Como fazer CONCLUSÃO REDAÇÃO ENEM [Professor Noslen]

Summary

In this educational video, Professor Glácia provides a detailed guide on writing the perfect conclusion for an ENEM essay. She explains how to structure the conclusion with a clear proposal for intervention, offering tips on how to use connectors, develop a strong topic sentence, and include necessary elements such as the action, agent, mode, means, and effect (using the acronym 'AHMED'). By the end of the video, students are equipped with the tools to craft a well-rounded, impactful conclusion and improve their chances of scoring high on the exam.

Takeaways

• 😀 Make sure to watch previous lessons on introduction and development for a complete understanding of how to write an ideal ENEM essay.
• 😀 The conclusion of an essay should begin with a connector or transition word (e.g., 'therefore', 'thus') to signal the end of the argument.
• 😀 The conclusion must include a proposal for intervention, which is not about solving the problem but suggesting an intervention within the presented issue.
• 😀 Ensure that you include at least one connector in the conclusion and at least two connectors in the entire text.
• 😀 The conclusion's topic sentence should summarize the content of the paragraph and could refer back to the thesis or main points made earlier in the essay.
• 😀 A complete proposal of intervention includes five elements: action, agent, mode, means, and effect. These must be detailed clearly in the conclusion.
• 😀 The agent of intervention (e.g., the government, health ministry) should be clearly stated and detailed in the proposal.
• 😀 The 'mode' refers to how the action will be carried out, often using connectors like 'by means of' to indicate the method.
• 😀 The effect of the proposed intervention should describe the desired societal impact or change that the proposal aims to achieve.
• 😀 A well-rounded intervention proposal integrates both an action and an agent, and it doesn’t need to propose multiple separate actions. A single, well-developed proposal can score highly.
• 😀 At the end of the conclusion, always finish with a closing reflection that ties back to the essay's introduction and finalizes the message. This is key to achieving a strong ending.

Q & A

What is the main focus of this video script?

The video script primarily focuses on how to write the perfect conclusion for an ENEM (Exame Nacional do Ensino Médio) essay, particularly on structuring the final paragraph, including the proposal for intervention and finalizing the text.

Why is it important to include a proposal for intervention in the conclusion of an ENEM essay?

Including a proposal for intervention is important because it demonstrates your ability to provide solutions or interventions for the problem discussed in the essay, which is a key requirement for achieving a high score in the ENEM writing section.

What is the difference between a 'proposta de intervenção' (proposal for intervention) and a 'proposta de solução' (solution proposal)?

A 'proposta de intervenção' focuses on suggesting ways to intervene or take action on the issue, rather than solving the problem entirely. It is about suggesting changes or actions to address the problem at hand, not necessarily solving it completely.

What are some common connectors to start a conclusion paragraph in an ENEM essay?

Common connectors include words like 'therefore', 'thus', and 'in conclusion', which signal to the reader that the essay is coming to a close.

What is a 'tópico frasal' (topic sentence) in the context of an ENEM essay conclusion?

The 'tópico frasal' in the conclusion is a sentence that summarizes the main point or purpose of the paragraph. It serves to guide the reader on what the conclusion will address, often reiterating the thesis or main argument from the introduction.

What five elements should be included in the proposal for intervention in the conclusion?

The five elements that should be included are: 1) Action, 2) Agent, 3) Mode/Means, 4) Effect, and 5) Detail.

What is the significance of detailing the 'Agent' in the proposal for intervention?

Detailing the 'Agent' is crucial because it clarifies who or what will be responsible for implementing the proposed action, such as a government agency, organization, or other relevant entities.

How should the 'Mode/Means' be described in the proposal for intervention?

The 'Mode/Means' should describe how the proposed action will be carried out, often using connectors like 'by means of' or 'through' to clearly explain the method or process of intervention.

What is the purpose of including a 'Detail' in the proposal for intervention?

The 'Detail' serves to further elaborate on any of the previous elements (Action, Agent, Mode/Means, or Effect), providing additional clarity or examples that help complete the proposal and demonstrate how the intervention will work.

What does the professor recommend regarding the number of proposals for intervention in an ENEM essay conclusion?

The professor recommends that you don't need to include multiple proposals for intervention. Instead, focus on one well-developed proposal that covers all five essential elements (Action, Agent, Mode/Means, Effect, and Detail).