four parts, focusing on improving analysis and mastering paragraph writing for English Language, and memorizing content and acing essay structure for English Literature. The speaker advises against relying on luck or fixed methods like PEE for English Language, and stresses the need for deep analysis and understanding of language devices to impress examiners.

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🖋️ Enhancing Paragraph Writing and Essay Skills

This paragraph delves into strategies for mastering paragraph writing in English Language exams. The speaker suggests learning from exemplar essays, comparing one's own writing to them, and seeking critical feedback from teachers. They recommend writing an essay every week and using examiner reports to understand common mistakes and what examiners look for. For English Literature, the focus shifts to memorizing quotes and content effectively by using 'blurting' techniques and creating summary flashcards for poems. The speaker also advises on how to handle unseen poetry and the importance of taking teacher feedback to heart for improvement.

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📚 Structuring Essays for English Literature

The final paragraph focuses on structuring essays in English Literature to achieve high grades. The speaker outlines a method for writing paragraphs that include a point, explanation, reference to a language device, and discussion of connotations and context. They stress the importance of maintaining quality throughout the essay to create a positive impression on examiners. The speaker also recommends reading exemplar essays to understand how high-scoring students structure their essays and to note down effective words and devices. They provide an example of how to embed quotes smoothly within sentences to enhance the sophistication of writing, which is crucial for achieving top marks in English exams.

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Keywords

💡Sophisticated writing

Sophisticated writing refers to a style of writing that is complex and nuanced, often characterized by advanced vocabulary and intricate sentence structures. In the context of the video, sophisticated writing is emphasized as a key component for achieving high grades in English exams. The script suggests that students should not rely on simple or obvious interpretations but should strive to provide deeper, more nuanced analyses in their essays.

💡Analysis

Analysis in the video refers to the process of breaking down text to understand its meaning, structure, and impact. It is a critical skill for English language exams, where students are expected to analyze unseen texts. The video suggests improving analysis skills by focusing on lexical fields, symbolic meaning, and literal meaning, and by identifying language devices within the text.

💡Paragraphs

Paragraphs are discussed in the video as the building blocks of an essay, with a focus on mastering their structure and content. The video advises on how to write effective paragraphs in English language exams, emphasizing the importance of including a point, explanation, and reference to a language device in each paragraph to ensure clarity and coherence.

💡Lexical fields

Lexical fields are groups of words that are related in meaning. The video script mentions analyzing lexical fields as part of the process of understanding the connotations and deeper meanings of words within a text. This concept is used to advise students on how to delve deeper into the text's language to achieve a higher grade.

💡Language devices

Language devices are literary techniques used by authors to convey meaning or create certain effects. The video script stresses the importance of identifying and explaining language devices in essays as a way to secure marks, as it demonstrates a deeper understanding of the text and the author's intentions.

💡Exemplar essays

Exemplar essays are high-quality essays that serve as models for students. The video encourages students to study exemplar essays to understand what constitutes excellent writing and to identify areas for improvement in their own work. By comparing their essays to exemplars, students can learn how to enhance their writing to achieve higher grades.

💡Blurting

Blurting, as mentioned in the script, is a revision technique where students write down everything they know about a topic without looking at their notes. It is used to reinforce memory and identify gaps in knowledge. The video suggests using blurting as a method for memorizing quotes and content for English literature exams.

💡Character progression

Character progression refers to the development or change a character undergoes throughout a story. The video uses the example of Sheila's transition from using 'Mommy' to 'mother' in 'Look Back in Anger' to illustrate how a single-word quote can indicate character progression and maturity, which is a key aspect to discuss in English literature essays.

💡Unseen poetry

Unseen poetry is a component of English literature exams where students are presented with a poem they have not previously studied and are required to analyze it. The video suggests practicing the skill of analyzing unseen poetry and seeking feedback from teachers to improve, as it is a skill-based component rather than one based on memorization.

💡Embedding quotations

Embedding quotations is the practice of incorporating quotes from the text seamlessly into the essay's sentences. The video provides an example of how a student essay on 'Romeo and Juliet' integrated a quote into a sentence to illustrate aggressive male behavior. This technique is praised as sophisticated and effective for achieving high grades, as it demonstrates a nuanced understanding of the text.

Highlights

Sophisticated writing is key to achieving a high grade in English.

Begin by improving your analysis skills for English language.

Mastering paragraphs is crucial for English language success.

Memorizing content is essential for English literature.

Ace your essay structure to excel in English literature.

English language requires strategic revision, not just memorization.

Time management is critical in English language exams.

Understanding the requirements of each question type is vital.

Avoid fixed methods like PE as they limit creativity.

Focus on lexical fields, symbolic meaning, and literal meaning in analysis.

Highlighting language devices in your text can secure marks.

Explaining the writer's choice of language devices is important.

Don't focus on the obvious; think deeper for better analysis.

Be unique in your responses to stand out to examiners.

Watch specific YouTubers like Stacy Ray for in-depth English tips.

Start the exam by reviewing the question paper first.

Highlighting during the exam can help you save time.

Mastering paragraphs involves learning from exemplar essays.

Writing an essay every week and getting feedback is recommended.

Track your progress by compiling your essays.

Reviewing the examiner's report can help you avoid common mistakes.

Memorize quotes that can be used for multiple themes and characters.

Blurting is an effective method for memorizing content.

Use flashcards to summarize and memorize poetry.

Practice unseen poetry as a skill and seek teacher feedback.

In literature essays, maintain consistent quality throughout.

Plan your writing or jot down notes to remember your points.

Read exemplar essays to understand how to structure your own.

Embed quotes within your sentences for a sophisticated writing style.

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this is the most important thing for

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getting a grade n in English in general

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it's just a very sophisticated way of

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writing so I really recommend that you

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start to do this if you haven't already

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now this might seem like a lot but I

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feel like this is what really got me the

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grade

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n hey guys and welcome to another video

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so in this video we're going to be

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talking about English lit and English

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Lang and how to get a grade line and

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both of them so English you either hate

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it or love it and I let's just say I

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wasn't a fan of it but I did manage to

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get good grades in both of them so in

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this video I'm basically going to be

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giving you tips and tricks on how to

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improve your grade and also how to

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improve the quality of your essays so

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let's get into it so this video is going

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to be split into four parts the first

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two parts are going to be focused on

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English language the first part is going

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to be focused on how to improve your

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analysis and the second part is going to

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be how to master your paragraphs so for

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the final two parts that's going to be

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focused on English literature the first

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part is going to be focused on how to

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memorize content and the second part is

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going to be on how to Ace your structure

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let's get into it so let's talk about

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English language and a lot of people

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think that for English language you

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don't need to revise it's just one of

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those things you walk into the exam and

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you just you know it's like it's just

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analyzing text like there's not much you

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can do for it but I'm here to tell you

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that they are wrong if you want to be

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guaranteed a good grade you have to

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revise English language and the way that

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you revise it is not the same as other

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subject so as I said before English

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language is all unseen so it's not like

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you memorize content for it what you do

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need to do is to master the skill of

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English language so please do not ignore

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your English language because if you do

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it's just like it's based on luck it's

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based on what they give you on the day

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and how you analyze that and that's just

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a very risky approach if you

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want and that's a very risky approach to

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take if you want to be guaranteed a good

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grade so what you have to understand

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about English language is that it's very

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pressed for time so you can't be wasting

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time talking about things that won't get

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you marks on certain kinds of questions

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you also need to allocate yourself time

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to each question just enough so you can

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complete all of the questions in the

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given time so what you need to

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understand is what is required of you

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for each question so some questions are

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going to be multiple choice and they

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just require you to do read and

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comprehension some questions do require

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comparison some questions require deeper

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analysis and some questions require

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creative writing so you do need to know

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what you're going to be getting on each

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paper just so you're prepared and you're

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in the right mindset for it English

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language is more of a skill once you get

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your structure down you probably

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guaranteed a good grade but you

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shouldn't focus on us these very fixed

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methods such as PE because these are not

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effective in getting you a good grade

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The Examiner knows when you're using

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these kind of structures and it just

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shows that you're not thinking

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creatively you're just following a fixed

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structure and it's probably not going to

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get you those higher marks so when you

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analyze something you should be focused

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on lexical Fields symbolic meaning

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literal meaning you should be looking at

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the words and the connotations that they

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have you should also always highlight a

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language device in each paragraph and if

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you can't just focus on the meaning of

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the words because language devices will

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always guarantee marks and if you

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explain why the writer has chosen to use

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this device and what it shows then

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you'll definitely be explaining what the

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examiner wants you to explain this is

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the most important thing for getting a

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grade n in English in general first of

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all don't focus on what is obvious to

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you so don't just go to what jumps in

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your head immediately try to think of

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things deeper than what is in the

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question even if it sounds like complete

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and utter rubbish if you make it sound

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nice then the examiner will think oh wow

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this person's really pushing themselves

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they're really thinking deeper they're

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really going into this extract because

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if you just do simple things everyone

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else is doing it and thousands of people

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are sting these exams every single year

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so the examiners are just going to get

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tired of people repeating the same thing

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over and over so you really want to make

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sure that you're unique in what you say

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to improve your exam teue in English

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language I really recommend that you

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watch these YouTubers so I'm talking

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about Stacy Ray I'm talking about Mr

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Bruff and I'm talking about Mr Sally but

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Stacy Ray is so underrated so definitely

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be sure to check her out for English lit

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and language because she goes into depth

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like the things that she says like I

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would have never have thought about it

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that way so definitely be sure to check

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her out so let's say your exam has

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started they give you the insert and

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they give you the question paper the

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first thing that you should be opening

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is the question paper you want to look

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at all of the questions in the entire

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paper and see what they're asking you to

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do bear this in mind when you're reading

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the insert when you're reading the

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insert if you read the question before

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beforehand you know what to look for it

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will be in the back of your mind you

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won't just be going in blinds you won't

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just be reading this exract like you

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would any other book you just need to

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focus on what they are asking you so

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that you can prepare yourself for that

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what I used to save time is whenever I

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saw a language device or something that

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really stood out to me I highlighted it

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a lot of examiners say that you

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shouldn't use highlights in your exams

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and you shouldn't use it in the actual

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exam paper on the insert you can

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highlight that you can do whatever you

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want to that because they're not going

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to take that and they're not going to

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mark it and you don't even put your name

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on it so if you need a highlighter to

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make things stand out and bring a

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highlighter into the example just don't

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use it on anything else other than the

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insert make sure you just do a quick

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annotation so that when you actually

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going back to the question you won have

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to waste time looking through the insert

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because as I said before you are pressed

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for time in these papers let's move on

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to how to master your paragraphs for

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English language to master the way that

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you write things you want to draw from

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other people that's not to say copy them

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completely because like just don't but

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I'm just saying that you want to start

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looking at what Exemplar essays are

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doing and look at you're writing and

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then see what is missing you should also

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do the same questions as these people

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are doing in the Exemplar essays so

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before you read the exampler essay you

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should try to attempt that question and

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then compare your writing to their

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writing and then fix what is missing

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what is missing is essentially what is

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stopping you from getting that grade

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nine so you need to focus on that and

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then you should start implementing that

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in your own writing now this might seem

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like a lot but I feel like this is what

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really got me the grade n it's basically

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write an essay questions every single

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single week yep every single week and

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giving them to your teacher for critical

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advice you do not want them to sugarcoat

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anything you want them to tell you what

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is good okay but mostly focus on what is

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there to improve because that's how you

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improve in all of your gcss you need to

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focus on your weaknesses every essay

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that you do you should see a gradual

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increase in the quality of your writing

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and you should take it as a step towards

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getting a better grade compile these

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essays and don't lose them these are

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very important you want to track your

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progress and you don't want to forget

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things that you initially missing

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because that is what got you the better

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grade in the first place when you do p

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papers for English language you also

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want to take a look at the examiner

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report The Examiner report is basically

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a report written by the examiners which

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focuses on what everyone did that year

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of the past paper it focuses on what

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people did good and what people also

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made mistakes on when you get to know

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these mistakes you can avoid them in

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your own writing and it just helps you

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to see what the examiner is truly

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looking for and what also gets people

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good grades so whenever you do past

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papers first do the paper are blinds

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like don't look at any of the Exemplar

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essays don't look at any of the

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examiner's report just focus on doing

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the exam paper blind as you would with

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any other exam paper because English is

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subjective it's really hard to mark your

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own paper so I wouldn't recommend doing

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that but this examiner's report does

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help you to see where you've gone wrong

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okay so now moving on to English

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literature the problem with English

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literature is that you have to memorize

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a lot of quotes and a lot of content for

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each theme and character but there's

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only one topic that actually comes up in

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the exam there therefore the way to

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memorize content for plays and novels is

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to make sure you have quotes that you

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can use for multiple different

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characters and multiple different themes

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so try to get a quote that covers at

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least one character and one theme of the

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story don't forget that you can even use

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quotes that are just one word only for

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example one that is really easy to

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memorize for unexpected course is how

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Sheila goes from using the word Mommy to

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using mother towards the end of the play

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this shows her character progression and

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how she's matured throughout the play so

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the way that you can memorize quotes and

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context is to do blurting and I'm sure

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you've heard of blurting before is

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basically when you write down everything

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you know on a piece of paper and then

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you compare it to a textbook or your own

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mind map you add in what you missed with

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another pen and as you repeat this

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you'll end up learning more content over

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time and rememberize more quotes that

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you can use in your essay the way that

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I'll go about doing this is that I will

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make a A4 summary of each character and

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theme I personally use Stacy Ray's

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videos to do this cuz her analyst is so

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good and it just summarizes everything

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in just like a 10-minute video so

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definitely watch on each character and

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each theme for the books that you're

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doing and then after I did that I used

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it as a template to blur when I finished

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I look back on this m map and I included

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things that I missed out and it

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basically just helped me to know

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everything over time if you do this for

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every theme and every character then you

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ultimately prepare yourself for anything

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even if they use a theme that you

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weren't expecting you should hopefully

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have enough quotes and enough contents

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from the other themes and characters

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that you were able to answer this

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question after you blur to make the

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revision session extra productive why I

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recommend you do do is to write a

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question on the theme or character you

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just blurted and this will just help you

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to memorize it in the long term because

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not only are you testing that you know

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it you're also testing that you can

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write about it so ultimately this will

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help you improve your grade for the poem

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Anthology I really recommend that you

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Summarize each poem on a little flash

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card and then you can use this to blur

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you can turn it over and then write down

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on a piece of paper what the poem is

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about what the structure is whether it

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uses a certain writing style the main

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devices the main quotes and then this

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will just help you to know everything by

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the time it's the exam so that when you

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get that random poem that you have to

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compare to you already have most of the

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content of the other poem already in

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your head for things such as unseen

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poetry this is ultimately a skill just

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like English language you just have to

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practice and then you should give in

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papers to your teacher so that they can

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mark it and make sure you take their

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feedback on board even if you get like a

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bad grade and you're in a bad mood just

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focus on the feedback that they give you

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cuz ultimately they do want the best for

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you and they do want you to improve so

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try not to take anything heart just use

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this feedback as motivation to do better

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and to get a better grade next time

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let's move on to how to is your

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structure in English literature when you

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write a paragraph you should always

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write a point explanation you should

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also refer to a language device explode

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this device and what it means talk about

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the connotations of words and also talk

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about the context that the quote is from

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make sure that you do this in every

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paragraph you really want to go in in

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every single paragraph you don't just

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want to start off of a nice paragraph

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and throughout the essay start to

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decrease your quality you want to have a

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good all around essay because ultimately

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this determines the perception that the

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examiner has of you like if you start

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off with a really good paragraph and

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then you just start to lose all of this

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analysis and quality throughout the

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essay The Examiner is not going to be

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that impressed and it's the same the

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other way around if you start off really

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bad and then your last paragraph is

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really good they can only award you so

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many marks so just focus on trying to

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have an all round good essay so you

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might want to plan what you're going to

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write in your head beforehand or just do

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a little bit of jotting again you don't

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have that much time but something that

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used to happen to me a lot is that I

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would have a good point and then I would

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forget it Midway through the questions

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so it was just really annoying for me so

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just make sure that you don't do that

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and that if you know you have a habit of

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forgetting things whilst you're doing

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the exam then just drop things down even

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if it takes that extra 2 minutes that's

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better than not having anything to write

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when you com to the question to a your

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structure what you want to do is to read

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Exemplar essays I've talked about this

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so many times that you're probably

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getting tired of it honestly what you

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want to do is just to see where you're

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missing out on marks and how people who

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are getting grade NES are structuring

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their essays because that's what you

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want to aim for with subjects such as

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science and maths what you want to aim

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for is the MTH scheme but with English

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there's not really any clear-cut MTH

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scheme what you want to aim for is what

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other people are doing that is getting

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them the nines and getting them the

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eights just start to note down their

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structure and then apply it to the

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question that you have when you reading

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these essays and you see a word that's

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like wow I really need to start putting

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that essay make sure you write it down

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you might want to make a Word document

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where you just summarize all of these

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really good words and devices that you

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can use in your own writing because if

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you're just reading all of these essays

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and then you move on from it without

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making any notes it's not not going to

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stick and it's just going to be like a

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waste of time so just make sure that you

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always make notes from these essays and

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always write down the keywords that you

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think are really sticking out to you and

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really increase the quality of their

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writing so you always want to be quoting

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in every paragraph when I was writing

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essays I really like to implement my

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quotes within a sentence so what I mean

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by this is I wouldn't just say the

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quotation blah blah blah states that

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blah blah blah I would just try to embed

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it in the sentence so that it reads

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smoothly for example this is a sentence

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that I found in an exampler essay about

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Remy and Juliet the question was

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basically asking about how Shakespeare

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presents aggressive male behavior in

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Remy and Juliet so the student writing

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the essay basically Compares Samson to

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the other male characters by Samson

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joking about how his naked weapon is out

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before engaging in a quarrel illustrates

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the way that the men in the context of

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the play display their masculinity can

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you see how that sentence just flows

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like if you were just listening to me

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reading it without seeing it you would

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think that it was just a normal sentence

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without quotations but basically they

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implemented the quotations within the

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sentence it's just a very sophisticated

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way of writing so I really recommend

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that you start to do this if you haven't

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already just you can use onew quotations

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throughout your sentences and even like

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more than one word as this student has

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shown I don't know it just radiates like

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grade n material grade8 material so just

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start to do this this is much better

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than for example if the student said

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this Samson says in act one scene one my

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naked weapon is out this demonstrates

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how he explains his masculinity you can

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see the big difference between the two

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so if you are the second student and you

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write like this to improve you basically

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want to act like the first student and

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just start embedding your quotations

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throughout your text you don't need to

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just have one quote and then leave it at

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that you really want to start doing this

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thing where you embed quotes throughout

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your paragraphs and you explode those

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quotes forur so that's pretty much it

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