AP Seminar Performace Task 2: Transitioning to the Individual Multimedia Presentation (IMP)

Advanced Placement
17 Mar 202125:05

Summary

TLDRIn this educational video, Mrs. Malloy guides seminar students through the transition from their Individual Written Assignment (IWA) to the Individual Multimedia Presentation (IMP). She emphasizes the importance of transforming the written argument into a concise, persuasive presentation suitable for an audience, focusing on key points and evidence within a time limit. The video covers the presentation's structure, design, delivery, and the subsequent oral defense, offering strategies for effective communication and engaging the audience. It also outlines the criteria for scoring the IMP, highlighting the need for a clear, logically organized argument with credible evidence and a compelling conclusion.

Takeaways

  • 📚 The Individual Multimedia Presentation (IMP) is a transition from the Individual Written Assignment (IWA), requiring students to transform their argument for a presentation format.
  • 🔍 Understanding the task of the IMP is crucial for effective transformation of the argument, ensuring it fits within the time limit and presentation medium.
  • ✂️ The transformation process involves narrowing down the scope of the argument to key points and evidence, refining it for the multimedia presentation.
  • 📈 Designing the presentation involves creating visually appealing and purposeful slides that enhance the argument and are geared towards the audience's understanding.
  • ⏱️ Time management is key; the presentation should be delivered within a 6 to 8-minute time frame, excluding the oral defense.
  • 🎯 Scoring for the IMP is similar to the IWA, focusing on understanding, analysis, logical organization, evidence incorporation, and argument establishment.
  • 🗣️ The presentation should be conversational and engaging, avoiding a monotone recitation of the IWA.
  • 📑 The presentation should include a title, context for significance, research question, main claim, key claims and evidence, and citations.
  • 🤔 The oral defense requires students to reflect on their research process and establish arguments in response to specific questions, demonstrating engagement with the material.
  • 📝 Authenticity in the oral defense is emphasized, with students encouraged to think deeply about their answers rather than preparing scripted responses.
  • 📝 The importance of logically organizing the presentation to ensure the audience can follow the argument, as they have no written material to refer back to.

Q & A

  • What is the main purpose of the Individual Multimedia Presentation (IMP)?

    -The main purpose of the IMP is to transform a student's written argument from their Individual Written Assignment (IWA) into a concise and persuasive multimedia presentation suitable for an oral defense and within a specified time limit.

  • Why is it necessary to transform the argument from paper to presentation?

    -Transformation is necessary because the presentation format requires a different approach. It must be engaging, visually appealing, and tailored to fit within a time constraint, ensuring that the argument is clear and convincing to the audience.

  • What are the key components that should be included in the IMP?

    -Key components include a title, context for significance, research question, main claim, key claims and supporting evidence, oral and written citations, discussion of strengths, limitations, and implications, and a conclusion or summary.

  • How should the evidence in the IMP differ from the evidence in the IWA?

    -In the IMP, students should select the strongest pieces of evidence that support their key claims. The evidence should be presented in a way that enhances the audience's understanding and does not simply repeat the IWA content.

  • What is the time limit for delivering the IMP?

    -The presentation should be delivered within a 6 to 8-minute time frame, ensuring that the argument is concise and focused.

  • How does the scoring for the IMP relate to the IWA?

    -The scoring for the IMP is similar to the IWA, focusing on understanding and analyzing context, logical organization, persuasive argumentation, synthesis of evidence, and alignment of the presentation. It also includes the ability to engage the audience and present conversationally.

  • What is the significance of oral and written citations in the IMP?

    -Oral and written citations are crucial as they provide credibility and relevance to the argument. They should be integrated naturally into the presentation to support claims and enhance the audience's understanding.

  • How should the presentation design contribute to the argument?

    -The presentation design should be visually appealing and purposeful, enhancing the argument by making it more clear, accessible, and convincing. Slides should align with talking points and support the audience's understanding of the argument.

  • What is the role of the oral defense in the IMP process?

    -The oral defense is a part of the IMP process where students answer specific questions related to their presentation. It assesses the student's ability to reflect on their research and establish arguments supported by relevant and specific evidence.

  • How should students prepare for the oral defense questions?

    -Students should prepare by thoroughly understanding their research and the process they went through to create their IMP. They should be able to articulate detailed responses and explain the significance of their inquiry using relevant and specific details.

Outlines

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📚 Transitioning from IWA to IMP

Mrs. Malloy introduces the Individual Multimedia Presentation (IMP) process to AP Seminar students. She emphasizes the importance of understanding the task of transforming the written argument from the Investigative Writing Assignment (IWA) into a concise and effective multimedia presentation suitable for an oral defense. The focus is on refining the argument to fit within a time limit and making sure the transformation process retains the depth and convincing nature of the original argument.

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🎯 Scoring Rubric and Task Overview

The speaker outlines the scoring criteria for the IMP, drawing parallels to the IWA. Key aspects include setting up a research question with value and complexity, logically organizing the argument, using evidence persuasively, synthesizing relevant evidence from multiple perspectives, and presenting detailed resolutions or solutions. The presentation design should enhance audience understanding, and the delivery should be conversational. The speaker also highlights the importance of planning the presentation content and organization.

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📈 Designing the Multimedia Presentation

The paragraph discusses the components that should be included in the IMP slideshow. It stresses the need for a clear title, context for significance, research question, and main claim. The presentation should focus on key claims and supporting evidence, avoiding the inclusion of the entire paper. Oral and written citations are crucial for credibility, and the presentation should discuss the strengths, limitations, and implications of the argument. The conclusion or summary should align with the initial claims, potentially including a call to action.

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🧠 Organization and Delivery of the Presentation

This section emphasizes the importance of logical organization in presentations, as the audience relies solely on the information provided by the presenter. Visual cues and transitional phrases are recommended to guide the audience through the argument. The presenter should avoid expecting the audience to read and listen simultaneously, ensuring that the delivery is accessible and comprehensible. The focus is on making the argument cohesive and easy to follow for the audience.

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🗣 Preparing for Oral Defense

The final paragraph focuses on preparing for the oral defense portion of the IMP. It explains the importance of reflecting on the process and providing detailed, specific responses to questions. The speaker advises against preparing pre-scripted answers, instead encouraging students to engage authentically with the questions based on their experiences throughout the project. The goal is to demonstrate a deep understanding of the work done and the ability to articulate the significance of the inquiry.

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Keywords

💡Individual Multimedia Presentation (IMP)

The IMP is the central focus of the video, referring to a student's task to transform their written argument into a multimedia format suitable for oral presentation. It is a key part of the academic process described, where students must condense and adapt their lengthy written work for a different medium, ensuring clarity and persuasiveness within a time constraint. The script emphasizes the importance of this transformation, noting that it is not merely a matter of reading the written work but involves a thoughtful adaptation to the presentation format.

💡Transformation

Transformation is a pivotal concept in the video, highlighting the process of converting a written argument into a presentation format. It is not about simply transferring content from paper to slides but involves strategic refinement to fit the multimedia format and time limitations. The script uses this term to emphasize the active and thoughtful changes students must make to their arguments to ensure they are effectively communicated to an audience.

💡Argument

The term 'argument' in the video refers to the main claim or thesis that a student is presenting, which is derived from their written work (IWA). The argument must be clearly defined, with supporting sub-claims and evidence. The script discusses the importance of narrowing down the scope of the argument to key points for the presentation, maintaining its depth and persuasiveness while being concise.

💡Scope

Scope, in the context of the video, pertains to the limits of what a student can cover in their IMP. Given the time constraints, students must select the most critical aspects of their argument to include in their presentation. The script advises students to focus on key points and evidence to ensure the presentation remains compelling and does not lose depth.

💡Design

Design in the video refers to the visual and structural composition of the presentation slides or multimedia elements. It is important that the design enhances the argument, making it clearer and more accessible to the audience. The script mentions that while visual appeal is considered, the primary focus should be on how the design aids in delivering a stronger argument.

💡Practice

Practice is highlighted in the video as an essential step in preparing for the IMP. Students are advised to rehearse their presentations to ensure they can deliver their argument within the allotted time of six to eight minutes. The script stresses the importance of not going into the presentation unprepared, as this could lead to a disjointed or rushed delivery.

💡Oral Defense

Oral defense is the final component of the IMP process, where students answer questions about their presentation. The script outlines that there will be two specific questions related to reflection and argument establishment. This part of the process assesses the student's understanding and ability to articulate their research question, argument, and the significance of their inquiry.

💡Rubric

The rubric mentioned in the video is the grading criteria used to assess the IMP. It includes various rows or categories that evaluate different aspects of the presentation, such as understanding and analyzing context, logical organization, use of evidence, and alignment of the argument. The script provides an overview of what is assessed in each category to help students understand how they will be scored.

💡Citations

Citations in the video refer to the references and sources used to support the student's argument. The script emphasizes the importance of including oral or written citations to lend credibility to the argument and to clarify the meaning of presented evidence. Citations should be integrated naturally into the presentation, rather than being an afterthought or附录.

💡Logically Organized

Being 'logically organized' is a key aspect of the IMP, as it helps the audience follow the argument being presented. The script explains that unlike written work, where readers can reread sentences, presentation audiences rely solely on what is said and shown. Therefore, it is crucial for the presentation to be structured in a way that guides the audience through the argument clearly and coherently.

Highlights

Transition from Iwa to Imp and oral defense process

Understanding the task of the IMP is crucial for effective transformation of the argument

Transformation from paper to presentation involves narrowing down the scope and focusing on key points and evidence

Designing a presentation includes creating visually appealing and purposeful slides to enhance the argument

Practice is essential to ensure the presentation fits within the 6-8 minute time frame

Scoring criteria for the IMP parallels Iwa assessment with a focus on argument presentation and evidence synthesis

Incorporate and synthesize relevant evidence from multiple perspectives to develop the argument

Align the presentation with the main claim and ensure the conclusion considers limitations and implications

Engage the audience through design and conversational presentation style

Plan the multimedia presentation to include a title, context, research question, and main claim

Select key claims and supporting evidence for the presentation to maintain argument depth

Include oral and written citations to enhance credibility and relevance of the argument

Discuss the strengths, limitations, and implications of the argument for complexity and conviction

Use visual cues and transitional phrases to guide the audience through the argument logically

Ensure the audience can follow the argument by avoiding distractions and being logically organized

Prepare for the oral defense by reflecting on the process and being ready to answer specific questions

Authentic responses in the oral defense are preferred over pre-scripted answers

The importance of understanding the task for a successful transformation and presentation of the argument

Transcripts

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hey ap seminar students it is mrs malloy

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and i am here today

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to talk to you about the imp

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or the individual multimedia

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presentation

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so we are at that point in the process

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where we can transition

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from your iwa to your imp

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and oral defense so it is very exciting

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more specifically what are we going to

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learn today

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well today we're going to focus on

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understanding the task of the imp

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because clearly understanding the task

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ensures that you can

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effectively transform your argument to

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make it suitable for

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presenting and possible within the time

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limit that we're going to have as it

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pertains to

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the inp so if you remember in this

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process that we started at the beginning

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of these videos we have come

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a long way but now we're at the place

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where we're going to transform your

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argument from paper to presentation

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and one of the words that you've heard

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me say multiple times now is transform

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because this is not a matter of just

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your paper being ready

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to present we have to really work on

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transformation so

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today we'll talk about transforming our

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argument from paper to presentation

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we'll talk about the actual um creation

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and a little bit about the delivery of

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your presentation and then we'll talk

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about the oral defense

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okay so task overview

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what we are not doing here is reading

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your iwa

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so many students think well i'm just

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going to get my paper

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i'm going to cut it up or put it on note

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cards and then i've already written it

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so my argument's already there

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that is not what you are going to do

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that is not the task itself rather the

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task can be

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divided or separated into a few sections

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the first thing we have to do is go back

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to your iwa

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and i know for some of you at this point

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oh i've spent so much time on my iwa

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and it seems like so many words but it's

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not right it's somewhere around

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2000 words so it's not that much to dig

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back through

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but you also should have done a good job

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at the beginning of this process

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when we encouraged you to make an

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outline you have an outline of your

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argument

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you have the paper of your argument so

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between those two things

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as you're reviewing you need to define

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your argument

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2000 words is a lot more than you're

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gonna have

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um time for in your individual

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multi-presentation or multimedia

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presentation

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so after you go back and review your

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argument the goal is to make sure you

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know what's your main claim

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main idea argument what are those sub

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claims or reasons what evidence do i

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want to use

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we need to then narrow down the scope to

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those key points and evidence

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so some students will say well i have

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three claims and two counter claims in

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my long

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iwa but maybe you only have time for in

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your presentation

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two claims and one counter claim because

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you really want to cover them in depth

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so this is an

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actual transformation process that has

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to happen because you have to narrow

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down

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to those key points and those key pieces

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of evidence

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you don't want your argument to lose any

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depth

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or any of its convincing nature

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so we want to be really really

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thoughtful and careful about this

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process it's going to take you time

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after you narrow down the scope of your

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argument you've refined it you know what

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those key points and evidence are

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you're actually the next step is to

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design your presentation

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we want to think about things that we

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thought about with the tmp we want

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slides that are visually appealing

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but that's not most important what's

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most important is that the slides are

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going to

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enhance our argument for our readers

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these slides are not for you as a

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speaker they are for your audience

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anything that can make your argument

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more clear more accessible

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um or just more convincing that's what

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we're putting on those slides they

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should align with our talking points but

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they should be purposeful in what they

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can do to help

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the audience you then want to make sure

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you practice your presentation

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you do not want to go into this

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presentation having not rehearsed it at

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all

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and then you're going to deliver that

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presentation

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in six to eight minutes just like the

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tmp you are given a time range

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so in the tmp you had eight to ten

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minutes in the individual it's just

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you presenting by yourself but you will

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have six to eight

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minutes anything after the eight minute

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mark is not going to count so it's

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really really important that you take

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that transformation process seriously

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so by the time you get to practicing

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you're not running a

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25 minute presentation and trying to

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cram it into six to eight minutes we

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don't want that

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we want you to present an argument in

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those six to eight minutes

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so as you're practicing it make sure

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that you are keeping an eye

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on time you'll deliver your presentation

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in six to eight minutes

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then your time will stop your teacher

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will then follow up by asking you two

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specific world defense questions and

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we'll talk more about each of these

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steps as we go through the process

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but this overview is what the task

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entails

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so how are you going to be scored and

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again

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i'm going to give you big picture here

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because you don't want me to sit here

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um and talk you through this and then

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not have time to actually talk you

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through the process but we just need to

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understand

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big picture what's being assessed in

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each of these rows so

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a lot of this is going to look very

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similar to your iwa which is really

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exciting because it

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it makes it um more accessible um

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for you as you're thinking about what i

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did for the other tasks the iwa and what

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i'm doing for the imp it's just some

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some

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transformation like we talked about so

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to get to that high score on row

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one which talks about understand and

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analyze context

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what we're looking at here is that

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you're setting up your research question

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um with value and complexity so what we

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want you to do to get a high score is to

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tell us what your research question is

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tell us why it matters

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but also make sure that you're connected

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to the stimulus material so somewhere

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within your argument we still want to

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see you using the stimulus

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material like you would have in your

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paper

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that's going to be important and we we

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want to be able to see its connection

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so if you feel like you are weakly

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connected you may need to take a little

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bit more time to establish your theme

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but if you're clearly connected then

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again we're really just focused on your

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use of the stimulus material within

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your argument for row two to get that

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high score

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this is going to feel very similar to

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what you did in the iwa

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we're looking at the presentation um in

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terms of the argument that you're making

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that your presentation is logically

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organized it's well reasoned and it's

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complex

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and which we just talked about in one of

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the past videos

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that it persuasively is connecting

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evidence to claims

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um to establish a clear and convincing

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argument so this is all about your

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ability to argue and to convince us

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okay does your argument feel um focused

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and narrow and complex

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and organized all the things that your

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paper should have been

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then when we look at row 3 that is your

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incorporation

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and they use the word here synthesis of

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relevant

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evidence from multiple perspectives so

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are you using multiple sources that are

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credible relevant do you have a

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sufficient amount of evidence

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and then are you using those sources to

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develop your argument

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okay and really when we're looking at

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synthesis is what we've talked about

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before

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is your argument in control of the

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presentation or are we veering into it

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feeling more

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about sources and not about your

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argument because everything here

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like those two rows to establish an

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argument to support and develop an

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argument

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so we're seeing that argument play a key

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role here

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for row four it goes back to establish

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argument and now we're looking at

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alignment the presentation

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offers detailed plausible resolutions

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conclusions and or solutions

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and it's considering the limitations

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implications of any of those

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so really we want to see the complexity

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number one we want to see that your

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paper is aligned

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you said you were arguing this this was

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your research question main claim

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is that really consistent throughout so

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by the time you get to the conclusion

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everything feels aligned and consistent

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right if you argue for position paper

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now is not the time to add a solution so

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you really just need to know your goal

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the other thing that we want to do is we

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want to consider those limitations and

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implications

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of the argument or the conclusion being

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very complex with what we're doing so we

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can

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ensure that you know we are being

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thoughtful because if you're trying to

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convince someone you want to really

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think about the limitations or the

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boundaries in which your argument

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has to live okay um

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when we look at five and six these are

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very similar to the tmp

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so to get to the high score and engage

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audience for row five

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this is looking at your design the

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selection and emphasis of information

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that you're including

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what are you doing to enhance this

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information for

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your audience um because that's the key

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word that we're really going to think

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about in this row is that the design

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what you're putting on your slides it's

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not just there to hang out in the

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background because you wanted to talk

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about happiness and so you put a smiley

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face

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no this should be purposeful and it

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should help enhance the understanding of

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the audience

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and then um for row six we're looking at

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your ability to present

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we do not want you to sound like

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pre-recorded robots

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we want you to be conversational now i

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understand that some of you this year

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are going to be presented we're

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presenting virtually that's what my

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students are going to have to do

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some of you will be home but those

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techniques are still the same

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while you guys are watching this video

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you probably notice that i talk with my

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hands because i do it all the time

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but if i start doing this while i'm

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presenting that becomes distracting

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and so we want to think about the same

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things if i was standing up in front of

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the classroom

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how i would use my hands to gesture how

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i would make eye contact

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how i would vary my voice those are the

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things where we want you to sound

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conversational

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we do not want you to get up there and

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then read

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to us in a very monotone way that seems

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like

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you have practiced this so many times

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right you're bored i'm bored we don't

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want that so be

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conversational that's what we're looking

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at but we can judge your ability to

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present

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over a screen as well as we can do it in

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person okay

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so let's talk about the planning of your

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presentation

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so your individual multimedia

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presentation

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the actual slideshow itself or whatever

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format you're using to present

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should include a few things the first of

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which is a title we want to make it very

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clear

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to our audience what the focus of our

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presentation is going to be

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we also need to include our context for

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significance so like

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why does this topic matter what's the

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value here

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what's the point of tension use evidence

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to do that

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our research question and again why our

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research question matters

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and then our objective or purpose or

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main claim

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what are you going to argue or how are

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you going to try to convince us

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right is it a position um or is it a

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solution

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and that name claim should really be the

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same main claim that you had in your iwa

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because that's the focus of all of this

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okay

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then the difference between the iwa and

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the imt is now we can't include the

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entire paper

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um so we need to pick out those key

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claims and those strongest pieces of

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supporting evidence

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to then make our claims because what we

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don't want again is to just read the

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paper

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there's too much there we want to make

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sure that we're picking out those key

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claims so that our argument

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isn't becoming less convincing it's

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still as complex as it could be but we

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just can't include all of the pieces

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that we have so if you are making a

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point and you have four pieces of

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evidence maybe there's only three that

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you get to include

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um for your presentation but you're

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going to have to do the work you're the

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one who's transforming this

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we also want to make sure that we have

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oral and written citations

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and that's really really important

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because if you've ever listened to a

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presentation a ted talk

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um or any kind of report that you see on

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tv

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what we see a lot of times is not that

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people are like

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you know 100 of the kids who had recess

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in elementary school are happier than

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the kids that didn't

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what the heck does that mean right one

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who says that

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because we need to know the credibility

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the relevance right

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you need to be giving those tags so that

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we know what that means

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right according to bernie sanders and

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then i can talk about

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why right according to elizabeth warren

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student debt should be

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um forgiven because when you throw in

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those

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oral or written citations you can put

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them on the screen itself but a lot of

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times it makes more sense to actually

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say them

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because those citations give your

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argument instant

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credibility when it comes to the

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audience if they are sources that have

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credibility

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right we don't want to be told stuff

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especially in a world with so much

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misinformation

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and people who try to manipulate

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information to say whatever they want

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we have to really make sure that we

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vetted and that's the way that we prove

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to the audience that this is what it

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means

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okay so really make sure you have those

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citations don't just save them until

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your reference page or works cited at

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the end

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because kids do that and then they're

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like oh here's a bunch of little tiny

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citations splash and then they're done

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they're not really being a natural part

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of your argument like they should be

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like they are in your paper we also want

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to make sure we're discussing the

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strengths limitations and implications

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of our argument

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but that sometimes comes with our

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individual reasons as well

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because that's where we get the

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complexity that's how you convince

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people

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that your claim and your argument is

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valid

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you have to be fair and well-rounded in

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addressing both the positives and the

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negatives

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and then you want to come back to a

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conclusion or summary here

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that is aligned with what you said you

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were doing i also like to include

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possibly a call to action but that's not

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adding something new it's just saying if

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we were to continue

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this work after your presentation what's

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the next step where do we go from here

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um but it's not necessarily adding

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anything new it's just giving us

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some kind of direction or hope for where

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we go okay

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so these are all the things that you

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need to include how you do that what

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that looks like it's up to you

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but we are not going to just put these

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all

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um just you know copy parts of our paper

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and throw big paragraphs on a slide

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that's not what we're doing here

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so now that we've talked through what

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needs to be included in terms of content

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now we need to think about how we're

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going to

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organize our presentation and the reason

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that this is so

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important is because although in your

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paper

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your readers can go back to your words

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and they can reread a sentence if it

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doesn't make sense

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for a presentation your argument is

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what you say is all that the audience

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can take away so logically organized in

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your paper is helping

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them because there's so much text to

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look at so it's helpful when we

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organize things so they can see

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alignment and how things connect but

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when it comes to your presentation

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it's really important that you be

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logically organized because what you say

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is all the audience has to go off of as

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they're trying to make sense of the

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argument that you're making so it's

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really really important that we be

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logically organized

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and so if you've ever thought about what

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it's like to be in a classroom

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with a teacher and i'm sure we all have

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experience with that right whether it's

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over a screen or in an actual classroom

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your teachers do a really good job of

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accounting for the fact that they are

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presenting

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information to you and so anything that

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they are saying orally

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they think about all of the things where

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you might be distracted or you might

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forget that something is there and so

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we want to do the same thing in our

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presentation to make sure that we are

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logically organized and giving the

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audience a chance

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to actually follow the argument that we

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are making

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so the first thing that we want to do is

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use visual clues to

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visual cues to guide the audience

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through our argument

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so rather than say this is my claim and

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just have the word

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claim on a slide why don't we actually

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give them

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the claim and put that out there right

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the united states

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needs universal basic income because

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right and so

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if i can't write out a whole sentence

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because that feels like a lot maybe i

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can put

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ubi equals and then um

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you know it stimulates the economy or it

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helps make sure people

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have the basic necessities whatever

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that's looking

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like the more specific i can be on my

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slide

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for the information i want the audience

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to take away

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the more organized i'm being but the

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more i can ensure that the information

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that i want them to leave my

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presentation with or my argument with

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that they actually have okay the next

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thing is that

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we can't expect our audience to read the

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text and listen to words at the same

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time

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now you might be thinking well you you

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just clicked on that while you talked

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about it

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but i explained it to you so i didn't

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expect you to read it

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but if you weren't paying attention to

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me now it's on the screen so you can go

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back and do that

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what we see often in presentations is

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sometimes people will put up a quote

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and they're like okay you guys read this

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quote and i'm going to keep talking

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about my argument because i'm running

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out of time

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and i feel like i just need to keep

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going but i'm going to expect you to do

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two things at the same time

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that becomes distracting to your

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audience if your audience needs to hear

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it

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tell it to them if you want them to read

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something

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pause for a second have them read it and

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then you need to tell us

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why you paused and we needed to read

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that information

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the audience's job is not to make sense

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of your argument it's not to

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um try to put together the pieces of

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your argument

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you have to expect that the audience is

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only taking away whatever

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information you are giving them so if

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you want them to hear something

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don't be distracting and ask them to

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read something at the same time

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that you are asking them to listen to

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what you're saying

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okay we also want to use transitional

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phrases as we speak to indicate to the

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audience where you

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are in the audience or in the argument

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and so one of the great things about

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doing that is those transitions also

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give us

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those clues to what we're actually what

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we've been saying so if someone has

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drifted off for a second we can remind

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them by saying

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as we as this claim proves but instead

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of saying this claim

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as we saw with universal basic incomes

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ability to

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create equality when it comes to

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marginalized groups it also can so now

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we're starting to see that connection of

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hey i'm reminding you of the point that

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we made previously

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but now i can connect it to the point

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that i'm making so i can start to build

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cohesion between my argument

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but also make it so that you as the

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audience can see

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how the parts of my argument are working

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together simple transitions are also

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effective when you say things like

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next right those terms help us see in

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addition to

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those kind of things build your argument

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up again the big takeaway when it comes

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to your presentation the delivery as

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well as the content

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is that you are responsible for any

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information you want your audience to

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take away

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they have nothing to go off of but what

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you put on the slide

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and what you say so everything on that

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slide

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needs to be in the function or the

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purpose of enhancing

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the understanding of the audience and

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making your argument

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accessible logically organized and

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comprehensible right we want them to be

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able to

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know what you're saying but big picture

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see how all of the parts are working

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together so the

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last part of this process is the oral

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defense

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after you've put together the imp we're

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now going to prepare for

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our oral defense so on the rubric there

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are two rows that align for the oral

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defense

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the first row is going to ask you

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questions that ask you to reflect and

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the second row is going to ask you to

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establish arguments and so if we look at

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the high score the oral defense

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articulates a detailed response to a

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question

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supported by relevant and specific

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evidence and we see

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for row two the order the oral defense

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explains the significance of the inquiry

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using relevant and specific details to

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the context of the question

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so what's really important to get high

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scores here is you answer the question

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that's being asked

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and that you make your answers specific

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enough that they don't feel like they

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could apply

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to just anything that exists we want it

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to apply to this

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specific process or project okay

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so here on the screen you will see and

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feel free to

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pause this video if you want to look at

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the oral defense questions

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these are examples of questions that

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your teachers may ask you they cannot

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tell you in advance what those questions

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are but we'll talk about this on the

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next slide of

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how we're going to answer them okay so

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let's say that your teacher

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asks you um what information did you

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need that you weren't able to find or

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locate

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okay um we want to as we answer those

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questions we want to

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listen listen to the question being

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asked

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so we can pause before we respond

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if any of you ever become celebrities or

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important

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um in any kind of world and have to do

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an interview maybe you've already done

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these so far

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they will not air you know journalists

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are not going to air

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dead air so they count on people

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in the spotlight or people they're

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interviewing to speak first so that they

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have

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right i'm not a crook right those kinds

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of things because if you pause

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you don't make mistakes it's the same

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thing here

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your teacher is okay it's actually

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recommended that you hear the question

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and you take a second and think

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now we're not going to take 10 minutes

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to figure out the answer to these

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questions because these questions are

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so obvious for you if you've reflected

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the entire

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process like if you've truly engaged

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these questions are easy points for you

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to give

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authentic answers for what you've done

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throughout the process so you're going

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to listen

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you pause then you're going to respond

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okay but really think about what you're

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going to say

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before you respond now one of the

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misconceptions that students have and

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i'm going to flash back to the last

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screen

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is that they think when i see these

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questions because they already

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exist i should have my answers already

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done

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i should get out a note card and on

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paper i should write what i would say

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for every answer

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that's not authentic and that totally is

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against the process

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why do you need to prepare answers for

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things that you already know

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right what we want you to do is show off

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your thinking here and to reflect on

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what you've already done we don't want

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you to walk in with pre-scripted answers

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where you're like oh question three let

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me grab that note card okay here's my

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answer

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because that's not what we want we want

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you to be prepared so that

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you understand what's being asked in

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each of these questions that's why we

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give you the questions in advance we

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don't give them to you

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so you can write out the answers we also

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don't want to give

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garbage answers so what information did

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you find that you weren't able to find

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or locate let's say i answer that

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well i had a really hard time finding

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sources because

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i was really busy so a lot of the

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information was really hard

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um the databases were a little bit

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harder to navigate so it was like all of

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my information

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that is an answer that is very surface

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level and isn't true to this

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presentation

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but instead if you said surprisingly

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um they do not i wanted to look at

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motivation in high school students

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and i noticed through my research that

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there's a lot of stuff on the idea of

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senioritis

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or of motivation as it applies to

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college students but i really struggled

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to find stuff as it applied to high

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school students because

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most of the research that already exists

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is on this older population and without

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this information

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i couldn't do these specific things

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within my argument

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that shows that you're actually engaged

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in this process but that's not something

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so complex that i needed to be prepared

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for it

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in advance okay so we're gonna listen

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we're gonna pause

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and then we're gonna respond and you

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will do really well on these oral

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defense questions okay

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so what's our takeaway from today well

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our takeaway

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is that hopefully you clearly understand

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the task because now that you understand

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the task you

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understand that you need to transform

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your argument

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to make it suitable for presenting and

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to make sure it's possible within the

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time limit

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presenting to an audience is very

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different than having someone read your

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paper

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they can't go back and reread certain

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points they are only relying on what you

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are giving to them

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so make your presentation organized

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right and focused but also accessible

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for an audience

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as always thank you for watching we hope

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that you have learned a lot from

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um performance task two as we walked you

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through the process

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and i hope you find some joy in your day

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bye

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