Parallel Structure in Writing

Summary

This video explains the concept of parallel structure in writing, emphasizing the importance of maintaining consistent grammatical patterns in sentences. It covers three key rules: using parallel structure with coordinating conjunctions (like 'and' or 'but'), when writing lists or series, and during comparisons or contrasts. The video also provides strategies for proofreading, such as checking the consistency of elements around conjunctions and using lists to verify parallelism. By adhering to parallel structure, writers can improve the flow and clarity of their writing.

Takeaways

• 😀 Parallel structure is the repetition of a chosen grammatical form within a sentence.
• 😀 Ensuring all items in a sentence follow the same grammatical pattern creates parallel construction.
• 😀 You get to choose the grammatical form, but once chosen, consistency is key within the sentence.
• 😀 Rule #1: Parallel structure is used when elements are joined by coordinating conjunctions (e.g., 'and', 'but').
• 😀 Example of incorrect parallel structure: 'I'm allergic to the dog's hair and how it smells.' Corrected: 'I'm allergic to the dog's hair and its smell.'
• 😀 Rule #2: Parallel structure should be used when writing elements in a list or series.
• 😀 Example of incorrect structure: 'The class valued respect, honesty, and being on time.' Corrected: 'The class valued respect, honesty, and promptness.'
• 😀 Rule #3: Parallel structure is essential when comparing or contrasting elements (e.g., 'A is better than B').
• 😀 Example of incorrect structure: 'James enjoys reading more than to write.' Corrected: 'James enjoys reading more than writing.'
• 😀 Proofreading strategies: Skim your paper, focusing on conjunctions ('and', 'or') and check if both sides are parallel.
• 😀 For lists, put items in a column to check if they have consistent endings, ensuring parallel structure.

Q & A

What is parallel structure in writing?

Parallel structure is the repetition of a chosen grammatical form within a sentence. It ensures that each compared item or idea in the sentence follows the same grammatical pattern.

Why is parallel structure important in writing?

Parallel structure helps to create clarity and flow in writing. It ensures consistency in the structure of a sentence or series, making the ideas easier to understand and more cohesive.

What is the first rule for using parallel structure?

The first rule is to use parallel structure when elements are joined by coordinating conjunctions like 'and,' 'or,' and 'but.' All items connected by these conjunctions should follow the same grammatical structure.

Can you give an example of incorrect use of parallel structure with a coordinating conjunction?

An example would be: 'I'm allergic to the dog's hair and how it smells.' The correct version should be: 'I'm allergic to the dog's hair and its smell.' The second sentence uses 'its smell,' keeping the structure consistent.

What is the second rule for parallel structure?

The second rule states that parallel structure should be used when writing elements in a list or series. All items in the list should follow the same grammatical pattern.

Can you provide an example of incorrect parallel structure in a list?

An incorrect example would be: 'The class valued respect, honesty, and being on time.' The correct version should be: 'The class valued respect, honesty, and promptness in a teacher.' 'Promptness' aligns with the structure of 'respect' and 'honesty.'

What is the third rule for using parallel structure?

The third rule states that parallel structure should be used when comparing or contrasting elements. When you compare or contrast, ensure that both sides of the comparison follow the same grammatical form.

Can you explain the incorrect example given for comparing or contrasting with parallel structure?

The incorrect example was: 'James enjoys reading more than to write.' The correct version is: 'James enjoys reading more than writing.' Both elements ('reading' and 'writing') end with 'ing,' maintaining parallel structure.

What proofreading strategies can help identify parallel structure issues?

One strategy is to skim your paper, pausing at words like 'and' and 'or.' Check both sides of these words to ensure parallel structure. Another strategy is to list items in a column to visually check if they follow the same grammatical pattern.

How does parallel structure improve the flow of writing?

By ensuring all parts of a sentence or list follow the same structure, parallel structure helps the writing flow smoothly. It avoids awkward or disjointed phrasing, making the content easier to read and understand.