Efren Divided Chapter 5 by Ernesto Cisneros Read aloud

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11 Feb 202309:22

Summary

TLDRThe transcript revolves around the character Efren, who is a diligent student striving to maintain his perfect academic record. He faces a challenge when he realizes he has forgotten his homework and must complete it before class starts. Amidst his academic pressures, Efren also grapples with personal turmoil as his mother, Amma, is away and he anxiously awaits her return. His friend David is running for class president and is confident of winning. Efren's concern for his mother's safety and whereabouts intensifies when he overhears his father discussing a dangerous situation involving smugglers. The narrative delves into Efren's emotional journey as he navigates the complexities of school life, friendship, and the fear of losing a loved one. The story is a poignant depiction of a young person's resilience in the face of academic and familial challenges.

Takeaways

  • 📚 Efren is determined to maintain his perfect homework completion streak, despite forgetting about an assignment.
  • 🏫 He struggles with the decision of creating a fake note to excuse his incomplete homework, ultimately choosing honesty.
  • 🤝 David, Efren's friend, is running for class president with a campaign to end homework, utilizing bold clothing to appeal to all voters.
  • 📅 The pressure of school responsibilities and family expectations weigh heavily on Efren, influencing his actions and decisions.
  • 👨‍👩‍👧‍👦 Efren's family dynamic is crucial to his emotional support, with his parents and siblings providing a backdrop for his daily life.
  • 💔 Mr. Garrett, a strict teacher with no tolerance for late homework, adds to Efren's stress, reflecting his personal troubles through his demeanor.
  • 🚸 The narrative illustrates the challenges of managing schoolwork, family life, and personal ethics in a young student's life.
  • 🔑 Efren's internal conflict and his efforts to balance right and wrong demonstrate his growth and moral development.
  • 🏠 The arrival of Efren's mother is eagerly anticipated, highlighting the importance of her presence in the stability of the household.
  • 😢 Emotional resilience and vulnerability are explored through the interactions within Efren's family, particularly in the climactic moments of stress and relief.

Q & A

  • What is Efren's initial reason for rushing to the middle school?

    -Efren rushes to the middle school because he suddenly remembers his homework, which he had forgotten, and needs to maintain his perfect streak of not missing any assignments for a year and a half.

  • What dilemma does Efren face regarding his homework?

    -Efren faces the dilemma of having to complete three different tasks in a short amount of time. While he plans to quickly finish his math worksheet and the Venn diagram on amphibians, he struggles with how to annotate a three-page article within 15 minutes before class.

  • Why does Efren think Mr. Garrett won't be understanding about extending the homework deadline?

    -Efren believes Mr. Garrett won't be understanding about extending the homework deadline because Mr. Garrett has a strict policy of not allowing homework extensions without a parent's note.

  • What strategy does David use in his campaign to win the election for class president?

    -David uses the strategy of appealing to all his voters by wearing a lilac shirt, which is a blend of blue and pink—blue for boys and pink for girls, aiming to capture the interest of all classmates.

  • What personal struggle does Mr. Garrett face, according to school gossip?

    -According to school gossip, Mr. Garrett is facing personal struggles as he has recently gone through a tough divorce, lost custody of his children, and this turmoil is possibly a reason for his cranky demeanor.

  • How does Efren react when faced with the opportunity to use a fake note for his homework?

    -Efren initially considers using a phony note to excuse his incomplete homework, but ultimately decides against it, refusing to present the note to Mr. Garrett and accepting the consequences.

  • What significant event is Efren anticipating at home?

    -Efren is anticipating the return of his mother, Amma, who has been away. He looks forward to the end of his responsibilities such as managing his siblings and household chores, and returning to his normal routines.

  • What signs at home lead Efren to think his mother might not have returned yet?

    -When Efren arrives home, he notices signs like closed blinds and unfolded sheets, indicating that his mother might not have returned as expected.

  • What emotional response does Efren experience when he finds out the truth about his mother's situation?

    -Efren feels deeply upset and anxious when he learns from his father that his mother's return has been delayed due to complications, including her purse being stolen. This news makes him fearful and tearful about her safety and their future.

  • How does the chapter describe the impact of family struggles on Efren and his father?

    -The chapter describes the profound emotional impact of family struggles on both Efren and his father, showcasing their vulnerability and fear as they face uncertainties about Amma's return and cope with the emotional toll of their situation.

Outlines

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📚 Efren's School Challenges and Candidacy Campaign

Efren rushes to school to complete his homework to maintain his perfect assignment streak. Upon arriving, he faces the realization of having multiple tasks but limited time, especially for annotating an article for Mr. Garrett's class, who is strict about no extensions. Meanwhile, his friend David is running for class president, promising to abolish homework, which resonates with students. Efren is caught up in the election excitement but struggles with the possibility of failing to complete his homework, envisioning the disappointment of his parents if they discover his academic struggles.

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🏠 Efren's Family Turmoil and Emotional Struggle

Efren returns home hoping to find his mother, Amma, but discovers she hasn't returned, adding to his worries after a challenging day. His interactions with neighbors hint at trouble, and his siblings' reactions deepen his concerns. Late into the evening, he overhears his father revealing Amma's difficulties with smugglers during her immigration attempt, including the loss of money and personal belongings. This news devastates Efren, confronting him with the harsh realities of his family's situation and his father's vulnerability, prompting a deeply emotional response from both.

Mindmap

Keywords

💡Homework

Homework refers to tasks assigned by teachers for students to complete outside of class. In the script, Efren's concern about his homework is central to the theme of academic responsibility and the pressure to maintain a perfect record. It is a source of stress for Efren, who fears that his failure to complete an assignment will break his streak of perfect attendance and displease his teacher, Mr. Garrett.

💡Divorce

Divorce is the legal dissolution of a marriage. In the script, Mr. Garrett's recent divorce and the loss of custody over his children are mentioned as reasons for his cranky demeanor. This provides insight into the personal struggles that teachers may face, which can impact their professional demeanor and interactions with students.

💡Cafeteria

The cafeteria is a place in a school where students eat lunch. It serves as a social hub and a location for Efren to find his friend David, who is campaigning to become president. The cafeteria scene illustrates the social dynamics among students and the informal ways they interact outside of the classroom.

💡Campaign

A campaign is a series of planned activities aimed at achieving a particular goal, often in the context of an election. David's campaign for school president is a subplot that adds a layer of school politics and camaraderie to the story. It also shows how students can be engaged in extracurricular activities and leadership roles.

💡Parent Notification Slip

A parent notification slip is a document used by schools to inform parents about specific issues concerning their child, such as missed homework. In the script, Efren is asked to fill out such a slip, which becomes a source of anxiety for him as it leads to an automatic referral to the office and the potential disappointment of his parents.

💡Family Struggles

Family struggles refer to the challenges and difficulties that a family might face, such as financial issues, health problems, or relationship conflicts. The script highlights the Nava family's struggles, including the mother's absence due to immigration issues and the father's reluctance to spend the family's savings on his medical treatment, which adds emotional depth to Efren's character and his actions.

💡Immigration

Immigration involves the movement of people from one country to another with the intention of residing there. The script touches on the serious issue of immigration, particularly the risks and hardships faced by those attempting to cross borders, such as Efren's mother, Amma. This theme is central to the story, as it affects the family dynamics and Efren's emotional state.

💡School Politics

School politics refers to the social and power dynamics that occur within an educational setting, often among students but also involving staff. David's campaign for class president and the various reactions from other students exemplify school politics, showcasing how such dynamics can influence student behavior and relationships.

💡Academic Pressure

Academic pressure is the stress that students experience due to the demands and expectations placed on them in an educational setting. Efren's concern over maintaining his perfect homework record and the potential consequences of failing to do so highlight the academic pressures students face and the impact it can have on their mental health.

💡Friendship

Friendship is a close and supportive relationship between two people. The bond between Efren and David is a significant aspect of the script, showing how friends provide emotional support and assistance during challenging times. Their interactions also reveal the importance of loyalty and camaraderie in navigating school life.

💡Responsibility

Responsibility refers to the state of being accountable for one's actions or decisions. Efren's struggle with his homework and the potential consequences of not completing it illustrate the theme of personal responsibility. His actions and their outcomes underscore the importance of being accountable for one's commitments and the impact of choices on oneself and others.

Highlights

Efren remembers his homework just in time to maintain his perfect year-and-a-half record.

Efren struggles with completing three different tasks, notably a challenging article annotation.

Mr. Garrett's strict policy of no homework extensions without a parent's note adds to Efren's stress.

David, running for president, attempts to appeal to all his voters with a strategically colored shirt.

Efren debates using a fake note to excuse his incomplete homework but decides against it.

Efren is pressured by the potential disappointment of his parents if they discover his incomplete homework.

The cold interaction outside Mr. Garrett's classroom contrasts with the supportive atmosphere at Efren's home.

Amma's anticipated return home brings relief from Efren's household responsibilities.

Efren's rush home is fueled by the hope of Amma's return, only to find signs she hasn't come back yet.

Donya Chana's distressed state and Efren's concern for Amma highlight the emotional turmoil of the family.

Mia remains oblivious to the family's struggles, focusing on the simpler joys like greeting Efren.

Efren overhears Apa's troubling conversation about Amma's struggles with smugglers and stolen money.

The revelation of the stolen money and the perilous situation leaves Efren feeling helpless and fearful.

Apa's tears reveal the depth of his distress, a rare and alarming sight for Efren.

The emotional climax where both father and son share a moment of vulnerability, reflecting their deep bond and shared pain.

Transcripts

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chapter five with the little ones now

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under Miss Solomon's care Efren suddenly

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suddenly remembered his homework which

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he'd completely forgotten about until

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that very minute huffing and puffing he

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finally reached the middle school he

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needed to get to the library and do his

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homework if he hoped to keep his perfect

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year and the half streak of not missing

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a single assignment but as he pulled out

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his class agenda he discovered three

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different tasks waiting for him he

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scanned the math homework or worksheet

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it was simple enough he could finish it

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during the warm warm-up activity at the

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start of class same with the Venn

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diagram on on amphibians for science but

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how could he annotate an entire

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three-page article from Mr Garrett with

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only 15 minutes until the first Bell

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that friend's mouth went sour and his

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stomach tightened it wasn't as if Mr

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Garrett would under it wasn't as if Mr

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Garrett would understand no way not him

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not unless Mr Garrett had a simple

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policy no homework extensions at least

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not without a parent's nope but the only

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way to come up with one would be to

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Efren shook his head as if trying to

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throw the idea away but it held strong

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he gathered his belongings and headed to

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the cafeteria David liked cutting it

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close so chances were he might not or he

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might not be there still Efren thought

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it was worth checking if he were on time

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for a change he'd no doubt be at the

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lunch area munching on anything but

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anything cheese flavored everyone

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hurried down the stairway finding his

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best friend turned out to be pretty

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simple all he had to do was look right

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ahead of the brightly dressed kid

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standing on top of a lunch bench

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hollering something about doing away

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with all the homework if he were elected

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president

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David leaped off the table the second he

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caught side of Efrin yofmon it's working

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I'm everyone is or I talked to has

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promised him to vote for me I'm telling

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you it's in the bag effort and leaned in

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closer to examine David's lilac shirt

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and squinted pretending to be blinded by

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its brightness what's up with this shirt

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it's the perfect blend of blue and pink

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and David rolled his eyes simple I want

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to appeal to all my voters blue for boys

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pink for girls that French Shrugged at

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least you'll be safe crossing the street

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you want to help me pass out some flyers

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Efren caught himself pursing his lips

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together like alpaw did I often did and

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felt the pressure building inside

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actually he couldn't believe the words

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coming out of his mouth I need a favor

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anything bro just name it the classroom

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door was a jar yet every student in Mr

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Garrett's first period class preferred

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to wait outside in the cold morning air

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friend poked his head inside Mr Garrett

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asked Stephan may I speak with you Mr

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Garrett lowered his magazine Mr Nava you

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you do realize the Bell has not yet rung

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as Efron took a deep breath his eyes

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glanced over to Mr Garrett's left hand

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to his bare ring finger there was no

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wedding ring just a white tan line in

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its place according to the cheese man at

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school Mr Garrett went through a tough

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divorce even lost custody of his son and

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daughter probably the reason he was so

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cranky I know sir reference and it's

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about my homework I didn't get a chance

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to complete it Mr Garrett's right

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eyebrow been kind of funny you really

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guess that just leaves Jennifer Huerta

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for the perfect homework award at the

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end of the year unless of course you

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have a note Efron dug his hand into his

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pocket and pinched at the corners of his

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phony note he thought back to the awards

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night last school year remembering

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however loudly both amanappa had cheered

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when the principal caught his name then

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he imagined the look of disappointment

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on their faces if they ever found out

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what he'd done he he took his hand out

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of his pocket and clenched it closed no

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sir I don't have a note in that case go

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ahead and fill out a parent notification

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slip and sign the missed homework log

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Efren turned away head down

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oh and make sure you return the slipper

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it's an automatic referral to the office

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office the word alone made him uneasy

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for the rest of class Effron did his

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best to stay focused as Mr Garrett

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droned on about the lack of proper

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citations in today's media well as best

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he could with David slipping him little

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notes with campaign slogan ideas he

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watched the clocks a minute hand inch

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its way through the complete Loop

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and everyone thought about our Paz

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promise Amma would be returning today

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that was all that mattered no more

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struggling to entangle Mia's long wavy

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hair and figuring out how to braid it

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perfectly centered down her back it also

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meant not having to chase a naked Max

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around the apartment trying to put on a

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fresh pair of undies on him

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and said that my nephrine could go back

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to hiding out in the bathtub finishing

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what could possibly be his favorite book

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the whole time knowing that a delicious

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breakfast awaited him when he stepped

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out he took a deep breath Imagining the

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scent of cinnamon escaping a fresh fresh

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pot of arroz con leche the thought made

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his stomach grow growl

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have friends printed right home after

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school stopping only when he reached the

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bottom steps to his apartment gasping

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for breath he eyed the clothes blinds to

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his living room window his initial

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thought was that Amma was not yet not

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home but he wasn't ready to accept

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defeat not just yet after all it was

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completely possible that she was just

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tired from the difficult trip and

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decided to take a nap Efren climbed the

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stairs removed this key safely

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safety pinned onto the inside of his

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shirt collar he unlocked both the metal

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screen and front door once inside he

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searched each section of the room the

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sheets over the mattresses lay unfolded

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just as he'd left them this morning

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the only other place left to check was

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the bathroom which he immediately headed

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to he knocked and pushed the door open

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nothing

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he rushed into the kitchen area and

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searched the countertop for signs of his

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mother's cooking perhaps the scent of

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salsa roasting on her caramel griddle

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but all he smelled was this stale scent

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of dread now filling the room Efrin

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rushed outside rodonya immediately waved

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him over oh hi I thought you were in L.A

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I was but gracias adios I came back

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early gracias adios something was

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definitely wrong a friend's stomach

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nodded as he entered Don yachana's

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apartment

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the twins sat on the couch watching a

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cartoon on her cell phone this time only

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Mia ran up to meet him he boosted her up

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and gave her a long sturdy hug though

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Mia couldn't imagine the real reason

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behind it she didn't mind at all Mia

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planted her chin on her over his

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shoulder a perfect fit when is Emma

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coming back she asked Efron gazed up at

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Donya China who looked on the verge of

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tears she would stay that way the rest

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of the evening barely speaking a word

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he pulled me a back and smiled as big as

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he could soon me up very soon that night

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after about an hour of reading together

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Efron me and Max finally fell asleep but

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soon the sound of work boots entering

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the room woke up Ephraim Efren he kept

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himself perfectly still but his eyes

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followed as APA made a beeline for the

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kitchen phone

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whispered to some mystery person at the

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other end Efren couldn't believe his

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ears he ain't hearing a pie admit that

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he didn't know what to do next terrified

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him there were so many things that could

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have gone wrong

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according to the laundromat gossip he'd

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heard bits of crossing over was very

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dangerous the Smugglers or coyotes were

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not good people they were criminals who

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took advantage of desperate families

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sometimes just dumping them in the

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desert a bus sniffled and pounded the

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table hard no like

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wanting to catch every word his father

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said Efron stayed perfectly still and

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even held his breath but hearing that

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amma's purse had been stolen along with

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the money papa had borrowed made after

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his entire body shake foreign

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where would he find the money to get her

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home the question ripped a hole in that

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friend's heart even as more questions

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filled his mind where could Emma be was

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she hurt was she scared would she ever

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be coming back it was all too much for

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Efrin he opened his eyes and pushed

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himself up is am I all right

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put down the phone and thumbed the

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corners of his eyes yes Miho she is fine

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but she isn't coming home is she rush to

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eat for inside and out by the mattress

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son look at me it is just a delay

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nothing more I swear Efren squeezed his

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eyes shut but no matter how much he

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tried to stop them tears managed to seep

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down his face it's okay to cry I miss

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her too

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that was all the permission that friend

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needed he leapt into his father's arms

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tucking his face into his chest a Paz

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own sobbing body caused his body her own

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Sovereign caused his body to bob up and

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down as if he were hiccuping Efren

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couldn't remember ever seeing his father

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like this not because Obama was too

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Macho for something like that not a PA

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if anything he simply didn't want to add

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to the family's problems like when he

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got got sick last month and my mom had

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to force him to stay home from work

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despite his burning temperature up I

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insisted doctor's raw quacks and that

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all they ever do is suggest Tylenol rest

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and plenty of water it wasn't until a ma

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raised her voice and scolded him about

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the poor example he was setting for his

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children that he finally got him to

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admit the truth that he didn't want to

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spend the Christmas money he'd set aside

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for the family on himself

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besides he had said pointing to his soul

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called zipper on his belly I'm still

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paying for this visit remember Ahmad

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didn't laugh as it turned out the doctor

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had found APA had pneumonia something on

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my blamed on the long hours he spent

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working in the cold APA was tough his

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nail nails seeing him cry like this

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meant things were really bad and it

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scared Efren scared him a lot

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