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Summary

In this video, the speaker discusses essential tips for writing essays for the iPhone exam. He clarifies the common misconception between different essay formats, focusing on the argumentative essay as the most common model. The speaker emphasizes the importance of practicing writing regularly and seeking professional feedback, as well as the value of understanding the essay’s theme. He advises against overcomplicating vocabulary and stresses the need for a clear and concise writing style. Additionally, he shares his personal experience of improving his own writing by writing multiple essays each week.

Takeaways

• 😀 Check the official exam guidelines (edital) for specific writing requirements like argumentative essays or letters.
• 😀 Argumentative essays typically involve presenting a problem, discussing it, and offering a solution, while letters are addressed to specific recipients.
• 😀 The most common essay format in recent years has been the argumentative essay, not the letter format.
• 😀 Ensure your essay has cohesion (flow of ideas) and coherence (clarity of expression). Keep sentences concise and avoid being overly complex.
• 😀 iPhone exam topics may be more subjective than those of other exams like Enem, requiring deeper interpretation and analysis.
• 😀 Don't overcomplicate your vocabulary; focus on writing clear, well-structured arguments instead of using complex language.
• 😀 Writing regularly (at least two essays per week) will help you improve your writing skills and build your confidence.
• 😀 Seek feedback from a teacher or tutor to identify weaknesses in your writing and improve your performance.
• 😀 Use online services or teachers who offer corrections and personalized feedback to enhance your writing further.
• 😀 Focus on creating a 'writing skeleton'—a repeatable structure for your essays that ensures consistency and covers all necessary points.
• 😀 The key to a successful essay is to write a good, clear, and well-structured piece, not to reinvent your approach or try to be overly creative.

Q & A

What are the two main types of essays mentioned in the script for the iPhone exam?

The two main types of essays mentioned are the 'argumentative letter' and the 'argumentative essay' (dissertative argumentativa). The letter essay is less commonly used in recent years, while the argumentative essay is more frequent.

How is an argumentative essay different from an argumentative letter?

In an argumentative essay, the writer discusses a problem and offers a solution without addressing anyone directly. In contrast, an argumentative letter is addressed to a specific person or organization, such as a government official or an NGO.

What is the most important factor for writing a successful argumentative essay, according to the speaker?

The most important factor is writing within the required structure for an argumentative essay, ensuring good cohesion and coherence, avoiding verbosity, and demonstrating knowledge while offering solutions to the problem presented.

Why does the speaker suggest not adapting to the specific requirements of a particular exam format?

The speaker advises against this because the focus should be on writing a solid essay that meets the general requirements of a well-structured argumentative essay. As long as your text works well within these standards, there's no need to reinvent your writing for every different exam.

What does the speaker recommend for those who have little practice with writing essays?

The speaker recommends writing at least two essays per week and, if possible, getting individualized feedback from a teacher who can point out errors and help improve writing skills.

How does the speaker compare essay writing to subjects like math or physics?

Unlike subjects like math or physics, where there is a clear right or wrong answer, writing essays is more subjective, with different people having different writing styles and challenges. A teacher's feedback is crucial to improving, as it provides personalized guidance.

What alternative options are available for getting feedback if a teacher is not accessible in person?

If in-person feedback is not possible, the speaker suggests using online platforms where teachers review essays, provide corrections, and offer detailed feedback through videos.

What does the speaker think about reading as a way to improve writing skills?

While reading can expand vocabulary, the speaker believes that practicing writing is more effective for improving essay skills. It’s better to write regularly rather than relying solely on reading to improve.

How does the speaker feel about creating a standard structure for essays?

The speaker encourages creating a standard structure or template for essays that works, even if it feels repetitive. The goal is to ensure that the essay is effective and can guarantee a good grade, so consistency in the approach is key.

What advice does the speaker give regarding perfectionism in essay writing?

The speaker advises focusing on writing a good essay rather than obsessing over constantly changing or perfecting the structure. Once you find a structure that works, it’s important to stick with it to maximize efficiency and success.