(PBL) Analisis Kesalahan berbahasa Indonesia dalam pidato bapak presiden RI Jokowi Dodo.

Summary

This video presents a detailed linguistic analysis of President Joko Widodo's speech during the 2024 Pancasila Day commemoration. The speaker identifies and corrects several language errors, such as mispronunciations, incorrect word choices, and awkward phrasing in the president's speech. Each error is carefully explained, and the corrected version of the phrases is offered, highlighting the importance of language precision in formal speeches. The video emphasizes the need for clarity, proper usage, and adherence to linguistic norms, aiming to improve the quality and impact of the speech.

Takeaways

• 😀 The speaker, C Fadila, analyzes the Indonesian language errors in a speech by President Joko Widodo during the 2024 Pancasila anniversary commemoration.
• 😀 Several specific timestamps in the speech highlight grammatical and word usage errors that need correction to improve clarity and professionalism.
• 😀 A common error involves the mispronunciation or misuse of certain words, such as 'pemukasan' instead of 'permusyawaratan' (Consultative Council).
• 😀 The speaker points out mistakes related to the term 'Yudisial,' suggesting 'Judisial' as the correct usage for referencing judicial matters.
• 😀 Some phrases are improperly constructed, such as 'Masyarakat seprovinsi Riau,' which should be 'Seluruh masyarakat seprovinsi Riau' for clarity.
• 😀 Certain errors, like 'Berasil' instead of 'Berhasil,' involve simple spelling mistakes that can significantly affect the professionalism of the speech.
• 😀 The speaker identifies the incorrect usage of 'Pakai' instead of 'Digunakan' when referring to formal events and contexts.
• 😀 The presentation includes a correction of the phrase 'Karena kita punya daya saing tinggi dalam ekonomi hijau' to 'Karena kita memiliki daya saing yang tinggi dalam ekonomi hijau' for improved clarity.
• 😀 The speaker highlights a grammatical error in the phrase 'Mensejahterakan masyarakat menjederaran rakyat' and recommends 'Mensejahterakan masyarakat dan rakyat bawah' for better flow.
• 😀 The importance of using correct formal language in speeches is emphasized, particularly the replacement of 'praktik-praktik Teladan' with 'praktik-praktik teladan yang nyata' for clearer communication.
• 😀 Overall, the speaker advocates for greater attention to grammatical accuracy in public speaking, pointing out how language mistakes can undermine the effectiveness and professionalism of a speech.

Q & A

What is the main purpose of C Fadila’s presentation?

C Fadila's presentation aims to analyze language errors in President Joko Widodo’s speech delivered at the 2024 Pancasila Birth Day commemoration. Fadila identifies various mistakes and offers corrections for them.

What kind of language mistakes are primarily discussed in the transcript?

The presentation focuses on word choice errors, incorrect syntax, and spelling mistakes in the speech, such as the misuse of terms like 'pemusatan' instead of 'Permusyawaratan' and 'berasil' instead of 'berhasil.'

How does C Fadila suggest improving the phrase 'Yang saya hormati Ketua Majelis Pemusatan Rakyat Republik Indonesia'?

C Fadila suggests correcting the phrase to 'Yang saya hormati Ketua Majelis Permusyawaratan Rakyat Republik Indonesia,' replacing 'pemusatan' with the correct term 'Permusyawaratan.'

What is the correction proposed for the term 'Yudisial' used in the speech?

The correction is to replace 'Yudisial' with 'Yudikatif,' as the proper term for the commission in question is 'Komisi Yudikatif.'

What error is identified in the phrase 'Kita telah menjadi pemimpin G20 yang berasil'?

The error is a spelling mistake. 'Berasil' should be corrected to 'berhasil,' resulting in the sentence 'Kita telah menjadi pemimpin G20 yang berhasil.'

What is the suggested correction for 'Tempat yang kita pakai untuk upacara peringatan Hari Lahir Pancasila'?

The phrase 'Tempat yang kita pakai' is considered informal. The correction is to use 'Tempat yang kita gunakan,' making the sentence more formal.

Why is the word 'report' incorrect in the sentence 'Report dan blok Rokan hanyalah sedikit contoh dari semangat dan upaya kita'?

The word 'report' is incorrect because the intended reference is to 'Freeport.' The correct sentence should be: 'Freeport dan Blok Rokan hanyalah sedikit contoh dari semangat dan upaya kita.'

How does C Fadila propose improving the phrase 'Karena kita punya daya saing yang tinggi dalam ekonomi hijau'?

Fadila suggests improving the phrasing to a more formal tone by replacing 'kita punya' with 'kita memiliki.' The revised sentence is 'Karena kita memiliki daya saing yang tinggi dalam ekonomi hijau.'

What correction is suggested for the phrase 'Dengan cara-cara mereka dengan praktik-praktik Teladan yang nyata'?

The correction is to simplify the sentence for clarity. The revised version is 'Dengan cara-cara mereka dan praktik-praktik teladan yang nyata.'

What is the key mistake in the phrase 'Yang mensejahterakan masyarakat menjederaran rakyat bawah yang sejalan dengan nilai-nilai Pancasila'?

The key mistake is the word 'menjederaran,' which should be 'mensejahterakan.' The corrected phrase is 'Yang mensejahterakan masyarakat dan rakyat bawah yang sejalan dengan nilai-nilai Pancasila.'