IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task2-Lesson-7 Discussion essays
Summary
TLDRThis IELTS Writing Task 2 lesson focuses on crafting a discussion essay. It guides through understanding the prompt, planning with a four-paragraph structure, brainstorming ideas, and writing with a clear stance. The instructor emphasizes the importance of discussing both viewpoints and providing a personal opinion. The lesson highlights vocabulary enhancement and structured planning as keys to achieving a high band score.
Takeaways
- đ The lesson focuses on writing a discussion essay for IELTS Task 2, emphasizing the importance of understanding the question and planning the essay structure.
- đ„ It discusses two viewpoints: encouraging competition in children and teaching them to cooperate, highlighting the need to cover both in the essay.
- đĄ The planning stage involves noting ideas for the introduction, main body, and conclusion, with a focus on brainstorming good ideas and vocabulary.
- đ The essay structure consists of four paragraphs: an introduction, two main body paragraphs discussing each viewpoint, and a conclusion.
- đ The introduction should include a topic sentence and an answer sentence, clearly stating the writer's opinion that cooperation is more important.
- đ For the main body, paragraph two argues why competition in children should be encouraged, linking it to motivation, self-confidence, and preparation for adult life.
- đ€ Paragraph three supports the view that teaching cooperation is crucial, using examples from the workplace and the value of collaboration over winning.
- đ The conclusion reiterates the importance of both competition and cooperation but asserts that a cooperative attitude is more desirable in adult life.
- đ The lesson provides a full plan with numbered ideas to guide the writing of the main paragraphs, ensuring a structured and coherent essay.
- đ It emphasizes the use of high-level vocabulary to achieve a Band 9 essay, such as 'competitive spirit', 'healthy rivalry', and 'team collaboration skills'.
Q & A
What is the main focus of the IELTS Writing Task 2 lesson 7?
-The main focus of the lesson is to guide students through the process of writing a discussion essay, including understanding the question, planning, writing an introduction, main body, and conclusion, and highlighting elements that make a good essay.
What is the specific essay question discussed in the lesson?
-The essay question is about whether children should be encouraged to compete or cooperate, and it asks students to discuss both views and give their own opinion.
How many main body paragraphs are recommended for the essay structure in this lesson?
-The recommended essay structure includes two main body paragraphs, one for each viewpoint, in addition to an introduction and a conclusion.
What are the two key viewpoints that the essay should cover?
-The two key viewpoints are encouraging competition in children and teaching cooperation.
What is the instructor's opinion on the importance of competition versus cooperation in children?
-The instructor's opinion is that while competition can be useful, cooperation is more important for children.
How does the instructor suggest organizing the main body paragraphs?
-The instructor suggests organizing the main body paragraphs by starting with a basic topic sentence, explaining the idea, and then discussing the results or consequences of that idea.
What is the purpose of brainstorming ideas during the planning stage?
-The purpose of brainstorming ideas is to ensure that the essay has good ideas and vocabulary, which are essential for a high-scoring essay.
What is the role of the introduction in the essay according to the lesson?
-The introduction should include a topic sentence and an answer sentence, where the latter states the author's opinion on the balance between the benefits of competition and cooperation.
How does the instructor emphasize the importance of vocabulary in the essay?
-The instructor highlights the use of a variety of vocabulary from the word families of 'competition' and 'cooperation', as well as phrases that add depth to the essay, to achieve a high band score.
What is the conclusion of the essay as outlined in the lesson?
-The conclusion accepts both views but states that a cooperative attitude is more desirable in adult life, reflecting the instructor's opinion that cooperation is better.
What is the final piece of advice given by the instructor regarding the essay?
-The final piece of advice is for students to download and print the worksheet, which includes a task reviewing the good vocabulary and the essay's organization.
Outlines
đ Introduction to IELTS Writing Task 2
The paragraph introduces an IELTS writing task 2 lesson focusing on a discussion essay. The instructor explains the process of understanding the essay question, planning the essay structure, and writing an introduction, main body, and conclusion. The specific essay question from Cambridge IELTS Book Five is presented, which discusses whether children should be encouraged to compete or cooperate. The instructor emphasizes the importance of understanding both viewpoints and providing a personal opinion in the essay.
đ Planning the Essay Structure
This paragraph details the planning process for the essay's structure, which includes an introduction, two main body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The instructor discusses the importance of highlighting key parts of the essay question and planning the introduction with a topic sentence and an answer sentence. The main body paragraphs are planned to discuss the benefits of competition and cooperation in children, respectively, with the conclusion reiterating the importance of cooperation over competition.
đ€ Brainstorming Ideas for the Main Body
The paragraph outlines the brainstorming process for the main body paragraphs. The instructor and students generate ideas for why competition should be encouraged in children and why cooperation is more important. The ideas are organized in a step-by-step manner to create a logical flow in the essay. The paragraph also includes the actual brainstormed ideas, such as motivation, self-confidence, independent work, and preparation for adult life for competition, and teamwork, collaboration, and fostering a cooperative attitude for cooperation.
đ Writing the Main Paragraphs and Conclusion
The paragraph describes the process of writing the main body paragraphs and the conclusion based on the previously brainstormed ideas. The instructor provides examples of how to express these ideas in sentences, using a variety of vocabulary to enhance the essay's quality. The conclusion paragraph is crafted to accept both views but ultimately supports the importance of cooperation. The instructor also reviews the use of high-level vocabulary that can elevate the essay to a Band 9 score.
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Keywords
đĄIELTS Writing Task 2
đĄDiscussion Essay
đĄCambridge IELTS
đĄPlanning Stage
đĄIntroduction
đĄMain Body Paragraphs
đĄConclusion
đĄCompetition
đĄCooperation
đĄVocabulary
đĄBand Seven to Nine Vocabulary
Highlights
Introduction to IELTS Writing Task 2 Discussion Essay
Understanding the essay question and identifying key parts
Planning the essay structure with four paragraphs
Writing an introduction with a topic sentence and an answer sentence
Discussing the benefits of both competition and cooperation
Brainstorming ideas for the main body paragraphs
Organizing ideas into a coherent paragraph structure
Exploring the reasons to encourage competition in children
Discussing the outcomes of fostering competition
Arguing that cooperation is even more important for adult life
Providing examples of cooperation in the workplace
Emphasizing the value of collaboration over winning
Fostering a cooperative attitude in young people
Concluding the essay by accepting both views but favoring cooperation
Highlighting the use of advanced vocabulary to achieve a high band score
Providing a worksheet for practice and review
Announcing the next lesson on problem and solution essays
Transcripts
ielts writing task 2 lesson 7 discussion
essay
in this lesson similar to the last one
we're going to go through a full essay
we'll look at the question we'll make
sure we understand it see what it's
asking us to do then we'll go through
the planning stage noting ideas and then
we'll use those ideas to write an um an
introduction main body and conclusion
and at the end we'll check everything
and i'll highlight a few things that i
did that made it a good essay so let's
get started with this discussion essay
now
the question that i'm going to use in
this lesson comes from cambridge ielts
book five it's test three in that book
let's look at how my students and i
wrote a full essay for this question
here's the question first
some people think that a sense of
competition in children should be
encouraged
others believe that children who are
taught to cooperate rather than compete
become more useful adults discuss both
these views and give your own opinion
let's go through the planning steps
first first
read and understand the question and
highlight or underline key parts
i've highlighted both views
because it's very important that we
write a good paragraph about the two
viewpoints
then what are the two viewpoints well
i've highlighted the keywords
competition
and cooperate we're
discussing whether children should be
taught
one or the other of those things and we
also have to give our own opinion that's
important you need to make it clear in
your essay what you think as well as
well as discussing the two viewpoints
now on to step two in our planning
process which is
plan your essay structure the four
paragraph structure here are the four
paragraphs
introduction
two main body paragraphs and conclusion
and let's plan the introduction first we
need two sentences just a topic sentence
and an answer sentence
the topic of this essay is going to be
competition or cooperation
and the answer
benefits of both cooperation more
important that's the answer that my
students and i decided we would give
then let's jump in our planning to the
conclusion we just need to repeat that
answer in a different way so we'll say
something like this
accept both views and cooperation is
better in our opinion
and then in the middle the most
important part we've got the main body
paragraphs paragraph two is going to be
about one viewpoint which is
why encourage competition in children
and of course paragraph three will be
why teach cooperation and we'll make it
clear that that's our view as well
that's the structure
planned
now on to step three in the planning
process which is plan ideas for the two
main paragraphs and spend about six
minutes for this this is a very
important part of your planning
and of the whole test really because if
you don't have good ideas good
vocabulary you don't have an answer you
have nothing so it's very important to
spend some time brainstorming and
getting good ideas let's look at the
ideas that my students and i had
the topic of paragraph two is why
encourage competition in children here
are the ideas that we had
motivation to work harder be better than
other children
self-confidence
independent work
faster progress
competitive situations when children
leave school for example job interviews
prepared for adult life
that's the result of our brainstorming
now if we put numbers next to those
ideas we can think about how the
paragraph will be organized
we thought this isn't
a collection of separate ideas it's not
going to be a firstly secondly finally
paragraph really it's just one idea and
what happens as a result of that idea so
we thought that
the main reason why
we would like to encourage competition
in children is to motivate them so we'll
start with that as a basic topic
sentence
what will we motivate them to do we'll
motivate them to work harder because
they might want to be better than other
children
the next step after that is what will
this cause what will the result be
well it might cause them to have more
self-confidence
to work independently and to progress
faster if they're trying to compete
then we move on to what will happen
after school
well they'll have to compete in this
example for job interviews when they
leave school and finally that prepares
them well for adult life so as you can
see instead of having separate ideas we
think these are all related ideas going
step by step
through
why
competition is a good thing for children
if we do the same thing for paragraph
three
why teach cooperation
we'll start with the the ideas we had
cooperation is even more important
for example at work you work in teams
you follow a boss's instructions or you
help
other staff maybe junior staff
collaboration is more useful than
winning
better attitude for young people
working together
if we put these ideas
in order with numbers we thought the
basic idea is that cooperation is even
more important than
uh competition
and we went into an example then
um of what happens later in life so
instead of starting when children are
young we've gone straight to
the adult life why they need to be able
to cooperate at work working in teams
etc
and as a result of that we'll say that
this collaboration is more useful than
winning
so for young people it's better to teach
in them this um
cooperative attitude
and we'll finish with an idea that we
get children working together because
that's what they're going to do later in
life
so that's the full plan there with
numbers and that's what we're going to
use to write our main paragraphs in a
moment but first we need to go back to
the introduction
we've already planned the introduction
let's look at the question again
and our introduction plan just two
sentences a topic sentence
and an answer sentence
here's the topic sentence that we wrote
people have different views about
whether children should be taught to be
competitive or cooperative
notice the phrase people have different
views is a nice easy phrase that i often
use for discussion questions when it's
some people other people
notice also i've used competitive
instead of competition and cooperative
instead of cooperate or cooperation
so just changing the words
makes your introduction slightly
different from the question
now we need an answer and we have to
mention the benefits of both but our
opinion that cooperation is more
important here's the first part of our
answer
while a spirit of competition can
sometimes be useful in life
then the second part
i believe that the ability to cooperate
is more important
if you've watched my lesson about
introductions you'll have seen that i
like to use these while sentences
because you can contrast two different
things in the same sentence
so i've talked about the spirit of
competition being useful that's a good
phrase
but on the other hand the ability to
cooperate is more important so i've
mentioned both views and my opinion all
in the introduction so i've covered
everything the question asks me to cover
next we need to use the ideas that we
planned to write our main paragraphs
let's go to paragraph two first of all
the first idea for our topic sentence
was
why encourage competition we thought the
the first step the main reason was
motivation for children here's a
sentence to put that idea together
on the one hand competition can be a
great source of motivation for children
notice i've used on the one hand because
we're discussing
the two different points of view later
we'll use on the other hand
so we've started with this idea that
competition is a great source of
motivation for children then our next
idea was because they will work harder
try to be better than the other children
when teachers use games or prizes to
introduce an element of competitiveness
into lessons
it can encourage children to work harder
to outdo the other pupils in the class
you can see that i've added things there
i've added
what kind of competition this could be
so we thought we we should put something
like games or prizes that's what the
competitiveness could mean
then this phrase introduce an element of
competitiveness is a nice way of saying
bring competition into the classroom
and then we've got what we had in the
plan encourage children to work harder
and instead of the phrase be better than
other children i gave my students the
word out do
to out do someone means to to do better
than them
that was the second idea and then the
next step was
this would cause or result in self-conf
confidence independent work and faster
progress so let's express that in a
sentence
this kind of healthy rivalry may help to
build children's self-confidence while
pushing them to work independently and
progress more quickly
again there's some good vocabulary there
healthy rivalry rivalry is another word
competition between people
and we've put build self-confidence
pushing them to work independently and
progress more quickly
the next idea was
competitive situations when leave school
so we're going on to why children need
this competitive spirit when they leave
school and we wrote
when these children leave school their
confidence and determination will help
them in competitive situations such as
job interviews
so we've expressed that idea we've used
a good word there in determination
and finally
prepared for adult life so like a
concluding sentence this com
competition or competitive nature will
prepare them for adult life we wrote
it can therefore be argued that
competition should be encouraged in
order to prepare children for adult life
that's the paragraph finished it's five
sentences and it's 102 words long
let's do the same thing for paragraph
three
we'll start with the idea
cooperation is even more important we
wrote
on the other hand because
we're comparing here the two viewpoints
it is perhaps even more important to
prepare children for the many aspects of
adult life that require cooperation
so what we're saying here is
although
competition is sometimes useful there
are many more
times in life many aspects of adult life
that require cooperation
the next idea
was straight into this example work in
in work we work in teams
here's what we wrote
in the workplace adults are expected to
work in teams
follow instructions given by their
superiors or supervise and support the
more junior members of staff
all of those are cooperation
elements so workplace is a good word to
use there work in teams follow
instructions instead of bosses i used
the word superiors i gave that word word
to my students as a nice alternative
and
supervising support instead of just help
good words
um to substitute there for the word help
and junior members of staff i think
junior members of staff is a nice phrase
the next point was
collaboration is more useful than
winning so we expressed that in a short
sentence
team collaboration skills are much more
useful than a competitive determination
to win
and then we moved on to this is a going
to be a better attitude for young people
this is the attitude that i believe
schools should foster in young people
um attitude that i believe school school
should foster we say to foster an
attitude which is to create an attitude
and notice that i put i believe in this
sentence
it's nice to have
this um
making this clear that this is our
opinion on my opinion in this paragraph
and the last idea
working together we said we were going
to finish just in a general way talking
about children and adults working
together
instead of promoting the idea that
people are either winners or losers
teachers could show children that they
gain more from working together
that's again five sentences and we
finish that paragraph in
99 words
and the last paragraph of course is the
conclusion if we go back to the plan
that we wrote for the conclusion we're
going to say
that we accept both views but we think
cooperation is better
first i'll show you half a sentence
where i accept the other view
in conclusion i can understand why
people might want to encourage
competitiveness in children
by saying i can understand why i'm
accepting
the view that competitiveness could be
useful
but notice the sentence isn't finished
we've got a comma there
but it seems to me that a cooperative
attitude is much more desirable in adult
life
so we're saying that cooperation is
better i've used more desirable instead
of better and that's the full essay
finished you can read the full essay by
downloading the worksheet that is
attached to this
next to this video but first let's
quickly review the good vocabulary the
band seven to nine vocabulary or some of
it from this essay the the vocabulary
that the examiner would really notice
well first we had
these words all the time competition and
cooperation but instead of just using
those same two words i also used
competitive cooperative cooperate and
competitiveness
so some variety in the different types
of words that you can use in that word
family
a spirit of competition
a source of motivation
introduce an element of competitiveness
outdo other pupils healthy rivalry
build self-confidence determination
aspects of adult life
superiors junior members of staff
team collaboration skills
attitude that schools should foster
promoting the idea
and
a cooperative attitude is more desirable
it's that good vocabulary that really
makes this a band 9 essay
that's the end of this lesson and as i
said before you should
print the worksheet download it and
print it and do the um the small task on
there that reviews some of the good
vocabulary
and the way the essay is organized
next week we'll do the same thing but
with a problem and solution essay
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