Ridwan Remin: Bermain Layangan - SUCI 7
Summary
TLDRThe comedian reminisces about his childhood, highlighting how playing traditional kite games was a significant part of his youth. He humorously contrasts the simplicity of childhood games with the costs of injuries and mishaps. As he grew older, his focus shifted from kites to girls during his high school years. He shares funny experiences from school, such as pranks on his birthday and amusing encounters with strangers. The set includes clever callbacks, wordplay, and relatable humor about growing up, friendships, and the unexpected costs of popularity.
Takeaways
- 😀 The speaker reminisces about the joys of playing with kites during childhood, mentioning that it was a cherished part of their younger years.
- 🪁 Kites are seen as a unique traditional game that is thrilling yet comes with unexpected costs, like getting injured while chasing them.
- 🤝 When people chase kites together and catch one, they often share the parts, like one person getting the kite and another getting the string.
- 🚴♂️ The speaker jokes about switching from playing with kites to pursuing relationships with girls during high school, reflecting a shift in interests.
- 🎉 Celebrating birthdays in school often led to the speaker being asked to treat others, even by those they barely knew.
- 😅 Popularity in school brought challenges, such as being pranked on birthdays, including being covered with flour and eggs.
- 🤢 The speaker humorously imagines that people who look disheveled on the street might just be having a rough birthday celebration.
- 🤣 The script captures the comedian’s style, noted for its smooth transitions and effective callbacks to earlier jokes.
- 🖋️ The comedian is praised for his skillful writing, precise word choices, and clever setup of premises and punchlines.
- 👏 Feedback from peers highlights the comedian's maturity in comedic writing and his ability to make audiences laugh consistently.
Q & A
What is the main theme of the script?
-The script is mainly about nostalgic childhood memories of playing with kites, transitioning into humorous reflections on school life, popularity, and absurd experiences related to birthday traditions.
Why does the speaker consider kite flying to be an expensive hobby?
-The speaker humorously suggests that while the cost of a kite is minimal (around 1000 rupiah), accidents like getting hit by a motorcycle while chasing a kite could result in medical expenses of up to half a million rupiah.
What makes chasing a broken kite exciting for the speaker?
-The excitement comes from the thrill of chasing a kite when it breaks free. The speaker adds that when chasing with friends, they would divide the spoils, with one keeping the kite and another taking the string.
How does the speaker view his behavior in high school?
-The speaker reflects on his high school years as a time of mischief and flirtation. He jokes that instead of chasing kites, he started 'chasing girls,' reflecting on his playful and mischievous nature during that period.
How does the speaker feel about the popularity he gained from being mischievous?
-The speaker appreciates the popularity he gained from being mischievous, as it helped him make many friends. However, he also finds it frustrating that people expected him to treat them during his birthday, even if they had just met.
What humorous comparison does the speaker make regarding people asking for birthday treats?
-The speaker compares the frustration of people asking for birthday treats to the annoyance of parking attendants at minimarkets, who demand payment for just a brief stop, questioning their contribution to his life.
What birthday tradition does the speaker find unpleasant?
-The speaker finds the tradition of being pranked on birthdays unpleasant, sharing a story of being thrown with eggs, flour, and butter, making him feel like an 'adonan' (dough) ready to be baked into a cake.
What does the speaker find absurd about some birthday pranks?
-The speaker finds it absurd that a friend was once pranked by being doused in dirty water (air comberan), which made him look and smell so bad that the speaker humorously questions if many homeless people are actually just victims of birthday pranks.
How does the speaker transition between different parts of his story?
-The speaker transitions smoothly between stories, moving from childhood kite flying to high school experiences, using humor and callbacks to earlier jokes, which keeps the flow of the stand-up routine engaging.
What do the judges appreciate about the speaker’s stand-up routine?
-The judges appreciate the speaker’s skill in writing, his clever use of callbacks (e.g., jokes about getting hit by a motorcycle and contributions to his life), and his choice of words, which enhances the comedic effect and makes the audience laugh more.
Outlines
🪁 Childhood Memories of Playing Kites
The speaker fondly recalls childhood memories of playing with kites, a traditional pastime that brought joy and adventure. Despite the low cost of kites, the experience of chasing them, especially when they break free, was thrilling. The speaker jokes about the risks involved, like colliding with motorbikes while chasing kites, which could result in hefty medical bills. He humorously narrates how kite chasing was often shared among friends, with the spoils (kite or string) divided between them. As he grew older and entered high school, the speaker's focus shifted from kites to impressing girls, playfully reflecting on his mischievous behavior during his school years.
😂 The Challenges of Popularity and Birthdays
The speaker humorously reflects on how his popularity in school led to increased demands from friends, especially around his birthday. He jokes about how even people who barely knew him would expect him to treat them on his special day. This culminates in a witty comparison between these opportunistic requests and the absurdity of parking attendants who offer minimal assistance yet still expect tips. Additionally, the speaker shares comical anecdotes of being pranked on his birthday with eggs and flour, likening the process to being turned into a cake. He then speculates, in jest, that some of the disheveled individuals we see on the streets might simply be victims of extreme birthday pranks.
Mindmap
Keywords
💡Layangan (Kite)
💡Chasing the Kite
💡Motor Accident
💡High School (SMA)
💡Popularity
💡Birthday Traditions
💡Contributions to Life
💡Parking Attendants
💡Callback in Comedy
💡People with Mental Illness
Highlights
The speaker reminisces about childhood, mentioning playing with kites as one of the most enjoyable parts.
The speaker humorously describes the expense of kite flying, noting how chasing a kite can result in accidents with vehicles, leading to costly medical bills.
Sharing kites with friends is a common part of the game, with the speaker describing how the spoils are split between friends.
The speaker reflects on how chasing a kite was the most exciting part of the game, especially when running alongside friends.
As the speaker grows older, their priorities change, with kite flying giving way to chasing romantic relationships in high school.
The speaker humorously admits to being mischievous during school, which led to popularity and many friends.
During the speaker’s birthday, they describe how friends would ask for treats, sometimes people they barely knew would also request gifts.
The speaker finds humor in the lack of contribution from people who suddenly want favors after minimal interaction.
The speaker compares this to parking attendants at convenience stores, who request fees for minimal effort.
The speaker talks about being pranked on their birthday, where friends throw eggs and flour at them, joking that they became an 'adonan' (cake dough).
The speaker describes a more extreme prank on a friend, who was doused with sewer water, leaving them dirty and smelly.
A humorous suspicion arises that the people we see as 'crazy' on the streets might just be victims of a similar birthday prank.
The speaker suggests asking such 'crazy' individuals if they’re just celebrating a birthday to see if they want a treat.
The comedic material is praised by a reviewer for its well-organized structure and effective use of callbacks, such as referencing accidents with motorbikes.
The speaker is acknowledged for their strong writing skills, with emphasis on careful word choices that enhance the humor.
Transcripts
asalamualaikum warahmatullahi
wabarakatuh ada yang suka main layangan
banyak ya Ada yang mau
bayarinan kado
beginian tapi waktu kecil gua memang
masa-masa terindahnya salah satunya
ketika gua bisa main layangan gitu
karena buat gua tuh layangan adalah
salah satu permainan tradisional yang
paling bonavit ya modalnya gede l kalau
percaya coba lu hitung harga layangan
berapa paling 1000 kan kita beli kita
terbangin Put terus kita kejar ketabrak
motor berobatnya bisa setengah juta itu
Tapi kan yang paling seru dari main
layangan kan emang pas ngejarnya gitu ya
ada yang layangan putus kita kejar gitu
kalau yang ngejarnya berdua biasanya pas
dapat hasilnya dibagi dua tuh ya lu
layangannya gua benangnya ya kan yang
enggak enak kalau ada layangan putus
yang ngjar bertiga pas dapat lu
layangannya gua benangnya satu komplain
gua apanya Wan lu yang tabrak motornya
lah kan belum ada inisiatif
dong
inisiatif gua tuh main layangan dari
kecil dari SD SMP berhenti-berhenti SMA
karena waktu di SMA SM e banyak
cewek-cewek cantik gitu jadi daripada
main layang kan mending main cewek
Ya iyalah dulu kelakuan gua di SMA gitu
semua cewek gua mainin ada cewek nih gua
Deketin buat
taliin buat terbangin
Dadah
sayang jangan putus ya aku capeketabrak
motor
mulu tapi masa-masa sekolah juga
masa-masa yang indah buat gua gini-gini
gua Waktu Sekolah tuh bandel banget tapi
gara-gara gua bandel Alhamdulillah gua
bisa populer di sekolah gua bisa punya
banyak teman buat ngejar layangan Wah
buat main buat main cuma enggak enaknya
pas ulang tahun karena
semua yang kenal sama gua pasti minta
traktir ya enggak Mending kalau kenalnya
udah lama udah pernah susah senang
bareng enggak apa-apa deh kalau misalnya
gua lagi ulang tahun kalau punya duit
jangankan traktir traktor gua
beliin yang ngaslin kadang ada orang
baru kenal sehari du hari pas gua ulang
tahun ikutan minta traktir juga Wan lagi
ulang tahun ya traktiran dong Lah
kontribusi lu di hidup gua apa
[Musik]
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anjir baru kenal sehari du hari udah
mintair ngeselin gitu sama ngeselinnya
kayak tukang parkir di minimarket gua
baru naik motor semenit 2 menit udah
minta r.000 Kal kalau gua pikir-pikir
konri busi dia buat motor gua apa itu Ma
motor gua ulang
tahun terus gak enaknya lagi semakin
kita populer di sekolah pas ulang tahun
semakin habis kita dikerjain kayak waktu
itu gua lagi ulang tahun dilemparin
telur lemparin terigu diolesin mentega
gua lagi ulang tahun bukan jadi senang
malah jadi
adonan tingal taburin Kismis masukin ke
Open keluar-keluar jadi kue bolu gua
itu tapi teman gua ada yang lebih parah
lagi gitu lagi ulang tahun dilemparin
telur lemparin terigu Terus apa coba
yang paling parah disiram pakai air
comberan jadi pulang-pulang badan dia
dekil kotor bau kayak orang gila tuh
tapi gara-gara itu gua Jadi curiga gitu
jangan-jangan orang gila yang sering
kita lihat pinggir
jalan orang gila yang sering kita lihat
selama ini di pinggir jalan itu enggak
gila lagi ulang tahun aja itu
kayaknya enggak ada yang tahu kan
Makanya kalau lu ketemu orang gilnya
sekali-kali Lu tanya
deh iya coba aja gitu lu kalau ketemu
orang G pinggir jalan lu tanya nih bang
lagi ulang tahun
ya traktiran
dong Paling dia nyut kontribusi hidup
gua apa
anjir Terima kasih gua Ridan Selamat
malam kasih tepuk tangan dong
Rid gimana kita langsung aja dengar kata
Paman aja heh
ridw asik menurut aku ya kamu
ganti ya Wun ceritanya berganti tapi
Enggak terasa mungkin karena saking
rapinya Ya kamu habis main layangan
tiba-tiba kamu sudah
SMA Enggak terasa
tapi dan mudah-mudahan kamu bisa seperti
ini menurut aku ini asyik sekali
ngikutin kamu berstand up itu seperti
kita dihibur oleh orang yang sedang
Stand
Up i terima kasih terima kasih Cak
Selanjutnya silakan komentar dari Paman
Panji satu Ridwan Remin ini emang jago
sih nulis materinya setnya Rapi banget
naruh colback ada dua callbacknya si
tabrak motor sama kontribusi dalam hidup
gua ditaruh disebar di mana-mana dan
kena itu menandakan emang udah matang
sih dalam penulisan komedi kedua jago
banget milih diksi milih Kata tuh emang
sudahudah senjatanya Comedian sih kita
kalau milih kata yang tepat joknya jadi
dua kali lipat atau bahkan tiga kali
lipat lebih lucu ketika lu ngomong
jangan-jangan orang gila di pinggir
jalan selama ini terus koma orang perada
ketawa mereka udah ketawa sementara lu
masih di premis itu kan premis jokennya
kan lu mau lu mau bawa orang ke sebuah
ketawa dasarnya itu adalah jangan-jangan
selama ini orang gila yang kita lihat
berdasarkan jok yang sebelumnya itu
menandakan kematangan seorang Ridwan
Remin
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