Kevin Hale - How to Pitch Your Startup

Y Combinator
13 Sept 201927:46

Summary

TLDRThis talk explains how startup founders can better present their ideas to investors. The key is to clearly and concisely communicate the core hypothesis - the problem, solution, and unique insight - rather than overselling or being vague. Avoid ambiguity, complexity, mystery, jargon and other pitfalls. Lead with nouns - what you're making, the problem, the customer - so investors can easily picture and evaluate the opportunity. Well-crafted brevity shows deep understanding and efficiency. The goal is a reproducible idea that anyone can grasp, facilitating organic growth through word of mouth.

Takeaways

  • ๐Ÿ˜€ A good startup idea is a hypothesis for rapid growth based on identifying a big problem, an effective solution, and an insight for unfair advantage
  • ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป Investors evaluate ideas by imagining how they could become big successes, so founders should focus on communicating clearly over selling
  • ๐Ÿ—ฃ Startups need a clear, concise explanation of their product for organic growth through word-of-mouth
  • โŒ Avoid ambiguity, complexity, mystery, jargon, suggestions without specifics, and ignorable marketing speak when explaining an idea
  • ๐Ÿค Explain ideas conversationally, as if to your mom, using reproducible nouns so listeners can picture what you make
  • ๐Ÿ“ Lead with what you're building, not why or howโ€”save that complexity for later when listeners are already curious
  • โฑ Be extremely concise to show deep understanding and efficiency
  • ๐Ÿ—’ Always clearly define the core nouns: the product, the problem, the customer
  • โœ‚๏ธ Cut everything from your explanation that doesn't directly make listeners excited
  • ๐Ÿ˜Š Help investors easily understand and get excited about your idea through clarity and conciseness

Q & A

  • What is the main point of the two talks mentioned?

    -The main point is to explain to founders how investors evaluate startup ideas so founders can better understand, develop and present their own ideas and opportunities.

  • What are the three key components of a startup hypothesis?

    -The three key components are: the problem, the solution, and the insight.

  • What should founders avoid when describing their startup idea?

    -Founders should avoid ambiguity, complexity, mystery, jargon, fake details, ignorable content, and lack of reproducibility in their descriptions.

  • What three nouns should a founder communicate when describing their startup?

    -Founders should communicate what they are making, what problem it solves, and who the target customer is.

  • How can founders make their ideas easy to understand?

    -By making their ideas legible, simple, obvious, conversational, avoiding jargon, getting straight to the point, and using reproducible descriptions.

  • Why is word-of-mouth important for startups?

    -Word-of-mouth allows startups to grow organically at scale rather than relying solely on expensive marketing and advertising.

  • What is the goal of the YC application questions?

    -The goal is to evaluate whether the partners understand, are excited by, and want to work with the startup team.

  • How can founders write concise descriptions?

    -By only using the essential nouns, focusing on the core offering, and removing unnecessary details or buzzwords.

  • Why is concision important?

    -Concision shows investors that founders have deeply thought through their idea, are efficient with their thoughts and actions, and know what's most important.

  • What is the best way for founders to help investors understand their idea?

    -The best way is for founders to be as clear and concise as possible when describing their idea.

Outlines

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๐Ÿ˜Š Recap of evaluating startup ideas as an investor lens

This is a recap from a previous talk on evaluating startup ideas from an investor's perspective to help founders understand how investors think. Key points: a startup hypothesis explains why a company will grow quickly and has 3 parts - problem, solution, insight. The problem should be big and pervasive. The solution should not start with technology but the problem. The insight is your unfair advantage that makes you unique.

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๐Ÿ˜€ How to clearly express your startup idea

The key is to express your idea clearly, as a unclear idea hinders growth. Clear ideas spread by word of mouth - people easily remember and share what you do. Avoid ambiguity, complexity, mystery, jargon that makes ideas hard to understand. Instead, be conversational, avoid preamble, and be reproducible - use nouns so people can picture your company.

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๐Ÿ˜‰ Examples of good and bad startup descriptions

Good startup descriptions quickly allow the reader to understand what you're making and the market. They build curiosity so the reader asks further questions. Bad descriptions use abstract concepts rather than concrete nouns, force the reader to make inferences, use pretentious language, or markup.

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๐Ÿ™‚ Tips for using the X for Y formulation

The X for Y formulation works well if X is a household name billion dollar company, it's clear why Y wants X, and Y is a huge market. But don't use smaller analogies as the X or small niche markets as Y, as it seems like small thinking.

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๐Ÿ˜ƒ How to write a concise startup description

Concise startup descriptions showcase deep thinking about your idea and efficiency. Seek to include just enough to convey the core nouns - what you're making, the problem, the customer. Resist premises or defensive padding. Concision signals strong founder qualities to investors.

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๐Ÿ’ก Summary - be clear and concise to help investors evaluate you

The best way to help investors evaluate you is to communicate your idea clearly and concisely. Lead with what you're making, not why or how. Help investors easily understand and get excited about you by being efficient with their attention.

Mindmap

Keywords

๐Ÿ’กhypothesis

A hypothesis refers to an idea or assumption that a startup founder makes about why their company will grow quickly. It brings together the problem, solution, and insight. The speaker stresses formulating a clear, compelling hypothesis as crucial for convincing investors.

๐Ÿ’กproblem

The problem refers to an issue or need faced by a large market or customer segment. Identifying and articulating the problem is the first step in developing a startup idea hypothesis.

๐Ÿ’กsolution

The solution refers to the product, technology or innovation a startup will create to address the identified problem. The speaker emphasizes beginning with the problem rather than the solution.

๐Ÿ’กinsight

The insight refers to the unfair advantage or special sauce that will enable a startup to grow faster than competitors. Five types of unfair advantages are discussed.

๐Ÿ’กlegibility

Legibility means presenting ideas in a clear, straightforward way that can be easily understood even by a naive audience. This enables organic growth through word of mouth.

๐Ÿ’กreproducibility

Reproducibility means describing a startup idea in concrete terms so the listener can picture building the company themselves. Key nouns like the product, problem and customer should be clear.

๐Ÿ’กconcision

Concision refers to using as few words as possible to convey the essence of a startup idea. This signals efficiency of thought and priorities to investors.

๐Ÿ’กpitch

A pitch refers to a presentation of a business idea, often made to potential investors. Much of the video focuses on crafting a compelling, legible startup pitch.

๐Ÿ’กgrowth

Rapid growth potential is the characteristic investors look for in a promising startup idea or hypothesis. Organic, viral growth is emphasized as ideal.

๐Ÿ’กinvestor

Investors are people or firms who provide capital to a startup in exchange for partial ownership. Tailoring a pitch to excite investors is discussed.

Highlights

A startup idea is a hypothesis for why your company is going to grow really quickly

The problem you're solving should be big, pervasive, and affect many people

Don't start with a technology, start with identifying a problem

You need an insight that shows why your company can grow faster than others

A clear idea that people understand is the foundation for organic, word-of-mouth growth

Be clear, don't try to sell the investors - let them imagine the potential on their own

Avoid ambiguity, complexity, mystery, jargon, fake details that make your idea hard to understand

Be conversational, avoid marketing speak or MBA buzzwords

Lead with what you're making, not why or how - avoid winding descriptions

Concise descriptions show deep thinking about your idea and efficient communication

Understand the core nouns - what you're making, the problem, the customer

"X for Y" descriptions work if X is a household name, Y wants X, and Y is a huge market

Don't use small companies or ambiguous nouns as the X in "X for Y"

Lead with the core nouns, avoid unnecessary modifiers that don't contribute

It's okay to put your complex idea in a clear, concise box - investors know businesses are complex

Transcripts

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this is gonna be part two of a talk i

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gave at the very beginning

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of startup school on evaluating startup

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ideas

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and the thing to know about both of

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these talks is we've

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been talking about them from the point

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of view of the investor

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basically it was helpful

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i thought to explain to founders how

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investors evaluate startup ideas

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and looking at that structure so that

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they can better

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understand their own ideas opportunities

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and then

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in this presentation present them better

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to the people that they want to get

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excited so a quick

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recap in the first part i basically say

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a startup idea is a hypothesis

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for why your company is going to grow

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really quickly that hypothesis must

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compose of three different parts

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the problem the solution and the insight

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and the basic parts is

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your problem should be pretty big pretty

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pervasive

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have a lot of these characteristics to

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make it feel like there's a very big

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market that a lot of people have the

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problem

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the only thing you need to know about

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the solution is that you should not

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start with a technology

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you should start with a problem and

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lastly

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you're looking to have something that's

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going to make your company

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unique and have some kind of unfair

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advantage

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what that we call an insight that

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will show why your company will grow

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faster than other companies

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i talked about five different types of

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unfair advantages that your company can

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have and kind of what are the benchmarks

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for meeting them

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now the thing to keep in mind

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about understanding and creating this

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startup idea

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is that i don't need you to do all the

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work

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to lay all of that out in detail that's

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stuff that you'll kind of want to know

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or keep in mind but a really good

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investor

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will do that on their own they'll hear

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what you're talking about

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and extrapolate and so what

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i'm going to cover in this presentation

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is how do you package up that hypothesis

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how do you take all the things that you

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understand about your company and your

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startup idea

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and how i present it to an investor so

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that they can make a

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decision that's in your favor this is

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the yc startup application

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and basically this is the application

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all the questions that we asked that yc

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partners will use to evaluate your

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startup

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so down here when you're filling out the

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yc application

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we actually link to a couple of things

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and one of them is how to apply

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successfully i can't tell

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because i read so many applications but

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it feels like

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founders are not reading that essay

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uh it was written by paul graham in 2009

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and almost everything in there still

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holds to this day and people still make

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mistakes from it so i'm just going to

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like

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point out some stuff and really like

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punch it in here

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while i have your attention so here's a

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quote from that essay

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basically we believe for every company

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that we will interview

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at yc we bet there's probably another

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company

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that's just as good as them out there

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but

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they messed up on the application and we

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didn't realize it we didn't invite them

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and basically the reason is

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because they didn't express their idea

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clearly

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that's it like you might think oh i

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didn't show off all that complex stuff

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about my startup idea

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and that's why they didn't pick me and i

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want you to know

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that's not true and so the first thing i

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want you to keep in mind

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is i do not need you to sell me

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as a yc partner right a good investor so

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average investor what they do is they

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talk to you when you tell them about

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your idea and it feels like they're

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poking holes all the questions asked

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about what's all the reasons why this

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could go wrong

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a good investor does it the other way

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around they hear what you say

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and they imagine and they use their

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optimism

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and they use knowing that some kind of

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rare event has to happen for you to

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become a billion dollar company and they

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try to imagine all those rare events

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that could possibly happen to you

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and then they pitch that path back to

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you

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and so we are really good at selling

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ourselves

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so you don't need to do that and the

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thing is

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you guys are kind of bad at selling

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things in the beginning right

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and what i need you to understand is

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that i'm trying to evaluate

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these three statements when i'm hearing

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your idea

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do i understand it am i excited by it do

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i like the team and do i want to work

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with them

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surprise in your weekly updates

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when you do your group sessions these

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are the questions that we ask you to ask

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one another

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it's basically the questions that we're

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trying to figure out for ourselves

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and we're hoping that every week when

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you talk with other companies you are

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practicing

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getting feedback and understanding

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whether you're able to instill this

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in other people so your goal is just to

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be clear

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i will do everything else so

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back to the application these are the

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only two things we're going to focus on

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today

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what do i put in the what's my company

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going to make how do i describe my

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company

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in a very efficient manner the first way

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to do this

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is to be clear the reason we focus on

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this is because a clear

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idea is a foundation for growth and what

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i mean by that

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is that the best companies in yc or

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around the world

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grow organically they grow by word of

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mouth

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what does word of mouth look like it

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looks like this it's basically

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i talk about your company what you're

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doing making etc

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and i'm the most interesting person at

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the dinner table and i tell it to other

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people

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and those people want to tell other

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people that's it

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word of mouth is something where i

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remember what you do

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i talk about it enthusiastic and it

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spreads on its own

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marketing and advertising it's a tax i

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believe companies pay because they did

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not make

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something remarkable now before anyone

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can remember at the dinner table

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what you do they have to understand and

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so i have

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very simple rules for how to make things

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easy to understand

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this will sound familiar if you're

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familiar with an essay i wrote on how to

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design

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a better pitch deck and i'm going to

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focus

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on basically saying that the way i talk

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about designing a pitch deck

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actually works for ideas and lots of

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other things and so the way i make

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things easy to understand on a pitch

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deck or a slide

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is to make it legible i make it simple

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and i make it obvious

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in today's presentation we're just going

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to focus on making

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your idea legible which is going to

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sound interesting

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right for clarity now in my essay

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i talked about how at demo day

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when our startups are presenting to a

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room full of a thousand investors

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it's kind of an interesting audience

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number one the audience is filled with

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really old people

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they tend to not have very good eyesight

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as a result

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they all can't sit in the front row like

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you lovely people

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some of them have to sit in the way back

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and stand up

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and that means if you create a legible

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slide they have to be ones that even

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old people in the back row with bad

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eyesight can read

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now how does that apply to a legible

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idea

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well basically you are designing a slide

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that democratizes

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the idea right and so people who are

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blind or people who are ignorant

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you're basically designing something for

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everyone in the room

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not just the ones in the first row so a

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legible idea

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can be understood by people who know

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nothing about

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your business that will make things very

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clear to the widest possible audience

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now this is super important because you

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will

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talk about your company more than

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anything else

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it is actually the thing that we are

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really great at

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at y combinator we have our companies

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constantly

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practice talking about their startup

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startup school

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curriculum is designed around helping

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you constantly

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practice talking about your startup and

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this is because

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you are going to need a lot of people if

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you're going to

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become a billion dollar company so you

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are trying to find a co-founder you have

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to have a way of talking about your

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company clearly

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whether you're getting users or

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investors or employees or shareholders

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you have to get really good at this and

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you have to be able to do it

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quickly and efficiently here are things

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to avoid

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that makes things not clear that makes

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your idea muddy

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the first is ambiguity right

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so that's like obviously the opposite of

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clear

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or straightforward something's a little

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abstract something can be interpreted in

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two ways and therefore

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it might take a question to understand

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what you do

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complexity so i have a very specific

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definition of complexity

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and so if you look at the root word

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simple and complex

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come from the same root and having to do

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with twists or braids

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things that are simple are ones that

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have one braid

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and things that are complex have

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multiple braids they're intertwined with

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one another a simple idea is one idea

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that does not fold a complex idea are

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ideas that are intertwined

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so simplicity means you are not trying

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to mix a bunch of things

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in your description mystery

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um so this is an odd one but what i mean

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is

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anything where it's like i'm not gonna

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understand

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what is going on when you're talking

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about your company jargon is one

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obviously any words that i don't

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understand anything that's fake like

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indefinite pronouns

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so if you just use this etc and you

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don't describe what those nouns are

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and then things that you just suggest

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but aren't explicit about

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and the last is ignorable and so what i

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mean by that is there is some language

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that we will just ignore so

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in ux design people will create a sort

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of blindness

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to things that they don't want to look

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at or they don't find to be of important

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value

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so for example ad blindness is a big one

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that people sort of understand and the

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thing is when you're talking about ideas

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there's a way of using language that is

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also easily ignorable

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things that just won't stick in your

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head things like marketing speak

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there's probably lots of stuff that you

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heard about that mba speak

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we're kind of like puff yourself up

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talk that doesn't give any extra

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information

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and then buzzwords and so when you say

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certain types of words that as an

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investor i've heard over and over again

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or i will equate with zero

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information or value then i will ignore

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them and the result is

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parts of your pitch will end up being

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not even heard by me

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and therefore i will not remember them

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what you want to do

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is be conversational a great pitch is

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one where you can tell it to your mom

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and she gets it

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she's proud of you right

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she's not going to shake her head and

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that means it's got to be conversational

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and that's really good for word of mouth

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because we

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talk in normal conversational speak we

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don't talk

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like an mba we don't talk like ceos all

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the time

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so it's best to talk conversationally

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again avoid jargon words that are only

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you

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understood or used by your industry no

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preamble

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we'll have some examples of this but

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if you want to be clear let's go

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straight to what you want to talk about

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let's not have a winding path to

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eventually getting there

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and the last one this one's a big one

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it's being reproducible

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so when i hear your idea can i imagine

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it in my mind

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can i see

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what i would have to build to create

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your company

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if i don't have that then i have no

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picture in my head about what your

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company does

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and until i have that picture i can't

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ask any of the questions that helps me

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understand if i'm

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excited about you or understand other

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nuances of your business

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to make things reproducible i need to

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know nouns

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i need to have objects that i'm going to

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imagine in my head and there's three

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types of nouns that i should understand

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from your startup idea first one is what

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are you making

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i should be really clear what is the

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problem

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and then who is the customer the two are

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kind of related to the market

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right but i should have these kind of

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three nouns

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in my head so let's go through some

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examples

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this is says we are going to transform

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the relationship

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between individuals and information

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that sucks the thing is we see this all

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the time

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number one all the nouns that you have

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see see down here

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are abstract they're ideas i can't

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reproduce based off of this

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as zero informational value i still have

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to ask questions

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to answer the three nouns that i need to

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have this is a bad description for a

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company

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we will see stuff that starts like this

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when we ask describe what your company

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is going to make

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i don't even want to read it but

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basically it starts talking about the

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story

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of the company or basically it's like in

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the beginning

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there was this problem and we're gonna

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go through this issue

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right and then there's these bad guys

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and they showed up but then who's gonna

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save

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us we're finally here to save and you're

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like i have to read another thousand

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applications

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that's not gonna work for me

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this is the description on the actual

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application that airbnb

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put to yc airbnb is the first online

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marketplace

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that lets travelers book rooms with

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locals instead of hotels

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it's concise it's descriptive i

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understand

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what they're building i have a sense for

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what they're making and then i can start

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thinking about my other two ideas of

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whether i'm excited about it

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and then am i going to like this team

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here's dropbox synchronizes files across

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your

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or your team's computers

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the thing about this is it's refreshing

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but also

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there's no pretense they don't

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they aren't playing defense i see a lot

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of company descriptions

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where they're like i'm worried about

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this or i've gotten this kind of

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feedback and so they give up clarity

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to make themselves look bigger and blow

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themselves up

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or make themselves try to look more

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interesting they're trying to

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protect themselves against something

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away ahead of time and the whole problem

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is usually what it ends up doing

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is it brings me farther away from you

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all that padding that you've put on

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yourself

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here's a description from a company in

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the current batch lumini is building

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x-ray vision

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for soldiers and first responders

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we don't have to go deep into the

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details i don't need to understand

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how they exactly do this etc

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this creates a foundation for my

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curiosity

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now i will start from here to try to

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figure out oh how

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do you do this is this the right team to

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do this

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how far along are they do they have

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traction do they have customers i start

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going down the route of asking all the

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right questions based off this one

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description this is a good one

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here's another one so vahan in the

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current patch is building linkedin

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for the next billion internet users

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so doesn't

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perfectly connect me to what they're

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sort of making

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but i'm intrigued i'm excited about

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someone building into linkedin

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and i know it's some kind of social

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network for business people and so now

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i'm curious about how

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i don't need you to answer how in the

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description but i understand what you're

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doing

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and then now i can start making

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questions in my head about like how

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would i evaluate whether this is

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working or successful or promising or

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not are this is the right team

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do they have a certain amount of

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traction etc it gets me on the right

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track

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now the reason i've used this example is

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because we have a lot of companies who

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try to use the

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x for y and what i mean by that is like

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linkedin for whatever or uber for blank

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or airbnb

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for blank and so that x for y is super

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useful

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because it allows you to shortcut

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business model

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and some kind of complex behavior right

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and then attach it to some other

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vertical or something that you're trying

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to

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make work x or y

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is okay but most people abuse it or do

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it incorrectly so i'm gonna give you

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some tips

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first should you use x for y uh sorry

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for your legibility

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number one is x a household name this

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should be like a billion dollar company

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right you can't use uh your

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uncle's like pet shoe store as the x for

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this

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because people don't know your uncle's

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pet shoe store and they don't know if

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it's successful or not

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right so everyone as many people should

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know about this as possible

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and for an investor it should be clear

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that it's a billion dollar company

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opportunity everyone has to agree

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that it is successful so you could have

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a really big x everyone knows about it

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but it's infamous

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right so the people don't think it's

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successful so be careful of that

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does y want x so is it

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really clear why the

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target that you're going after wants

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this kind of

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model applied to it this kind of

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solution

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applied to it whether it's airbnb 4 or

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airbnb

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or uber 4 etc it should be really clear

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that that's a segment that's either

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missing it

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it's not being served well by the other

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one and also that those people

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want to have that kind of model

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and then the third one is y should be a

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huge market

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so if you're building

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uh x for y and the last part

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doesn't sound like a really big business

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that's not going to work well for you

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right because what we want because

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you're essentially saying that

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you are something but that's a subset

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and what we want to make sure is that

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subset feels like it could be really

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really big

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if you choose a subset that sounds like

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it's going to be really really small

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investors won't be as interested it

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doesn't me it means that i'm worried

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that you will not have

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enough potential headroom to grow to

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become a billion dollar company

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so here's an example that doesn't work

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so we had a company in the batch that

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started off by describing themselves as

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buffer for snapchat buffer is a nice

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company

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but definitely smaller than snapchat

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so don't want to do that all right

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so basic summary for this section

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lead with what not why or how

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you don't need all that other stuff that

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stuff gets in the way of your clarity

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for the most part

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i'll read like a thousand applications

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every single batch

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and it's a really hard thing to do

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basically even though it's my job

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it's really really difficult to have

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that much focused attention

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across all these different applications

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so i need some empathy i need you to

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help me out

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and what we want is that when i bring up

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your application and i'm looking at it

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let's make our intimate time

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really pleasurable right let's make the

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time that i spend on an idea

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very efficient i'll look at it i'll

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understand really clearly

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i'll move around your application and be

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like oh i'm kind of excited maybe

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there's going to have this and i'll look

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at that part i'm like oh they do have it

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that sounds awesome

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oh what about this oh that sounds

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awesome too

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what we don't want is media to go like i

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don't know what

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what are they talking about then i have

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to like go to your website i'm like

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don't know what they're talking about i

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don't know how this sort of works i go

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back to it i try to figure something

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else out

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i try to see if like some other partner

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might understand what you're doing

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etc super inefficient

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is there going to be room for me to get

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excited as a result

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so to be efficient we need to be concise

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concise

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the best way i want to keep this in mind

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is to use some examples

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and so here's some things i need you to

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keep in mind

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yes i want you to be concise use as few

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words as possible

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and what i want you to understand is the

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concision

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is actually gives me secondary

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information

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about you as a team it lets me

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one know that you have thought deeply

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about your idea

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because you thought so deeply about it

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and because you've practiced talking

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about it so much

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and you've gotten really good at getting

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people excited and understanding

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everything really quickly

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you probably have figured out how to do

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it in a short amount of time

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so it lets me know that this is a

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founder that has thought deeply about

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the idea

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the other thing about being concise it

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shows me that you are efficient

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and if you are efficient with your words

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then you're probably efficient with your

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thoughts

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that means you're probably also

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efficient with your actions

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and what that means is that i will start

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to believe that you understand what is

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most important about your business

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you understand how to communicate it

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clearly and you might actually

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know how to always figure out the most

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important part of what to do about your

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company to make it grow

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to make it work etc so

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there's a minimum stuff that we want to

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have even though we're trying to be as

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concise as possible

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again i want to understand the nouns so

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if we're so concise

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that i can't understand these then

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your concision is too much the other is

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i

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want to get to this point when i read

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the concision

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or this short version of whatever it is

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you're talking about because again i

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know there's like a hundred thousand

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reasons why your company is great

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but when i'm reading your application

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i'm only going to maybe remember

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two to three of them and so we have to

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try to make sure

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those most important ones come up to the

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top

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this is a real startup school company

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description

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it's an online e-commerce store

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i can picture what it is but again it's

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not a description that helps me get

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excited about it

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it doesn't help me lead to all the other

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things i have to do now more work

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to understand why this is fast growing

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and his potential

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i also don't know based on this some

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nouns i don't know exactly who the

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customer is

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is it people that they're selling stuff

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to or are they making an e-commerce

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store for other shop owners

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just ambiguity security services

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this is most of the descriptions that we

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see on startup school

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it makes it really hard for us to

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understand it

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a meritocratic decision support system

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the thing is i want to know for what

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for whom i don't even understand what

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the problem is that they're solving

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based off of this

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and so is it for

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is it because a lot of people have

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non-merit basically i have to ask so

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many questions in my head to figure out

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why

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did they get to this sort of description

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learn and sharing knowledge about data

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science and artificial intelligence

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sounds more like a mission i can't tell

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what the product is

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and how they're so we're going to go

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about it like i couldn't reproduce this

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if i had 10

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companies build based off this

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description you'd have

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10 very different products the other

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thing that's odd about company

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descriptions is you guys tend to

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capitalize and make proper nouns very

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weird

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words and phrases you should not do that

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it's not like a magazine title

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um and it makes me think sometimes

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you're emphasizing the wrong things like

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you're thinking the data science and

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artificial intelligence is the thing

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that's going to make me excited

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and the thing is like those are the

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buzzwords those are the solutions

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and it makes me worried that you haven't

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started with a problem

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let's give an example of like how to

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adjust

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a description so here's a much longer

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one so our company will make

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low-cost and low-power consumption

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medical devices based on artificial

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intelligence

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and iot suitable for sub-saharan

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communities

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now relatively clear i can understand it

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reading it

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but it's not the most concise form of

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this and i feel like there's a lot of

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things get in the way

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and so when i work with companies to

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help shrink and reduce

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and improve their descriptions so that i

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will get the most out of it

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um i want to talk through the process

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the first thing i want to do is just

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figure out what are the nouns in the

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description

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here we go our company medical devices

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for sub-saharan communities oh

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we're almost done

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right everything else that gets added on

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here

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whatever verb adjectives or average you

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want you want to be really careful

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you want to know like is it giving

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maximum punch for this

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right and so really

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the verb is going to be usually just

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you're making something

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etc um but usually it's going to be

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whatever the product like the verb is

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like

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the thing that we're making if we're

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thinking about this in an

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active voice structure the subject the

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verb

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and then the object the customer the

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market the people we're going after

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everything else if we add anything back

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to this i really want to be really

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careful about

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why we're going to add back to it is

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that going to be the stuff that makes

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me excited so the artificial

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intelligence and iot suitable stuff

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that's like how they're one gathering

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the technology and i'm more worried that

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they're wanting to use buzzwords to

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describe it

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right hopefully that's like a secret

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weapon that you have but i bet it's not

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the defining characteristics

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of whether this company is successful or

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not and then up here i see two

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modifiers for medical devices low cost

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low power consumption

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so low cost i can definitely see that's

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super interesting if you make a low-cost

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device

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in sub-saharan community then i'm like

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oh that's interest that's really

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interesting because that's like it's

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hard just to make something

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you know for developing countries but to

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make it so it's

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actually affordable for them that'd be

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interesting the low power consumption

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i can give or take there i'd have to

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know more about the company to know

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whether that's actually crucial

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to understanding whether this company

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has an unfair advantage

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or not so if i was to redo this

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we come out to we create affordable

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medical devices for sub-saharan africa

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some people are going to be very

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screamish about this a lot of founders

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are worried it's like you're putting me

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in a box man

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it's too reductive my business is

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complex

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i do a lot of things and a lot of things

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make me great i want to tell you all of

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them

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and the thing is like you don't have

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time and i know it

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as an investor there's no investor that

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thinks any business

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is like simple and easy i just don't

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think that from the default so you

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shouldn't

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be worried that i'm going to think

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something small of it

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and again you want to be careful of the

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defense on here

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once i get to this then i'll start

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asking the other questions

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it creates that foundation for curiosity

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all right we're pretty much here at the

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end the best way to help

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me and i would love for you to help me

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is to be clear and concise

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thank you very much

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you