Paragraph Organization

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2 Jul 201804:19

Summary

TLDRThis transcript debunks common myths about paragraph construction, emphasizing that length and structure should be tailored to the writing style and reader expectations. It advises using topic sentences to establish a paragraph's purpose and ensure unity and coherence within the paragraph. The script also highlights the importance of linking sentences smoothly and using appropriate transitional phrases for better flow. It suggests seeking help from the University Writing Center for further assistance.

Takeaways

  • 📝 Paragraphs are not bound by strict rules like '5-7 sentences' or '3 body paragraphs'.
  • 🎯 The construction of paragraphs should be tailored to the type of writing and reader expectations.
  • 📰 Newspaper readers prefer short paragraphs, while readers of complex texts may expect longer ones.
  • 🔗 Paragraphs should have a clear topic sentence that sets a purpose and guides the reader.
  • 🚫 Avoid overly broad topic sentences; they should be specific and related to the thesis.
  • 🔗 Topic sentences should introduce a controlling idea that relates back to the main thesis.
  • 🔄 Unity in paragraphs is crucial; every sentence must be linked to the topic sentence.
  • 🔗 Coherence is key; sentences should flow smoothly, with each building on the previous one.
  • 🔄 Use transitional phrases to improve the flow between ideas if needed.
  • 👀 If you're struggling with paragraph construction, seek help from a writing center like the University Writing Center at TAMU.

Q & A

  • What is the main myth about paragraph construction debunked in the script?

    -The main myth debunked is that all paragraphs must adhere to a specific length, such as being 5-7 sentences long, and that there should always be three body paragraphs. The script emphasizes that these are not hard rules and that paragraph construction depends on the type of writing and reader expectations.

  • How does the length of paragraphs vary depending on the type of writing?

    -Paragraph length varies based on the expectations of the reader and the purpose of the writing. For instance, newspaper readers expect shorter paragraphs, while readers of complex philosophy texts may expect longer ones. The nature of each paragraph and its intended message also influence its length within a single work.

  • What is the purpose of a topic sentence in a paragraph?

    -A topic sentence serves to establish the purpose of the paragraph and helps the writer stay on track. It also aids the reader in following the writer's argument by clearly introducing the main idea of the paragraph.

  • Can the topic sentence always be the first sentence of a paragraph?

    -The topic sentence does not have to be the first sentence of the paragraph. It can appear later, but its role is to set the stage for the rest of the paragraph.

  • What should a topic sentence avoid being in a paper arguing for the importance of school spirit?

    -A topic sentence should avoid being too broad. For example, in a paper arguing for the importance of school spirit, a sentence like 'School mascots are the best!' is too general and does not effectively introduce a specific argument or controlling idea.

  • How does a controlling idea relate a paragraph's topic back to the thesis?

    -A controlling idea establishes the purpose of the paragraph and how it connects to the thesis. It provides a specific focus that ties the paragraph's main point to the broader argument of the paper.

  • What is meant by the unity of a paragraph?

    -Unity in a paragraph means that every sentence is linked to the topic sentence and contributes to the main idea. If a sentence is unrelated, it should be moved, or it might form the basis of a new paragraph.

  • Why is coherence important in a paragraph?

    -Coherence ensures that each sentence in a paragraph logically connects to the ones before and after it, creating a smooth flow of ideas. This helps the paragraph effectively support the main idea and makes it easier for the reader to follow the argument.

  • How can transitional phrases help improve the flow of a paragraph?

    -Transitional phrases help to smoothly switch between ideas within a paragraph, ensuring that the sentences flow logically from one to the next. They are used to introduce new information while concluding the previous point, thus maintaining coherence.

  • What should one do if they are having trouble with paragraph construction or need additional help?

    -If one is struggling with paragraph construction or needs further assistance, they can make an appointment at the University Writing Center, as suggested in the script, or seek similar resources for guidance and feedback.

Outlines

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📝 The Myths and Realities of Paragraph Writing

This paragraph dispels common myths about paragraph construction, such as the need for a fixed number of sentences or body paragraphs. It emphasizes that paragraph length and structure should be tailored to the type of writing and the expectations of the reader. The paragraph also introduces the concept of a topic sentence in academic writing, which should be specific and related to the thesis, establishing a clear purpose and maintaining unity within the paragraph. Coherence is also highlighted, with the suggestion to use transitional phrases for a smooth flow of ideas.

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Keywords

💡Paragraphs

Paragraphs are the fundamental units of written text, organizing ideas into manageable sections. In the script, paragraphs are discussed as building blocks of writing, emphasizing their importance in structuring academic and journalistic texts. The video script challenges traditional myths about paragraph length and structure, advocating for a more flexible and context-dependent approach.

💡Myths

Myths refer to widely held but false beliefs. In the context of the video, myths about paragraphs include rigid rules like 'all paragraphs must be 5-7 sentences long'. The script debunks these myths, suggesting that paragraph construction should be tailored to the writing style and reader expectations rather than following inflexible templates.

💡Academic Writing

Academic writing is a formal style of expression used in scholarly work. The script provides tips for academic writing, highlighting the importance of topic sentences and coherence in paragraphs. It suggests that academic paragraphs should have a clear purpose and contribute to the overall thesis, as exemplified by the discussion on how a paragraph about school mascots relates to inciting student passion.

💡Topic Sentence

A topic sentence is the first or central sentence of a paragraph that states the main idea. According to the script, topic sentences are crucial in academic writing as they establish the purpose of the paragraph and guide the reader through the writer's argument. The script provides an example of a topic sentence that is both specific and related to the thesis, such as 'Having a mascot can help establish a school's identity.'

💡Controlling Idea

The controlling idea is the central concept that ties a paragraph to the broader thesis. In the script, it is explained that a controlling idea should be introduced in a topic sentence to maintain unity and coherence. An example given is how a school mascot incites school spirit, which connects the paragraph's topic back to the thesis about universities improving student success.

💡Unity

Unity in a paragraph means that all sentences are related to the topic sentence. The script emphasizes the importance of ensuring every sentence in a paragraph contributes to the central idea, suggesting that unrelated thoughts should be moved or addressed in a new paragraph, maintaining the focus and relevance of the discussion.

💡Coherence

Coherence refers to the logical flow of ideas within a paragraph. The script explains that each sentence should link to the ones before and after, creating a smooth progression of thoughts. It uses the example of credit card usage, where each sentence builds upon the previous one, discussing convenience, risk, and debt accumulation in a coherent manner.

💡Transitional Phrases

Transitional phrases are words or expressions that connect ideas within a text. The script advises using appropriate transitional phrases to ensure smooth transitions between ideas, which can enhance the flow and clarity of writing. It cautions against misusing transitions, such as using 'however' when 'in addition' is more suitable.

💡University Writing Center

The University Writing Center is a resource mentioned in the script for students seeking help with their writing. It suggests that if a writer is struggling with paragraph construction or needs a review, they can make an appointment at the center for additional support and guidance.

💡Cohesion

Cohesion, while not explicitly mentioned in the script, is closely related to coherence and refers to the overall connectedness of a text. It implies that the ideas within a paragraph and across the entire document are logically and meaningfully linked, which is essential for effective communication and understanding.

Highlights

Paragraphs are the building blocks of your writing.

Common myths about paragraphs are often not actual rules.

Paragraph construction depends on the type of writing and reader expectations.

Newspaper readers expect short paragraphs, while philosophy readers may expect longer ones.

Paragraph size can vary within a single work based on its purpose.

Academic writing often benefits from a topic sentence in each paragraph.

The topic sentence should not be too broad and should establish a purpose for the paragraph.

A controlling idea in a topic sentence relates the paragraph back to the thesis.

Paragraphs should have unity, with every sentence linked to the topic sentence.

Unrelated thoughts or ideas in a paragraph should be moved or addressed separately.

Coherence in paragraphs is achieved when each sentence logically connects to the next.

Transitional phrases can be used to improve the flow between ideas in a paragraph.

Using appropriate transitions is crucial for maintaining coherence.

The University Writing Center offers assistance for writing improvement.

Rev, a school mascot, is mentioned as an example of inciting school spirit.

The importance of school mascots in establishing identity is discussed.

The potential risks of credit cards, such as accumulating debt, are highlighted.

The example of credit card usage demonstrates how to build coherence in a paragraph.

Transcripts

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Paragraphs are the building blocks of your writing.

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Unfortunately, there are a lot of myths about paragraphs.

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For instance, your 4th grade teacher may have told you things like

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“all paragraphs must be 5-7 sentences long”, or

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“you should always have 3 body paragraphs”.

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But those “rules” aren’t really rules.

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Also: 4th grade was the worst.

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Paragraph construction is more complicated than

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these cookie-cutter templates you were given.

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These templates aren’t really useful-

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unless you’re making cookies.

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How your paragraphs should be constructed depends on the kind of writing you’re doing

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and what your reader expects.

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For instance, newspaper readers expect short paragraphs, whereas readers of

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a complicated philosophy text probably expect to see longer ones.

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Paragraph size can even very within single works, depending on the nature

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of each paragraph and what it is trying to accomplish.

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There are some general tips we can give you for most kinds of academic writing.

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For this kind of writing, you’ll probably want your paragraph to have a topic sentence.

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These sentences can help you establish a purpose

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for the paragraph and stay on track.

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They’ll also help your reader follow your argument.

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Usually this is the first sentence of the paragraph, but it doesn’t have to be.

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This sentence shouldn’t be too broad.

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For instance, in a paper arguing for the importance of school spirit, a topic sentence like

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“School mascots are the best!” is probably too general.

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But “Having a mascot can help

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establish a school’s identity.”

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Might be just right.

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Also, we love you, Rev!

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Note that the second example announces the topic and introduces

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a controlling idea related to that topic

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This controlling idea establishes the purpose of the paragraph

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and how it relates back to the thesis.

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If you’re thesis is something like: “Universities improve student success by finding different

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ways to incite passion in their students for the school

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that they attend.”, then, the controlling idea that a school

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mascot incites school spirit relates the topic of school mascots back to the thesis of inciting

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passion from the students for their school.

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Paragraphs should have unity.

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This means that every sentence within the paragraph is linked to the topic sentence.

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If there are any sentences out of place, they can be moved

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or become the focus of a new paragraph.

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For example, if you’re writing a paragraph about horse anatomy,

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it wouldn’t make sense to stop

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in the middle to talk about pigs.

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Always review your writing to find any instances of unrelated thoughts or ideas, to see if

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they can be moved to another section, changed, or removed.

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Paragraphs should have coherence.

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Each sentence in a paragraph must link the sentences before and after.

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The paragraph should flow smoothly, one idea leading into the next;

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otherwise, it could come off as scattered to the reader, and

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no longer effectively supports the main idea.

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Let’s say you’re writing a paper on the use of credit cards to pay for living expenses.

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You may have a sentence like:

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“Credit cards are a convenient way of making purchases.”

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Here, the convenience of credit cards is the new information.

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“People often use them to buy things without delay, but credit cards have their own

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element of risk in interest rates.”

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The old information, credit cards as a convenient purchasing tool, was included here

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along with new information on the risk of credit cards.

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“If you only make minimum payments, the card will accrue interest, accumulating debt.”

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The information in the previous sentence of interest

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rates was built upon, going on to examine the new

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information of the potential for building up debt.

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As you can see, each sentence concludes old and introduces new information.

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If the sentences do not flow smoothly, it may be a good time to

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use transitional phrases to switch between ideas.

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Just be sure that you use a transition that’s appropriate for the situation.

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Don’t use a “however”

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when you really need an “In addition”.

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If you find yourself still having trouble or just need another pair of eyes,

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make an appointment at the University Writing Center

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at writingcenter.tamu.edu.

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