CONECTIVOS para REDAÇÃO do Enem: Como Garantir a NOTA MÁXIMA na Competência 4

Summary

In this video, the speaker discusses the importance of connectors (or linking words) in writing, particularly for improving fluency and cohesion in text. They explain the different types of connectors, such as pronouns, adverbs, conjunctions, and modal expressions, and their roles in referencing and sequencing ideas. The speaker also highlights how these connectors impact writing for the ENEM (National High School Exam), emphasizing their importance in organizing arguments and achieving high scores. Practical tips are provided for using connectors effectively, with a focus on coherence, avoiding problematic repetition, and diversifying language to enhance the quality of the essay.

Takeaways

• 😀 Connectives are essential for text fluency and development, helping with referencing ideas and establishing the progression of thoughts.
• 😀 The main types of connectives in the language include pronouns, adverbs, adverbial phrases, conjunctions, conjunctive phrases, and denotative words or expressions.
• 😀 The function of connectives is to establish reference (avoiding repetition) and sequence between ideas, both of which contribute to the cohesion of the text.
• 😀 The ENEM exam evaluates the use of connectives under two main competencies: Competency 3 (argumentation) and Competency 4 (cohesion).
• 😀 Proper use of connectives can significantly improve argumentation, organizing and structuring ideas in a way that makes the argument stronger and clearer.
• 😀 Incorrect use or failure to use connectives can hurt your writing, leading to disorganized arguments and reduced scores in Competency 3 (argumentation).
• 😀 Competency 4 specifically assesses the use of connectives as mechanisms of cohesion. Every paragraph in your text must contain cohesive elements like connectives.
• 😀 Repetitions of words in the text are allowed but should not harm text fluency; problematic repetition occurs when it disrupts the development of the text.
• 😀 The semantic value of a connective is crucial: using an incorrect connective for the wrong purpose (e.g., using 'contudo' as a conclusion instead of 'portanto') will negatively affect your text.
• 😀 Having at least two argument operators (connectives linking paragraphs) is a requirement in ENEM; this could involve using phrases like 'Além disso' (furthermore) or 'Portanto' (therefore).
• 😀 Diversifying your repertoire of connectives shows your ability to avoid redundancy and enhances the cohesiveness and fluency of your argumentation in the text.

Q & A

What are the primary functions of connectives in writing?

The primary functions of connectives in writing are reference and sequence. They help in referencing ideas already mentioned without repetition and establish the sequence or progression of ideas within the text.

How does the use of connectives impact the argumentation in a text?

Connectives play a crucial role in structuring arguments. Proper use of connectives helps organize ideas logically, improving the flow and clarity of the argument. Misusing them can result in a poorly developed argument, negatively affecting the writing score.

What is the role of connectives in achieving textual cohesion?

Connectives are mechanisms of cohesion, establishing links between ideas, sentences, and paragraphs. They ensure that the text flows smoothly and is coherent, with each part logically connected to the next.

What happens if connectives are used incorrectly in an ENEM essay?

Incorrect use of connectives can lead to a loss of points in the ENEM writing exam. If they are used inappropriately or fail to create proper cohesion, they can negatively impact the text's argumentation and coherence, affecting scores in both the argumentation and cohesion criteria.

How important is the variety of connectives in the ENEM writing exam?

A diverse range of connectives is essential in the ENEM exam to demonstrate a strong command of textual cohesion. Using a variety of connectives shows the ability to connect ideas in different ways and avoids repetitiveness, which is critical for a high score in the cohesion section.

What does the ENEM say about repetitive use of words and connectives?

The ENEM allows repetition, but it should not hinder the flow of the text. A 'problematic repetition' is one that disrupts the text's progression. Repetition of connectives is acceptable if it doesn’t negatively affect the clarity and cohesion of the writing.

Can using incorrect connectives with the wrong semantic value affect the score?

Yes, using connectives with the wrong semantic value can damage the clarity of your argument and negatively affect your score. For example, using 'contudo' (meaning 'however') as a conclusion connector would be incorrect, as it is meant to express contrast, not conclusion.

What are the four key points to focus on when using connectives in the ENEM essay?

The four key points are: 1) ensuring cohesion in every paragraph, 2) avoiding problematic repetitions, 3) using connectives with the correct semantic value, and 4) including at least two argumentative operators (connectives that link paragraphs or ideas).

What types of connectives are used in the introduction of an ENEM essay?

In the introduction, common connectives include modalizers (e.g., 'unfortunately', 'lamentably') to present the thesis and ideas. Other common connectives include 'so', 'thus', and 'under this perspective' to introduce arguments or transitions from theory to real-life examples.

What are the types of connectives used in the body paragraphs of an argumentation essay?

In the body paragraphs, connectives like 'furthermore', 'in addition', 'on the other hand', and 'however' are used to add, contrast, or introduce new ideas. Connectives for cause and consequence, such as 'since', 'because', 'thus', and 'as a result', are also common.