PBM Modul 4 2025 no 4

Summary

The transcript provides a detailed analysis of multiple options for improving a sentence from a text. Each option is scrutinized for redundancy, grammatical accuracy, and logical flow. Option A is deemed incorrect due to redundancy, Option B is correct for maintaining grammatical consistency by changing 'berkurangnya' to 'pengurangan,' Option C is incorrect because 'gas rumah kaca' is a fixed term, Option D is unnecessary as 'bisa' and 'dapat' are interchangeable, and Option E is incorrect due to the inappropriate use of 'para.' Ultimately, Option B is recommended as the best revision for clarity and structure.

Takeaways

• 😀 The option to add 'pendapat' after 'menurut' is unnecessary as 'menurut' already implies 'based on opinion'.
• 😀 The word 'berkurangnya' is a verb, while 'penurunan' is a noun. To maintain parallelism, 'berkurangnya' should be replaced with 'pengurangan'.
• 😀 The suggestion to add 'pada' after 'gas' in 'gas rumah kaca' is incorrect because 'gas rumah kaca' is a compound noun that should not be separated by 'pada'.
• 😀 The word 'bisa' in 'bisa menjamin' is appropriate as it shows capability, and changing it to 'dapat' would not improve the meaning.
• 😀 Adding 'para' before 'kehidupan terumbu karang' is not correct because 'para' is typically used with humans or specific groups, not abstract concepts like 'kehidupan'.
• 😀 The sentence analysis discusses how language structure should be precise to avoid redundancy or incorrect word usage.
• 😀 Proper word coordination is necessary in sentence structure, particularly when dealing with conjunctions like 'dan' between nouns and verbs.
• 😀 The KBBI (Kamus Besar Bahasa Indonesia) provides clear definitions, and understanding these is crucial for correct language use.
• 😀 Identifying and correcting redundancy in sentences is an important aspect of language refinement.
• 😀 Understanding how different parts of speech interact in a sentence helps improve grammatical accuracy.

Q & A

Why is adding the word 'pendapat' after 'menurut' incorrect?

The word 'menurut' already implies 'based on someone's opinion,' so adding 'pendapat' creates redundancy. 'Menurut' is sufficient on its own to convey the meaning of opinion.

What is the issue with changing 'berkurangnya' to 'pengurangan'?

The word 'berkurangnya' is a verb, while 'pengurangan' is a noun. Since the conjunction 'dan' connects two nouns, 'berkurangnya' needs to be replaced with the noun 'pengurangan' to maintain grammatical consistency.

Why is the addition of 'pada' after 'gas' in Option C incorrect?

The term 'gas rumah kaca' is a fixed compound noun. Adding 'pada' disrupts this term and is grammatically incorrect, as it changes the intended meaning and structure of the phrase.

Is it necessary to replace 'bisa' with 'dapat' in Option D?

No, it's not necessary. Both 'bisa' and 'dapat' express the ability to do something, and in this context, 'bisa' already conveys the intended meaning. Thus, no change is required.

Why is adding 'para' after 'kehidupan' in Option E not appropriate?

'Para' is typically used with people or specific groups. Using it with 'kehidupan terumbu karang' (life of coral reefs) is incorrect, as 'para' doesn't apply to non-human subjects like coral reefs.

What grammatical rule does the correction in Option B adhere to?

Option B adheres to the rule of parallel structure, where two connected elements must be of the same grammatical form. In this case, 'penurunan' (a noun) must be matched with 'pengurangan' (also a noun), instead of 'berkurangnya' (a verb).

Why is 'menurut pendapat' considered redundant in this script?

The phrase 'menurut pendapat' is redundant because 'menurut' already implies 'according to someone's opinion.' Adding 'pendapat' repeats the same meaning, which isn't necessary.

What is the function of the conjunction 'dan' in the sentence?

'Dan' is a coordinating conjunction that links two elements of equal grammatical value. In this context, it connects two nouns, 'penurunan' and 'pengurangan,' which must have the same grammatical form.

What is the reason for not changing 'bisa' to 'dapat' in the script?

'Bisa' and 'dapat' are synonyms in this context, both meaning 'can' or 'able to.' Since 'bisa' is already correctly conveying the intended meaning, there is no need to replace it with 'dapat.'

Why is 'gas rumah kaca' considered a compound noun?

'Gas rumah kaca' is a compound noun because it refers to a specific term or concept. It is made up of two words that together form a single idea, and adding extra words like 'pada' would alter its meaning and structure.