IGCSE First Language English - NEWSPAPER REPORTS VS FORMAL REPORTS (EXTENDED WRITING Q3)

IGCSESUCCESS
30 Apr 202312:09

Summary

TLDRIn this informative video, the presenter prepares students for IGCSE English exams by discussing the structures and purposes of newspaper and formal reports. Despite their rarity in recent exams, understanding these formats is crucial for effective writing. The video outlines key features of each report type, such as catchy headlines and the inverted pyramid structure for newspaper reports, and detailed assessments with recommendations for formal reports. Through clear examples and engaging explanations, viewers are encouraged to practice these skills to enhance their writing and perform confidently in their assessments.

Takeaways

  • 😀 Preparing for newspaper and formal report writing is essential for IGCSE English success.
  • 📰 Newspaper reports are factual accounts of newsworthy events, aiming to inform readers.
  • 📝 A strong newspaper report includes a catchy headline and follows an inverted pyramid structure.
  • 🔍 Direct speech and reported speech are important features to include in newspaper reports.
  • 🏢 Formal reports evaluate business operations and identify areas for improvement.
  • 📊 Recommendations and an unbiased tone are crucial components of formal reports.
  • 📑 Subheadings help organize information effectively in formal reports.
  • 📅 Complex sentences should be preferred over simple ones when writing formal reports.
  • ⚖️ Both report types must maintain a factual and balanced perspective throughout.
  • 🎓 Familiarity with the features and structures of each report type will enhance exam performance.

Q & A

  • What types of reports does the video focus on?

    -The video focuses on newspaper reports and formal reports.

  • Why does the speaker mention that newspaper and formal reports are unlikely to appear in exams?

    -The speaker notes that newspaper reports haven't appeared since 2019, and formal reports since 2018, but emphasizes the importance of being prepared just in case.

  • What is the primary purpose of a newspaper report?

    -The primary purpose of a newspaper report is to inform readers about the facts and details of a particular event.

  • What structure does a newspaper report typically follow?

    -A newspaper report typically follows an inverted pyramid structure, where the most important information is presented first, followed by less critical details.

  • What are some key features of a newspaper report mentioned in the video?

    -Key features of a newspaper report include a catchy headline, factual and balanced content, direct and reported speech, and the inclusion of facts and statistics.

  • Can you provide an example of a catchy headline from the video?

    -An example of a catchy headline provided in the video is 'Science Experiment Explosion Rocks High School Classroom.'

  • What distinguishes a formal report from a newspaper report?

    -A formal report is a detailed document that assesses a business's facilities and operations, focusing on evaluation and recommendations, while a newspaper report is more about informing the public about recent events.

  • What are the key components of a formal report's structure?

    -The key components of a formal report's structure include an introduction, a detailed assessment of problems, recommendations, and a conclusion.

  • What is one recommendation suggested for improving the conditions of IG Hangouts?

    -One recommendation is to establish a regular cleaning schedule for common areas to improve cleanliness.

  • Why is it important to practice writing in both newspaper and formal report formats?

    -It is important to practice writing in both formats to be well-prepared for potential exam questions and to enhance overall writing skills.

Outlines

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📚 Understanding Newspaper and Formal Reports

In this part, the speaker discusses the importance of preparing for the IGCSE English exam, particularly regarding newspaper and formal reports. They note that while it is unlikely for these report types to appear on the exam (as they haven't been featured since 2018 and 2019), it is still essential for students to understand them. The speaker emphasizes the necessity of being able to write both types of reports to effectively tackle question three in the exam. The segment outlines the characteristics of newspaper reports, including their factual nature, impartiality, the need for a catchy headline, and the inverted pyramid structure where the most important information is presented first. A model newspaper report about a science experiment explosion is provided, showcasing elements such as eyewitness accounts, direct and reported speech, and a focus on safety concerns. The part concludes by transitioning into a discussion on formal reports.

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Keywords

💡Newspaper Report

A newspaper report is a factual account of a recent event that is considered newsworthy enough to be published. In the video, it is highlighted as an important text type for students to understand, as they may encounter such questions in exams. The speaker provides an example of a newspaper report about a science experiment explosion, emphasizing the structure and key elements necessary for writing one.

💡Formal Report

A formal report is a detailed document that evaluates a business’s operations, facilities, and services, aiming to identify problems and suggest improvements. The video stresses the importance of knowing how to write formal reports since they may also appear in exams. An example provided is the assessment of a hostel's conditions, demonstrating the structured approach needed in formal reporting.

💡Inverted Pyramid Structure

The inverted pyramid structure is a writing format used in journalism where the most critical information is presented first, followed by supporting details and less important information. This structure is essential in newspaper reporting as it ensures that readers grasp the main points quickly. The speaker mentions this structure while discussing how to write a newspaper report, reinforcing its significance.

💡Catchy Headline

A catchy headline is a compelling title designed to grab readers' attention and summarize the report's main idea. In the context of the video, the speaker stresses its importance in newspaper reports, as a strong headline can entice readers to engage with the article. The example provided, 'Science Experiment Explosion Rocks High School Classroom,' illustrates how an effective headline captures the event's gravity.

💡Direct Speech

Direct speech refers to quoting someone's exact words, typically indicated by quotation marks. It adds authenticity and personal perspective to reports. The video discusses the use of direct speech in newspaper reports, showcasing how it enriches storytelling and provides eyewitness accounts, making the report more relatable and engaging.

💡Reported Speech

Reported speech involves paraphrasing what someone has said without quoting them directly. It is often used in journalism to convey information succinctly while maintaining objectivity. In the video, the speaker contrasts direct speech with reported speech, emphasizing its role in providing context and summarizing comments from eyewitnesses in a balanced manner.

💡Subheadings

Subheadings are headings within a report that divide the content into manageable sections, making it easier for readers to navigate and understand the information. In formal reports, subheadings help organize findings and recommendations. The speaker mentions their use in formal reports to enhance clarity and structure, aiding in the overall presentation of the document.

💡Recommendations

Recommendations are suggested actions or improvements based on findings in a report. They aim to address identified problems and guide future actions. The video highlights the importance of including clear recommendations in formal reports, using the hostel assessment example to illustrate how actionable advice can lead to better outcomes for the business.

💡Factual Account

A factual account is a narrative that presents verified information without bias or personal opinion. In the context of newspaper and formal reports, this approach is crucial for maintaining credibility and trustworthiness. The speaker emphasizes the need for factual accuracy in both types of reports, reinforcing the idea that objective reporting is essential for effective communication.

💡Impartial

Impartiality refers to presenting information fairly and without bias, ensuring that all sides of an issue are represented. The video underscores the necessity of being impartial when writing both newspaper and formal reports. By avoiding personal opinions and focusing on facts, writers can create balanced accounts that serve the audience's need for reliable information.

Highlights

The video introduces the purpose of helping students prepare for IGCSE First Language English.

The speaker expresses skepticism about the likelihood of newspaper or formal reports appearing in exams, citing their rarity.

The last newspaper report was mentioned to have appeared in 2019 and a formal report in 2018.

Students are encouraged to prepare for writing both types of reports despite their rarity.

The speaker emphasizes the importance of being able to write in different text types for exam success.

A newspaper report is defined as a factual account of a recent newsworthy event.

Key purposes of newspaper reports include informing readers about events and providing detailed accounts.

The structure of a newspaper report is described as an inverted pyramid, with important information at the top.

An example newspaper report about a science experiment explosion illustrates key features.

Direct and reported speech are emphasized as important components in newspaper reports.

Formal reports are introduced as detailed documents assessing a business's operations and services.

The purpose of formal reports is to evaluate business standards and highlight problems with recommendations.

Key features of formal reports include factual content, unbiased language, and structured sections with subheadings.

An example formal report about a hostel highlights areas needing improvement, including cleanliness and safety.

The speaker provides clear recommendations for improvements in both the newspaper and formal reports.

The video concludes with encouragement for students to practice writing in various formats to enhance their exam readiness.

Transcripts

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hey what's up guys and welcome back to

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IGCSE success your One-Stop shop for

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everything first language English now if

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truth be known I wasn't going to make

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this video because I do think it's very

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unlikely that Cambridge are going to

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give you a newspaper report or a formal

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report but it could happen and the last

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thing I want you to do is be sitting

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there hoping that the ground opens up

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and swallows you whole in fact I think

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the last time that a newspaper report

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came up was 2019 and the last time a

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formal report came up was 2018. I could

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be wrong however I did spend a

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considerable amount of time looking

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through past papers trying to find a

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newspaper reporter of formal report and

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I just couldn't find any recent ones

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that said because they haven't come up

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in such a long time they could come up

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because they are two prescribed text

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types that you guys need to know so with

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this in mind I have created a very short

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video looking at newspaper reports and

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formal report looking at the differences

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is the purposes and I've written two

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complete models for you should they come

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up and I've said this a million times

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before if you cannot write in each of

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the text types how on Earth can you

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answer a question three successfully so

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enough waffling let's get on with

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looking at newspaper reports and formal

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reports how exciting right guys let's

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get started I don't want this video to

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be super long like my last one report

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writing and you'll notice if you take a

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look at the screen grabs on your screen

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right now they both say read passage a

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so we're talking 2019 and before so it's

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been a long time since newspaper reports

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and formal reports have come up but as

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mentioned before it might be the perfect

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time for them to to come up so it's

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really important that you do prepare you

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do have a go at writing a formal report

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and a newspaper report so that you can

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answer a question three on both of these

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text types okay newspaper reports 101

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I'm gonna whiz through this really quick

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clay apologies if this is teaching

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Grandma to suck eggs I do apologize what

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is a newspaper report well a newspaper

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report is a written it's a factual

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account of a recent event and said event

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is deemed newsworthy enough to be

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published in a newspaper

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why why what is the purpose of newspaper

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reports well they inform readers about

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facts and details of a particular event

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and how do we craft a newspaper report

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well they're factual as I mentioned

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before they're balanced they're

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impartial I don't know where the L's

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gone they include a catchy headline

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facts and statistics interviews

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um in the way of direct speech and

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reported speech and they follow this

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inverted pyramid structure and that is

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the phrase that journalists like to use

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basically it means that the most

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important information is at the top and

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the least important information is at

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the bottom of course there are other

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features but these are really the nuts

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and bolts of a newspaper report and

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there's the inverted pyramid right hand

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side anyway let's take a read of a model

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starting with a catchy headline

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science experiment explosion rocks high

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school classroom

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yesterday a science experiment at a

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local high school turned disastrous when

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an explosion rocked the classroom the

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incident which occurred during a routine

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experiment in a chemistry class left

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students and teachers shaken and raised

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concerns about the safety of science

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experiments in schools according to

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eyewitness accounts the experiment

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involved a combination of chemicals and

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had been going smoothly until suddenly

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there was a loud explosion the force of

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the blast shattered glass and knocked

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over equipment causing chaos in the

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classroom

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several students were injured in the

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blast although none of the injuries were

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serious

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it was like something out of a movie

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said one student who witnessed the

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explosion there was a loud bang and then

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everything started shaking another

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student commented that it was a truly

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terrifying experience Emergency Services

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were called to the scene and the injured

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students were taken to the hospital for

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treatment the school has launched an

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investigation into the incident and has

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temporarily suspended all science

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experiments in tall safety protocols can

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be reviewed so you'll notice I have put

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a number of things in red let's have a

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look at the different features I have

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included well some of the features I've

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included we have a catchy title I've

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mentioned before we have embedded

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Clauses so that's the extra information

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between two commas starting with a

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relative pronoun very typical of

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newspaper reports we've got journalistic

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phrases according to eyewitness accounts

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comma so a complex sentence there past

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tense throughout

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we've got direct speech there and we've

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got reported speech observe the

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differences guys essentially reported

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speech quite often has been paraphrased

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the incident has also raised questions

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about the safety of science experiments

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in schools and the need for better

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training and safety measures for both

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students and teachers it's important

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that we take a step back and review our

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safety protocol said a spokesperson for

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the school we want to ensure that our

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students and staff are safe and and that

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incidence like this never happen again

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the incident has sent shock waves

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through the school Community with many

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expressing their concern and calling for

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stricter safety measures the school has

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assured parents and students that they

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are taking the incident seriously and

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will take all necessary steps to ensure

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the safety of everyone in the school as

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the investigation continues many are

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left wondering what could have caused

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the explosion and what could have been

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done to prevent it the incident serves

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as a reminder of the potential dangers

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of science experiments and the

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importance of safety protocols in

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schools so again we've got direct speech

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there and you should aim to Pepper your

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direct speech or reported speech

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throughout your piece we've got that

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inverted pyramid structure so the

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additional information the least

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important if you like information comes

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towards the end and your final paragraph

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quite often is written in present tense

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what is being done about said problem

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what's going to happen next so let's

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swiftly move on to formal reports what

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is a formal report well it is a detailed

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document that provides a comprehensive

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assessment of a businesses facilities

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operations and services why what is the

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purpose well it seeks to evaluate a

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business's standards and Regulation and

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highlights any problems and how to

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rectify these problems so a business can

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continue thriving and not simply

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surviving how what the features that we

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use well they are also factual they're

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unbiased no flowery language discourse

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markers they quite often have

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subheadings to divide their findings up

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facts and statistics throughout the

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whole thing as well as a formal tone

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throughout and the structure can be as

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simple as introduction these are the

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problems that were found and these are

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the recommendations more on that later

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let's take a read of a model response so

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starting with the title assessing the

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conditions of IG Hangouts see what I did

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there a formal report starting with an

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introduction IG hangout is a budget

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friendly hostel that caters to

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Backpackers and budget Travelers the

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hostel is located in a popular tourist

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destination and offers both dormitory

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and private room options while the

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hostel has received positive reviews for

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its affordability some guests have

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raised concerns about the cleanliness

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and safety of the hostel this report

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examines the conditions of IG hangout a

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Backpacker hostel located in a popular

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tourist destination and highlights areas

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for improvements conditions let's read

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some of the problems after conducting a

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thorough inspection of IG hangout we

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observe the following conditions firstly

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the common areas including the kitchen

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and Lounge were found to be unclean and

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not up to acceptable safety standards

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surfaces and Floors had visible dirt and

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dust secondly there was a lack of

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Maintenance with broken fixtures and

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leaky Faucets in facilities such as the

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showers and toilets thirdly we noted a

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clear pest infestation with guest

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reporting sightings of pests such as

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cockroaches and mice in both their rooms

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and common areas lastly ventilation

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around the hostel was poor many of the

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rooms were poorly ventilated with no

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windows or inadequate air conditioning

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leading to stuffy and uncomfortable

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sleeping conditions so let's take a look

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at some of the features that I have put

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in red

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so first of all we've got the title of

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the report

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subheading number one outlining the

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business and purpose of report

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subheading 2 outlining the problems

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found during the inspection and lastly

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discourse markers to structure your

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ideas and to create that formal tone and

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let's read the second half ending with

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the recommendations and conclusions and

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for recommendations you can bullet point

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guys that is typical or formal reports

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to improve the conditions of IG hang out

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the following recommendations are

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suggested cleaning the hostels should

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establish a regular cleaning schedule

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for common areas and ensure that all

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services and floors are thoroughly

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cleaned and sanitized maintenance the

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hostel should conduct regular

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maintenance checks to ensure that all

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facilities including showers and toilets

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are in good working condition Pest

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Control the hostel should hire a pest

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control company to eliminate any Pest

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infestations and establish regular Pest

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Control measures ventilation the hostel

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should invest in proper ventilation

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systems such as installing Windows or

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improving air conditioning to provide

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guests with comfortable sleeping

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conditions ending with the conclusion IG

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hangout Backpacker hostel is a

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budget-friendly option for travelers but

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the conditions of the Hostile need

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Improvement dirty common areas lack of

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Maintenance pest infestation and poor

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ventilation are areas of concern that

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should be addressed by implementing the

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recommendations provided the hostel can

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improve its conditions and provide a

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more comfortable and safe environment

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for its guests

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so the final section for recommendations

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as mentioned you can bullet end with a

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conclusion what happens next and what I

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didn't mention before take note of the

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sentence types that you are using

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complex sentences rather than simple

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sentences are preferred when writing

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formal reports and that's everything

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guys uh I hope this video has been

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useful let me know in the comments below

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and I will try and churn out a couple

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more videos before your exam next week

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until next time bye-bye

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