The pilots are trash, but at least they turned into something better.

Unofficial Milky Way
19 May 202127:06

Summary

TLDRThe creator reviews their early animated series for 'Milky Way and the Gospels,' expressing discomfort with the pilot's quality compared to a new episode. They critique the pilot's animation, themes, and character inconsistencies, highlighting 'Jupiter's Protest' as a favorite. The creator also discusses their growth, improved character development, and plans for the series' future, promising better quality and more engaging storylines.

Takeaways

  • 😀 The speaker is discussing the pilot series of an animated show they created, which was their first foray into animation.
  • 😳 They feel uncomfortable because the new episodes make the pilot series look inferior in quality.
  • 🎬 The pilot series was created without a voice cast and used text boxes, which the speaker regrets.
  • 🚀 The pilot had weird plotlines and characters that were out of character, like Jupiter threatening and lying.
  • 🎭 The speaker has learned a lot about the series and its characters over the past year and feels more experienced now.
  • 😅 They admit to using a lot of 'funny faces' in the animation, which they now find weird.
  • 🎵 The speaker is proud of the vocal effects used, especially the feminine sounds of the Galaxy Girls.
  • 🎨 They mention using fan art, which caused controversy, and promise to only use approved fan art in the future.
  • 😓 The speaker criticizes specific episodes for being nonsensical or having plot holes, like 'Saturn Shuffles'.
  • 🎄 They enjoyed creating the Christmas special episode and plan to include more singing in future episodes.
  • 🎉 The new episode took two months to make and the speaker is proud of the improved quality and storyline.

Q & A

  • What was the creator's initial feeling about the pilot series?

    -The creator initially felt uncomfortable with the pilot series because it was their first attempt at creating videos for the Milky Way and Gospels animated series.

  • What was the main purpose of the pilot series?

    -The main purpose of the pilot series was to throw out ideas for an actual show, with each episode presenting different concepts that might be used in a full series.

  • Why did the creator feel the pilot series looked 'trash' compared to the new episode?

    -The creator felt the pilot series looked 'trash' because they were new to the industry at the time and lacked experience, which resulted in weird plots and inconsistencies in character behavior.

  • What was the creator's opinion about the theme song of the pilot series?

    -The creator considered the theme song to be clickbait, as it promised impressive animation that did not necessarily reflect the quality of the actual content.

  • Which episode of the pilot series did the creator particularly like?

    -The creator particularly liked the first episode, 'Jupiter's Protest,' for its plot where Jupiter tries to save her tree.

  • What was the creator's criticism of the 'Saturn Shuffles' episode?

    -The creator criticized 'Saturn Shuffles' for having a nonsensical plot, such as Saturn stealing a book from the library, which was out of character.

  • How did the creator feel about the character portrayals in the pilot series?

    -The creator felt that some characters were out of character and did not act as they would in the actual series, which made the episodes feel weird and uncomfortable.

  • What was the creator's view on the use of fan art in the pilot series?

    -The creator expressed regret over using fan art and stated that any future use of fan art would be approved and shared on the Discord server.

  • What was the creator's opinion on the 'Fine Innovation Humiliation' episode?

    -The creator thought the 'Fine Innovation Humiliation' episode was one of the worst, criticizing the plot for making Uranus appear less knowledgeable than expected and for not making sense.

  • What did the creator like about the 'Doctor Who' episode?

    -The creator liked the 'Doctor Who' episode for its humor and the appearance of a funny face that they found amusing and planned to use more in the future.

  • How did the creator's approach to creating the new episode differ from the pilot series?

    -For the new episode, the creator took more time, included voice acting, improved the storyline, and focused on making it more enjoyable and comedic for the audience.

Outlines

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🎬 Reflections on the Pilot Series

The speaker begins by expressing discomfort with the pilot series of the Milky Way Gospels animated series, which were their first videos. They acknowledge the series' creation as a significant achievement but feel it now pales in comparison to their current work. The pilot series, intended to generate ideas for an official show that never materialized, is criticized for its amateurish nature, including the use of text boxes due to the lack of a voice cast and odd plotlines. The speaker fondly recalls certain episodes like 'Jupiter's Protest' but criticizes others like 'Saturn Shuffles' for their nonsensical content. They also discuss the evolution of their understanding and portrayal of the characters over time.

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😅 Critiquing Early Creations

In this paragraph, the speaker continues to dissect their early work, pointing out inconsistencies and flaws in the animation and storytelling. They recount a friend's cameo, the use of fan art, and the regret over certain creative decisions. The speaker also addresses specific episodes, like 'Fine Innovation Humiliation', where they found the portrayal of certain characters illogical. They express a desire to improve and learn from these early mistakes, aiming for higher quality in their future projects.

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🚀 Analyzing Character Development

The speaker delves into the character development in the pilot series, noting how their understanding of the characters has evolved. They discuss specific character traits, such as Neptune being a 'dunce', and how these traits have been incorporated into the series. They also mention the use of humor and the introduction of new characters like Pluto, who was previously absent from episodes due to a lack of song ideas. The speaker reflects on their growth as a creator and the improvements made in the new episodes, such as better character voices and storylines.

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🎄 The Christmas Special and Character Redemption

This section focuses on the Christmas special episode, which the speaker loved for its sensible storyline and character development. They discuss how the episode humanized the characters and allowed for redemption arcs, particularly for Mercury, who was portrayed negatively in earlier episodes. The speaker also talks about their intention to retcon certain aspects of the characters' backstories for consistency and to avoid contradictions within the series' narrative.

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🎸 The Evolution of the Series

The speaker reflects on the progress made in the series, from the pilot to the current episodes. They discuss the addition of new characters like Pluto and the Sun, who were previously absent, and the improvements in animation quality. They also touch on their creative process, including the challenges of scripting and the decision to limit previews for upcoming episodes to maintain an element of surprise for the audience.

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🎉 Looking Forward to Future Episodes

In the final paragraph, the speaker expresses excitement for the future of the series, mentioning that a second episode is in the works. They discuss the challenges of working with a script written by someone else and the desire to maintain the element of surprise for the audience. The speaker also reflects on their role as a creator and the satisfaction of seeing their work bring joy to the fandom.

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Keywords

💡Pilot Series

A pilot series refers to the initial set of episodes created to introduce a television show to potential sponsors or networks. In the context of the video, it refers to the creator's first attempts at animating for the Milky Way and Gospels animated series. The creator reflects on the pilot series, noting its shortcomings and growth since its creation, such as improved character development and animation skills.

💡Animation Industry

The animation industry encompasses the production of animated content, including television shows, films, and online media. The video creator discusses their initial foray into this industry, indicating a learning curve and a progression in their skills over time. The term is used to set the stage for the creator's journey from novice to a more experienced animator.

💡Character Development

Character development is the process of constructing and evolving a character's personality and attributes over time. The script mentions the creator's increased understanding of the characters' traits, such as Neptune being a 'dunce', which reflects a deeper character development in the newer episodes compared to the pilot series.

💡Clickbait

Clickbait is content that uses sensationalist headlines or eye-catching thumbnails to attract viewers. The video script uses the term to critique the pilot series' theme song, suggesting it overpromises in terms of animation quality, leading to disappointment when viewers realize the actual production quality.

💡Storyboard

A storyboard is a visual representation of a script, used in filmmaking and animation to plan out scenes. The creator mentions creating a storyboard for the new episode, indicating a more structured and detailed approach to animation production compared to the pilot series.

💡Voice Cast

A voice cast refers to the group of actors who provide voices for animated characters. The video discusses the addition of a voice cast to the new episodes, which adds depth to the characters and enhances the overall production value of the series.

💡Fan Art

Fan art is artwork created by fans of a particular series, show, or movie, often featuring characters from the source material. The script mentions the creator's past use of fan art and a decision to move away from it, aiming for original content creation and approval through a Discord server.

💡Canon

Canon, in the context of storytelling, refers to the official events or narrative within a fictional universe. The creator expresses a desire for certain episodes not to be considered canon, indicating a distinction between the pilot series and the official narrative they wish to establish.

💡Parody

A parody is a work that imitates another work with humor or satire. The video creator mentions parodying the story of 'A Christmas Carol' in one of the episodes, showing a playful and creative approach to storytelling within the animated series.

💡Retcon

Retcon, short for retroactive continuity, is a term used when creators change previously established facts in a fictional work. The script refers to the possibility of retconning certain elements, such as Mercury's backstory, to align with a more coherent narrative.

💡Sneak Peek

A sneak peek is a preview or a glimpse of something that is not yet available to the public. The creator mentions providing sneak peeks of the new episodes, indicating excitement and a strategy to build anticipation among the audience.

Highlights

Creator discusses discomfort with early pilot series of Milky Way and Gospel animated series.

Pilot series was the first attempt at animation for the creator.

The creator praises the pilot series for creating an animated series that was supposed to happen 10 years ago.

New episodes make the pilot series look inferior due to the creator's growth in the animating industry.

The theme song of the pilot series is criticized as clickbait.

The pilot series was a collection of ideas for an actual show that may not happen officially.

The creator reflects on their inexperience with the series at the time of the pilot.

The first episode, 'Jupiter's Protest', is liked for its plot but criticized for character inconsistencies.

The second episode, 'Saturn Shuffles', is considered trash and nonsensical.

The creator regrets using fan art and prefers original content.

The episode 'Fine Innovation Humiliation' is criticized for character inaccuracies.

The creator discusses the overuse of a particular facial expression in the series.

The 'Doctor Who' episode is seen as average with a memorable face appearance.

The creator regrets using certain voices for characters in the pilot series.

The Christmas special is praised for its storyline and character development.

The creator expresses a desire to be part of the audience rather than managing the series.

The new episode 'Prom Video' took two months to produce, a significant increase in time from the pilot series.

All characters now have voices, and the creator is pleased with the improved intro.

The storyline of the new episode involves friends trying to cheer up Mars.

The creator is already working on the second episode but is stuck on a particular scene.

The creator plans no previews for the second episode to maintain an element of surprise.

Transcripts

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hey y'all an official here and

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i want to talk about something that

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makes me a little uncomfortable here and

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there

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and that is the entire pilot series

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yes these were the first videos

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i've ever created for a milky way in the

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gospels animated series

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and it's not too bad i mean i i like

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i praise these because it created an

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animated series for the show

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that was supposed to happen when 10

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years ago

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it and and yeah i

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i think it's fairly good but i really

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feel uncomfortable now

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now that i got an actual new episode of

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not so artistic makes this entire pilot

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series look

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trash and i'm going to tell you why i

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think it looks trash

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i was new to the animating industry for

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this kind of thing

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like basically the theme song is just

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clickbait you think oh wow

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look at this sick animation

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yeah this is going to be the most epic

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cartoon i've ever seen in my entire life

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are the spongebob squarepants

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better than fairly odd parents invaders

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in etcetera

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and then and then we get to the to this

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why does this exist this is stupid

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uh how do i

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so the thing the point of this pilot

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series was

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ideas thrown out there for an actual

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show

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the all of these episodes are ideas i've

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given

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for an actual show to happen

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but of course that will probably not

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happen officially

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at least some fan will probably pick it

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up wait

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didn't i do that did i do that

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so it makes me uncomfortable because

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well

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i mean the text boxes first of all but i

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didn't have a cast at the time so i

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didn't really have a choice

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but a lot of the episodes just had

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really weird plots this first one

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jupiter's protest i actually like this

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one

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i like the plot that jupiter is trying

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to save her tree but then she starts

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getting out of character

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i'm like like she starts threatening

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uh starts lying to everybody

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like i don't know that's not what the

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real jupiter would do

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not not not the planet let's be confused

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with our planet

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but that's not what you'd do in the

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series

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and i'm just trying to think of things

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here

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i was less experienced with the series

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back then than i am now

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now that it's may 2021 i've been almost

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um

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a year as a fan i i didn't really

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i i didn't really know too much back

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then well or haven't really gotten the

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ideas down but now

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that it's almost been a year i fully

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know this series

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i know everything about it and i have

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the personalities

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perfectly and maybe some of my own

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traits thrown in there like

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neptune being a little bit of a dunce

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so

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i mean it's got it's got its good things

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like um

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so yeah this one was a good episode it's

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a good way to start the series off

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um it could be changed the second one

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saturn shuffles

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was trash i do not like this one

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it makes no sense first off saturn would

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not

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steal a book from the library like

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what's the point of stealing a book from

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the library

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tell the the debut it's also the debut

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of this space yes i i will always be

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bringing this face back so expect space

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to appear a lot more in the future

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i i just think it's funny for whatever

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reason i i used this one time and i just

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i just couldn't stop i made an entire

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episode based on that

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uh yep

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uh and there were many weird faces of

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this

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i i i feel very weirded out by most

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these weird faces

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this is silly okay uh

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this next one super mars this one's a

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pretty good one too like

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mars being a superhero she probably

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would act like this coming to think of

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it but there was many disturbing moments

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in the series like this one

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i i'd rather forget this creepy face

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oh yeah it was also the beautiful vocals

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and like even though they're just sound

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effects it's the first time the galaxy

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girls made feminine sounds

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and that really satisfies me

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what is oh yeah i forgot about this

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my friend uh he wanted me to give him a

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cameo so i did that

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he's at 97 dollars it's a sonic rubber

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blaster card thing you'll have to ask

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him

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hey luigi so what else is there

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um this one fine

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innovation humiliation now the earnest

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episodes are probably

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some of the worst ones

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it just first off virgo was never shown

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changing the grade on screen

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second of all uranus is supposed to

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know everything right off the bat like

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she should know what's going on every

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time in this case she doesn't

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she should have been questioning how she

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got an effort this makes absolutely no

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sense somebody

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edited my grades i am the smartest

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student in school

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instead uranus thinks she actually got

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an f and i think that's really

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bland

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it makes it's just weird it's just

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oh yeah i still fan art too i'm never

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doing that again

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the the artists have everybody to get

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mad at me for this

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every time i'm using fan art it will be

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approved it will be on the discord

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server

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what else is okay i've said that a

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billion times

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because i didn't want saturn's shuffle

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to be canon there's a flashback and this

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one that

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that goes shattered straw flips so there

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is a flashback of sour chocolate so this

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one cannot

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you cannot either here's another decent

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one

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doctor who it was all right i mean uh

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it felt the fuzzy appearance of this

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infamous face

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um and

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um about scene uh

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what else is there oh yeah there was

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there was a funny one

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why is my opinion suddenly changing

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that's us

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i had so many negative feelings until i

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made this video bro

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a friend of mine said that as soon as

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she opened her mouth he got a discord

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ping so

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it was like right when she opened the

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mouse

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stewie said to be a rubert that that

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that should not be there

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and there was also a mistake here if you

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look closely milky's legs are kind of

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broken you'd have to

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see a cleaner picture just notice the

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glitch

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at least um

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this why it is why doesn't if we have a

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picture of her in a bikini on the wall

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oh

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uh okay next one oh don't make milky

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this one surprisingly has

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a top views like

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this is one of the most viewed episodes

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it's not even an episode it's just a

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short

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i thought this one didn't make any sense

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here it didn't make sense she was the

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the scene was because she she's dreaming

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of being in a funeral with one of her

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friends

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dying and the tv is where

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um is where the uh where the dead body

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would be

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like where the casket is

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she doesn't hear the cat music

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i thought that would make me confuse a

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lot of people so that's just

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what i thought of

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um

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who goes to a person's house and waves

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their foot in their face while they're

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sleeping

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jupiter moon that's and it's basically a

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piranha plant

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and that was the i like your scream

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and this is the very famous card scene

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uh

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the sun like notices i just goes back to

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sleep

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um close should have been burned but in

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i wasn't thinking of that

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i can't believe milky way survived this

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and doesn't even realize she almost died

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oh okay okay this is the worst episode

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of the series like

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by far the worst through saturn's

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shoplift this is easily the worst

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first off they can fly so why are they

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driving a car

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second of all why did they just

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they end up in a forest and they just

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stay there like

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they they got nothing they can fly

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well yeah they could fly in the series

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so they could just fly out of this

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forest no problem

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so oh in my mouth

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uh i don't know this one this one felt

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disturbing to watch especially the scene

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apple yeah i i thought that it was very

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disturbing

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spongebob it's a high-pitched spongebob

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audio i

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i did that many times

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and same with this uh metal

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metal gears yeah

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no oh yeah

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every time neptune's face is zoomed in

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up close making that neutral face i

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can't help but laugh

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um this is again it

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it's an episode that really wouldn't

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make sense if it was if it aired

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i stole battle for dream island cake

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because it's just it's like

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it's completely ridiculous and messed up

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episode

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darren's new job it may be the longest

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but

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there's one problem with this and that

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is no matter where you go in the video

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you can stop anywhere in the video

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and you get this face like

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it's literally not that hard

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to uh

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get the space okay i lied

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it it's actually twice as far actually

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it's very hard i

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i actually thought it would be much

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easier

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and there are it's very overused in this

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episode

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and this one she doesn't have her

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earrings

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or nose ring for the scene which is an

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error

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the the main reason that this makes me

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comfortable with the xboxes

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uh cancer doesn't make any sense

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he doesn't have anything on him to prove

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that he he can drop down a business

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so he basically just made saturn totally

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gullible

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it it it's a very weird episode in my

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opinion

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i i do not like cancer in this episode

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because he makes absolutely no sense

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you can regret a project just a couple

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months later after creation

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how about that this is probably the best

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episode

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this one at least makes sense it defines

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mercury and jupiter's characters quite

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well

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it's not a powerpuff girls episode if

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correct

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if anyone's seen that one where

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buttercup went through the sensei

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because she literally had that

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aggressive

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mood on her and she beat up fuzzy and

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and then she got he came to a sensei to

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calm down

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that that's what this episode is based

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on i forget the name of it but i'm sure

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you guys remember it

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if any of you watch the powerpuff girls

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i'll bring up the 2016 or live action

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reboots um

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stupid stupid stupid

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not loading buffering

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laughing by stupid wi-fi

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i literally regret using rainbow dash

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for

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mercury i thought it'd be a great idea

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but now that i actually done it i regret

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it

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same with mars using bubbles voice

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but they're they're not too bothersome

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that's the that's the voices i was

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trying to get them but

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when my voice cast came they thought of

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other things which is just as

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acceptable i like that too it's also

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more original

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my idea was not

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let me just cut to the good parts

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violence resolves nothing it should be

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an internet meme for whatever reason

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like they should literally just have

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that picture of jupiter there and then

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they put in their own text

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that would be hilarious

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the return of this face

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[Music]

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oh yeah i forgot about this face mercury

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making this face is extremely

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cringy

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oh no no way worse than food wars come

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to think of it like that slack

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first off romeo and juliet don't

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actually appear

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they're just constantly mentioned

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throughout throughout the uh

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throughout the episode and second of all

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this was all a dream

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which is better because if it actually

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happened

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this this would totally ruin your

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character

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we all get those weird dreams and this

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is uranus's weird dream

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that i really like in here it's this is

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this part

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i like how that turned out and that was

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probably the best part

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this is why neptune is one of the

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greatest characters

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um

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let's tell i hate this episode for

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burning yours character

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and yeah oh the christmas special the

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christmas special was great

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i'm gonna tell you all that i love this

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one

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and only because it makes a lot of sense

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well i mean yeah if anyone's the jerk it

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would probably be mercury but

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in the real series they probably also

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would have probably done it differently

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not make mercury a big jerk like i did

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that's changing in the new series she's

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gonna be a lot more nicer

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i i didn't i i regret making her a jerk

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now this story just is wonderful like

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mercury doesn't like what mars

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gave her and she gets mad about it

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it

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and then it's haunted by the three

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spirits

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that three three ghosts a best present

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and yet to come

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and just like in a christmas carol love

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that story

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and i love the many parodies of it like

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people have been parrying the story a

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lot

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i did it too like mercury went to school

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had a lonely childhood

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and it also also gave her the

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the liking of speed just by watching tv

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that's probably not i'm probably gonna

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what's the word

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um retconned this and have her come

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up with her liking of speed a different

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way if you don't know what reconning

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means it means changing the story

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changing up

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something that happened in the past and

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a new episode like one episode

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has a different past compared to the

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other which they

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apparently happened it when it doesn't

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make sense is what i'm trying to say

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spongebob does this a lot

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i don't know let's look up right on i

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can't explain it here's the present

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it was also a ball of joy until until

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mercury makes her mad

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and yet to come which is probably a

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comment yet the scariest one

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i like mercury at the window right here

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except this crying scene was very

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disturbing uh

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the ending was really heartwarming yeah

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this is my custom idea but

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like if the episode was actually

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produced this is my idea but now that i

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actually got a castle

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and the shares are supposed to be songs

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in it they're supposed to be singing

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so when i want to remake this again

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it will definitely have a song open can

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sing

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well i hope bianca can sing because they

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voice

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my two favorite characters

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which are these two i might impress

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it with saturn's episodes because these

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two are by far my favorite characters

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i mean do you think that fuss would

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actually use this kind of face on saturn

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this was incredibly lazy that was very

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lazily done now it was in the middle of

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night i was trying to get this out on

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christmas

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as a little christmas gift merry

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christmas

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this was recycled from episode 8 and it

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is poorly traced

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oh this was entirely recycled from

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episode 8

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which is very lazy

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i like how the music is better though

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that was the story in the actual episode

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like they actually form a column and

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finds the fragment

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this next one it's not bad

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in fact this is how this is how pluto's

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actors got the role

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she dubbed this episode in pluto's voice

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so moving on someday i can't believe it

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took up to the end to get a pluto

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episode like i haven't had a pluto

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episode in a while because

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pluto performs the rock guitar and i i

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just i don't know i

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i was really short on song ideas back

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then i couldn't really make songs

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because i didn't have a cast so pluto

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didn't get to have her own episode at

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the time

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but until now the sun also never got her

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own episode for that reason

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i'll probably give someone an episode

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now

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series and will no longer smile like

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this she will go all mandy like

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in the future

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moon makes a really disturbing face um

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all right that let's find out okay in

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this last

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one which is a episode mercury goes back

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into her jerk character

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just after the christmas special

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i almost i almost got pluto to say

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mercury who at the end of the episode

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but i didn't want that because

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of the christmas special because it was

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a scene where if mercury doesn't turn

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good she'll disappear forever

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i i just i don't know

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trying to keep mercury alive

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oh yeah to make up for the fact that sun

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didn't ever one episode i made her the

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scorekeeper

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she makes a good um she's a good host

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and there was a very bad joke in this

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i after watching madagascar 3 i thought

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afros

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were just fake hair they're actually

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real

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so this is this isn't real her hair is

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real

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damn it muddy gas card free why are you

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gonna do that to me

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and uh that about sums up my opinion of

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the pilot series

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it sucks but it's funny moments

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and uh what did i do differently

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in this new episode well first off i i i

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took more time into it this episode prom

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video

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took a lot more of the time than

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expected i thought it would only take a

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single week to make

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it didn't it took it took

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two months still a short amount of time

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to produce a cartoon but

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i i'll figure this out

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i love now they all have voices

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the intro's still there i i criticize

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how

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it's only the main five and not the

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others

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everybody should be on that intro and

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this was just the better intro in my

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opinion

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and i don't favor the jibby's it's also

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got a good storyline too

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like mars is upset

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so her friends tried to cheer her up

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there's one thing that i don't like

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about the episode is the fact that

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well if she's already happy and i make

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her go out and do fun stuff to get it

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off her mind

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if it's already off her mind i didn't

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really think about that when i was

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producing the storyboard

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but but the scenes all those scenes are

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pretty fun to watch anyway so

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it still it still fills in the gap

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i don't think i should use that right

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but

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it's it's much better

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yes that is me that is me talking

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i'm already annoyed at this episode

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because i had to watch it like 20

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billion times

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to make sure that everything goes along

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well and i don't even feel part of the

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audience anymore

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i i i produced this i i wish to be part

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of the audience but

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i actually have to manage the series now

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i did this so uh i i did this or

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everybody in this fandom would just be

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happy now

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we're we're tired of this we're getting

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a cartoon even if it's fan made

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and it's also humorous it i watched

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bianca's reaction and she laughed

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several times

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that's what i was going for comedy

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and it turned out to be pretty well at

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the end

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the final result turned out really well

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maybe the ending could have been better

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but it's all right

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there's a second episode of the works

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right i haven't worked on in a while

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because i'm stuck on this one scene i

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have to discuss

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with because i didn't write the script

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for the second episode i

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um someone else wrote it and i have to

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discuss

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with her about about the script a little

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because i'm stuck on it

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but who cares right now because there's

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a second episode of the works

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i'm hoping that it takes less time than

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the first episode

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without becoming a lazy project

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and i love what's running out so far um

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i don't think i'll be posting any

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previews for it because i want

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i want people to you know not know

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what's going to happen

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like they're going to watch the whole

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episode without knowing what's going to

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happen

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i was thinking about doing that instead

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where as this one i put

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two sneak peeks in because i was really

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excited to show off my new style

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well okay so this video is much longer

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so i'm gonna wrap it up

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so i'm gonna see you guys next time

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